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T-nex 12-12-2004 11:32 AM

Razer: "Yeah yeah. Whatver."

He sent an angry glance at Nick.

Razer to #7 slig: "So i'll just have to sit here and watch the cams? Sounds good."

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Anni: "Umm... ok.. i see that you don't like pink. Oh! What about red? That would make it all so beautyful."

She found some paint and a brush, and smiled.

Anni: "Ok, where should we start? Oh! There's a nice spot."

She ran over to a boring wall, and started painting.

Dean: "Anni! What are you doing!!!!??? Stop it!"

Anni: "Nah, This place needs something new."

Dean: "NO! umm... Don't you think the other's woul get mad?"

Anni: "No."

Dean rolled his eyes helplessly. Anni kept painting on the wall.

----

Razer spotted Anni at the Security camera.

Razer: "What the hell is that mudokon doing????!!!!"

Havoc 12-12-2004 11:50 AM

Nick gave Razer a dirty look, then turned to #7.

Nick: Lets step outside for a minute... this is confidential for now.

They stepped out the office and Nick closed the door behind them. The corridor was abandonned for now, so they could have a trusted talk. Math was standing at gun point of Nick as Nick did his story.

Nick: This is Math. I brought him here from Vykers Labs. Its not Abe... though Razer was close.

Nick kept silent for the effect.

Nick: Its his brother. Im keeping this confidential becouse I know everyone would probably react as that freak in there...

He made a head move to the security office and to Razer who was working inside.

T-nex 12-12-2004 12:17 PM

Razer looked at the cameraas he watchied Anni painting the red flowers on the wall:

Razer: "How can she just do that???"

He went outside, and heard Nicks last words.

'react as that freak in there'

Razer: "Wow, what freak? anyway i don't have time for you r little things. Someone is painting red flowers on the damn wall. Shouldn't you stop her??? Arhm forget it."

Then he ran away in a direction. But stopped after a minute.

Razer: "Damn this is embarrising. I don't even know where i am..."

Then he heard voices, from the cafeteria just beside of him.

Razer: "Oh..."

Anni saw Razer.

Anni: "Uuh, who's that?"

Razer saw Anni too.

Razer: "WHAT ARE YOU DOING YOU STUPID MUD??!?!? Goi to wokl or i shall beat you up like the filthy mud you are."

Dean: "Uh oh... This is gonna be bad. If he continues like that, she'll evantually drive him crazy."

Anni: "Why hello there. Don't scream. I'm not screaming. Well, as you can see, i'm painting red flowers on the wall, to make it all look nicer. It's really boring here."

Razer couldn't believe his own ears. He had the urge to beat her up, but he knew he wasn't allowed.

Razer: "CLEAN THAT UP NOW!"

He pushed her into the wall, and she got some undry paint of her. Now it was her turn to get mad.

Anni: "WHY DID YOU RUIN MY FLOWER? STUPID SLIG!"

She took the bucket with paint, and threw it on Razer.Dean couldn't stop himself from bursting into a laugh. Razer began to scream.

Razer: "WHAT is wrong with you!!!?"

Then he walked away all covered in painting, and to over to the security office.
where Nick and #7 slig were.
Razer: "Those Mudokons are stupid, weird and deserve a beating. I think i prefer to work inside the security room, where i don't have to be with them."
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Kix went over to the cafeteria and saw Anni with some red paint on her.

Kix: "What happened to you?"

Anni: "Nah, it just this new slig who thought that he could ruin my flower. Well, it was a flower untill he came and ruined... Which means that he DID ruin my flower. HEY! The stupid slig ruined my flower."

Havoc 12-12-2004 01:25 PM

(OOC: LMAO!)

Nick was still talking to #7 outside the security office when he saw Razer come back. He had trouble supressing a smile.
As he walked in, muttering and grumphy, Nick grinned at him.

Nick: Just don't get any paint on my chair ok? :P

Sheriff-Murder 12-13-2004 02:30 AM

Char
 
i wanna make a character.
Name: Ixon
Race: scrab
Age: 5

T-nex 12-13-2004 03:19 AM

(OOC: Sheriff, It's nice to have a new character :) Welcome. I would also recomend that you post a little more information about your scrab. Post a little about his personality.)

The Red Muse 12-13-2004 03:48 AM

Dominius was hiding beneath a walking ramp near the cafeteria. He could hear everything that the people passing by would speak of. None of the talked about his sister.
Dominius was getting frustrated-- he was confident that his sister was here.
He grunted and climbed to the ramp and quickly ran away from the light, he turned to the corridor that leads to the security office.

Dominius: "Shit!!"

As soon as he spotted Rick, Razer and all the other dudes in front ogf the office. He pressed agains the wall, trying to get out of view.

Dominius: " Good-f*cking-Odd! I'll mutilate myself if thoe goons saw me. I gotta find my sis as soon as possible and get the hell outta here..."

Dominius slowly started to sneak further away from the (ooc:uhm...erm... *memory loss*) dudes :p, the suddenly Jammer's voice boomed from the intercom.

