I love my little "I saved the day, now I'm gone" attitude. I've only got, what, two lines?
Either way, good book/novel/novella.
I'll need to get back on my book pretty soon...

Wow, dude, for a second there I thought I was actually dead in the story. Clever ending. Can't wait for the third! :D

Heh, thank yourself lucky. I didn't get a mention. :p

Awesome last chapter, I can't wait for number 3. You've done anazing on this chapter, great job Mitsur. ;)

Awesome Chapter! And I totally kicked your butt Nemo, I got three lines.
See? three.

Maybe they should've checked the broom closet... no! Not like that! Maybe Alcar was in there the entire time. ;)

Still an awesome end to an awesome story! I wanna read the next one!

Awesome ending, good cliffhanger at the end!
I think it would have been cool to have spent mroe time after your 'death'. I have nothing against you, just that killing off a main character is a great plot device, and its good to see how the others struggle to cope without him/her.
Bust sill, very good.
YAY, I got to play a big role!!!

What a dramatic ending! Just like a real...movie or summat. Excellent work, I can't wait for 3! :beer:

Wait... I died? I died?!! WTF I DIED?!!!!

And I didn't? Getting shot is my thing! How dare Havoc usurp my purpose?

Nah, the ending wasn't bad. At least, no-one died, did they? And I reckon I could count my parts on the fingers on one hand, eh? Great! Heh, and it was funny. All those tense moments properly underlined, and stuff.

I DIED!!! I DIED I TELL YOU!!

But you were alive again at the end :p.

Phew, what a cliffhanger! And what an ending! Excellent final chapter mitsur, and neat twist. I'm intrigued by the 'figure watching above' though. It's another cliffhanger, only this one is unanswered. And woooo, I got a brief cameo with 1 line (a Back to the Future reference too, and I love those films so even better 8)), and a grief scene mention! Yeah!

Bring on number 3! I can't wait. :)

Woo.

Remember, next time I'm a Transformer. Remember.

WHOOOO! *jumps back in shock, and grips head dramaticly* Crap! You did the worst -Woo! g0 m157orz!- thing you could do! You've found the right combination to -m1570rz 570r1z r0kkz0rz!- unlock the fandom switch in my -WooHoo!!!!- brain! Now i'm compelled to -1337 i5 teh uber m1570rz!- make all sorts of fan crap! I think I'll start my sprite comic now... WHOOOO! *twitches several times before head pops off again*
*picks up head* Nope, bad idea. But my fandom switch will probably think of something ridiculous. It'll calm down enough for me to -WHOOOOOO!- speak normally in time.

Hahaha!
Havoc died.
I didn't.
Go me.

Did you all forget I did too!?

I friggin' killed myself! You guys were just innocent fictional characters!

+20 awesome points for killing myself in a fake story.

But you brought yourself back.

You should have pulled a Mary Alice in part 3...

I died too but mine was all cliché and romantic and crap. I'm so disappointed. :p Love it~!!

BTW yes! MCR are awesome. :p You're welcome, I'm not sure what for but you're very welcome.

- Rexy

Munch's Master want Untold Legend RPG.
Munch's Master want Untold Legend RPG NOW.
Seriously, is it ever going to actually happen? Anyone? I know we kind of live the RP anyway but, not in the magicky superpowered everybody-under-1-roof way like in these fics.

If you want it so badly make it! All we'll need then is some action figures and a film and the untold legend franchise will be complete!

Awesome ending bud, I'm still catching up but I couldnt resist reading the last few chapters first! :) I'm also happy I got included again and had some fun moments. :)