Which i will post as soon as i get another reply.
(Wat did u guys think of my song? (you better appreciate it, i spent ages on that!!!) Well anyway, almost everything's ready, even the trailer for the next story (that's right, a trailer!), all i need is one more reply and i will have finished with this story for all eternity at least until i decide to edit the whole thing. so L8R DUDES! |
This is a quick reply, so get on with it NOW, please :D
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okay, now it is time to finish the first story, GO SPLAT, post it now
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Really? Are you sure? Cause if you want i could wait like another month or so?
Just kiddin, don't be so impatient though, i was on holiday all last week. But enough of this, i now present you with the epilogue and the all powerful... TRAILER!!!!!! Epilogue So Splat was allowed back into the village, Munch (eventually) admitted to making the whole “psychopathic monster” up. He also admitted to putting the whole village through the torture of the talent show so he could prove that Splat (who he’d been meeting with in the forest) wasn’t cannibalistic. Abe got back to his mudokon-saving (cause, he now had 2 people to follow him around when the risk of painful death wasn’t too high). And the Regurgitation Roomies got a recording deal till their manager realised they only knew one song. And so, life in the village returned to how it had never been before cause they’d never had a scrabaramitoken in the village before but apart from that it was the same as it was before! But meanwhile, many miles northward, a pair of sligs bunged a prisoner back into its cage. “And don’t try and escape again,” One of the sligs told the luckless mudokon as he slammed the door. Once they were a few paces down the corridor he turned to his friend and said, angrily, “Odd, she is such a pain!” “Don’t worry Galk,” His partner told him, “Just remember, 2 more weeks and she’s gone!” The pair walked down the corridor away from a solitary figure crouched head down in the back of an unusually clean cell… THE MIDDLE!!! And i would just like to say thanks to all my fans and everyone else who has ever read this story, but especially, THE RED MUSE (been behind me sinse the beginning waving that flag), SEARGENT BIG (dude! That's all i have to say), AL THE VYKKER (glad to know you have confidence in one of your humble worshippers), NATIVE POSER (gone but not forgotten), T-NEX (you is mad dude!) AND FLAMER THE RED (supporting me backstage)! And cause i know you're all dying from suspense, i give you... the great... the worshipped... the ALL POWERFUL TRAILER OF THE SEQUEL OR SEQUAL OR HOWEVER YOU'RE MEANT TO SPELL IT!!!!! (and anyone who says I-T will die) Trailer to the sequel The screen is black. Then words slowly appear on the screen: THEY THOUGHT IT WAS OVER. The words fade and are replaced with: THEY WERE WRONG. The words fade and the screen remains black for a few seconds then the silence is suddenly broken buy a roll of thunder and the sound of rain. There is a flash of lightning across the screen, which fades to a cut of a stormy nighttime sky. A random voice says: “This is a turning point for the future of your species!” Quiet action music begins in the background. The thunder and rain continue. Words appear again: COMING SOON(ER OR LATER)… Abe’s voice: “There are a lot of mudokons out there: a little more appreciation and a little less attention would be nice.” Words: THE EXITING SEQUEL TO SPLAT! Munch: “150 baby gabbits screaming for attention take up a lot of your day.” Words: WHEN THE PAST, THE PRESENT AND THE FUTURE COLLIDE: Alf: “Stocks are low and so are customers: never thought I’d say this but Munch was right!” Words: NO ONE IS PREPARED! Music stops suddenly, leaving just the sound of the rain. Splat’s face seems to half appear in front of the stormy scene as you hear his words. Splat: “Do you know what it’s like to be tied up and forced to watch as your best friend is murdered?” There is a flash of loud thunder and lightning, both fade to leave silence and a black screen again. Slowly, three letters appear on the screen for a second before fading to blackness again: AMY see ya guys, post your opinions of the whole story and i may post the edited version at some point! |
Here is a nice( if I may say myself :P)"Word" of the great story made by splat.
It took me some time, but it is now finished (thanks to the quick reply for the last things splat :P) So, especially for the new ones, who haven't read this great story, take the Word document, to experience it in a much better way :D. I hope you like it splat. EDIT: OOPS, did something wrong (see next post) to download the right one, see my next post ;) |
Er... erwinraaben55, it's a good thought and all, but... um... this story isn't The Oddworld Story, it's Splat.
Just a touch of revision and I can have this story treasured on the computer for the admiration of all. ;) |
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DAMMIT, you are right. I had my thoughts, but I thought, well, thought nothing after that, hehe. I had interpretated (or how you call that :P) the first 2 sentences of this topic wrong,I think :p Well, let me change it emediately. |
Whoa, thats great! I'll have to send you the edited version so you can do that one up.
If/when i post it I'll try to make sure to get on the itallics and bold and so on. The problem with the forums is that you can't indent paragraphs or align up text: a lot of the stuff i wrote at home includes centred text. Oh well, it's great anyway, i love your presentation. What did you think of the ending searge? (Oh, and erwinraaben, if you're interested i do have another story called the oddworld story if you bother to search for it. I wrote (and finished) it ages ago and i don't think its great myself (see? I'm pputting myself down already-the mark of a true writer!!! :D ) but you can see what you think. Don't feel obliged to make up a presentation copy of that as well) |
I think the ending was highly suitible. I liked the one about the Regurgitation Roomies, heh. :)
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UUH wow! I only had time to write now, since i was on holyday in two weeks and my net has problems... But congrats you did a great job, and i'm just dieyng to read the sequal.... WEE FOR SPLAT!
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How was ur holiday?
YAY!!! I'M BEING LOVED BY ALL MY FANS EXCEPT FOR CERTAIN PEOPLE THAT I WON'T NAME MUSEY!!!!! |
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Just put the zip file here, and I will make it look great, I hope :fuzconf: |
Great story, and thanks to erwinraaben55 for the zip file!
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Bumping three and a half year old threads is badlulz, RTFM!
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