Jammer: "Yo! Get your asses up and scoutin'! We've got an intruder! I f*cking repeat; We've got an intruder! This guy's armed and dangerous! I mean, hell, he got me by surprise, can you believe that!" *snorting and grumbling* " So basically we're looking for a mudokon. With a spoocebow. Jammer out!"

Dominius: "Oh shit!!""

...tbc...

Rincewynd 12-13-2004 07:55 AM

Rincewynd heard the intercom and rose to his feet
Rincewynd:"Woah! I'm awake, I'm awake! Hey where is everyone, Oh right a mud, urmm....how to find a mud.......here boy, come to rincey"
Rincewynd began to 'scout' to the cafeteria

As he 'scouted' he accidently slipped on some kind of drink and smacked his head on the floor, knocking him clean out (not dead but asleep)

T-nex 12-13-2004 09:56 AM

When Anni heard heard the message, she started laughing.

Anni: "LOL! Are the looking for a silly Mudokon? They shouldn't expect OUR help... Maybe the Sligs, but not us... Uuuh, i might find and help this guy."

Kix: "Umm... Ookay..."

Then Anni left, to look for the Mudokon.

Dean: "Anni always has these crazy ideas."

Kix: "Umm... right..."

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Anni walked past the seccurity office where she saw Nick and #7 slig. When went past them, as unnoticed as possible. Then looked around to see if she could see any unfamiliar Mudokon. Then she saw lonely Freak, sitting down and doing nothing.

Anni: "Oh poor guy, are you here left all alone??"

Freak sqeaked. Then Anni took him up.

Anni: "Oh! You could help me find the mudokon, can you smell your way to him?"

Freak looked confused at her.

Anni: "Well, you could lead me to any unfamilar smell."

Then she put him down, and freak started to smell around. Then he started to walk.

Anni: "That's my boy!"

Sheriff-Murder 12-13-2004 11:08 AM

Ixon`s personality: well... what can i say he`s WILD!But when he`s calmed down he`s quite gentle.
almost forgot gender: Male


(do anybody know what the females look like in oddworld?)

Super moose 12-13-2004 11:26 AM

Ralph to Dean (after message): "Heh, what's going on here? What you think? Let's go find that Mud, before security. I'm sure He need our help, and he's not our enemy. Come on, let's go Dean!"

Havoc 12-13-2004 11:32 AM

Nick hit the intercom when Jammer bursted out.

Nick: Hey Jammer! Whats up mate, teached your lesson then?

He quikely turned the intercom off knowing Jammers most likely respons. Then he looked inside the security office, tapping on the window to alert Razer.

Nick: You heard him! Do your job and find the guy.

Math just stood there waiting what to happan.

Sheriff-Murder 12-13-2004 11:37 AM

Name: Ixon
Race: scrab
Age: 5
Personality: well... what can i say he`s WILD!But when he`s calmed down he`s quite gentle.
gender: Male

T-nex 12-13-2004 11:47 AM

(OOC: Umm... I think a female scrab looks just like a male scrab.)

Razer: "Yeah, whatever. I'll find that stupid Mudokon, and then i'll shoot him."

The he ran off.

-----

Anni and Freak walked past the corridors, not seeing anything.

Anni: "Haven't you sensed anything?"

Freak barked. But then he quickly lifted his head, and snarled.

Anni: "Well?"

He gave a small bark, and started to run in a direction.

Anni: "Does that mean you've sensed him?"

Freak let out a bark. He ran towards a corner, where anni though she might have seen a shape.

Anni: "MAybe thats him."
-------

Dean to Ralph: "Nah, i think that if we are too many, we'll attract too much attention."

Sheriff-Murder 12-13-2004 11:51 AM

(has my scrab joined the rpg then?)(sorry this isnt rpg talk)

T-nex 12-13-2004 11:56 AM

(OOC: Yes... NOw you can start posting :))

Sheriff-Murder 12-13-2004 12:10 PM

While the others where searching for a mud inside.
A scrab is walking slowly outside, looking for someone else.
He had just escaped the kennel right before abe blew it up. Hes name...Ixon.
Suddenly he saw something moving behind the bushes.
He walked slowly closer...
suddenly it ran way...it was just a paramite.
But unexpected he was cought in a net and hit unconcius.
Much later he woke up in a cage inside the building.
Where was he?
What would happen next?
It still hurts in his head from the hit.( i think he well get a scar)

Sheriff-Murder 12-13-2004 01:49 PM

(OOC: Sorry for my bad english)

Havoc 12-13-2004 03:30 PM

(OOC: Its ok dude, I know ppl in this RPG who are a lot worse... *cough*)

Sheriff-Murder 12-14-2004 09:39 AM

(OOC: why arent anybody posting anything?)

Super moose 12-14-2004 10:05 AM

(occ: Thank You Havoc :goof: )

Ralph: ".... Um.. Yea, if you want, leave it be. "

Ralph went away. He thought Dean is little busy at the moment.

Ralph think: "Heh.. No one has got time for me.. I just start working."

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(New Char. )

Name: Dosen't remember. Wants to call him Ethel.
Species: Slig
Gender: Male
Backstory: When he was baby, glukkons killed his parents. He is glukkons alumnus. He was taken to Ruptree as a young slig. He doesn't remember his childhood. Now he's working alone in Stocky Yard, and he doesn't like company.

Ethel was standing on guard in Stocky Yard, the same as every night. He like that climat, stars, moons, shadows, bats... And every night he was trying to back up memory, but that was inefficacious.

Sheriff-Murder 12-15-2004 12:47 AM

____
(Ixons turn to do something)

No one was looking.
Ixomn had his chance, he broke up his cage.
it was quite easy it was ment for a mud.
He ran away. run out, and past the stocky yard.
( i dont hope the slig, Ethel that was guarding the stocky yard saw him...

The Red Muse 12-15-2004 01:06 AM

Dominius let out a loud gasp when the slog noticed him.
He quietly tried to circle behind Anni and Freak.

Dominius: "I could take them both out easily, but I really don't want to hurt the girl.But if I let her see me, she'll surely alarm the security and then I'm in deep shit..."

As he kept his eyes closely on Anni, he forgot to mind his step-- knocking over a bucket full of dirty water.

Dominius: " Hoooly mother of---!"

There they were--- both the slog and the mudokon girl staring at him.

Dominius: "Eh....Look, girl, whatever you do...don't scream, move or do anything that might bring the security here! ...please?"


Meanwhile Jammer was searching the cafeteria for Dominius. He was tossing the tables over and sending the chairs flying--

RM: ".... Hey!"

Jammer stopped and looked at RM, who was standing at the doorway.

Jammer: "Whaddaya want!?"

RM: " Hey, calm down... Those tables never hurt you....--"

Jammer: " How can you know!? These here tables have caused me a whole lot of pain, mind you!"

RM: "Erm...?"

Jammer: "They-are-too-damn-small!! Do you know what small tables and shitty chairs do to your back?"

RM: "...uhm...?"

Jammer: "They make your back sore as hell. H-E-L-L! So there, now that I have given you a good reason to toss these tables to oblivion, you can piss off."

RM:" Actually, I just came here to talk."

Jammer: " Well, I'm not in the mood for petty chit-chat. And---hey!! Where the hell is your gun? There is an intruder in the factory, who just happens to be armed and dangerous, and you're prancing around like nothing's going on---without your gun?! Are you mental or just stupid? Or maybe both?""

RM: " You know I don't like guns."

Jammer: "That's an old and a lame excuse, Muse. Make up a better one, will ya?"

RM: ".....whatever..."

Jammer: " My point exactly."


...tbc...

T-nex 12-15-2004 01:25 AM

Anni: "UUh, there he is."

She took a closer glance, she saw his tattoos ans stuff.


Anni's thoughts: "He's definatly a native."

Anni: "Hey! You native! Oh, don't worry. Me and Freak here just whent to look for you so that we could help you. Why would i even help the sligs? But i was just wondering. Why are you here? Why would ANYONE come here?"

Freak came close to Dominius and smelled him. Then he licked his hand.

Super moose 12-15-2004 06:57 AM

... Then Ethel hear something. He quickly turned around.

Ethel: "Hugh?! What was that?"

He hear that sound again. He was well trained, and he find out what ws that. Ethel quickly run after it, shouting, and shooting to darkness.

Ethel: "It's a Scrab escaped!!! Don't let him run away!!!"

Sheriff-Murder 12-15-2004 07:46 AM

The Alarm Bursted out!
Sligs of all kinds were looking.
of course!
they dont want anybody killed!

Now it would be a great oppurtunity( sorry for my bad english)
For anni to help the native mud

Sheriff-Murder 12-15-2004 07:56 AM

Ixon tried to run.
But becouse that he has a very short temper he got mad really mad.
He quickly turned around and started howling for his pack of scrabs, since he got outside it shouldnt be too hard.
he may have a short temper but he is`nt dumb!

dripik 12-15-2004 09:57 AM

ooc: Sorry, I was quite busy this week, I didn't come too often, but I'm here now. Welcome, Sheriff-Murder. Please don't double-post OK. If you missed something or have new ideas, edit your post until somebody else replies. Thank you.


#7 Slig: "Brother of Abe..."

*amazed*

#7 Slig: "He may not be Abe, but he can still do bad stuff in here. Tell me more about him. Why was he at Vykkers Labs?"




*Rick returns to his work after watching the outcome of Razer vs. Anni fight*

Rick: "Another psycho Slig. But Anni really showed him. That will calm him down. Or make him more angry."

T-nex 12-15-2004 10:10 AM

(OOC: YAY! Dripik posted :D)

Dean to Rick: "Well, Anni has a special ability of driving sligs nuts. You should have seen the last place where we wokoed. Sligs actually feared her..."

Javi was still outside the stockyard, as he saw Ralph and the scrab fighting. He decided not to take part of it, but whent inside to the cafeteria.

Javi: "Hello Dean."

Dean: "Hi!"

Javi: "So, what now? Where's Anni?"'

Dean: "She ran off, looking for the Mudokon-intruder."

Rincewynd 12-15-2004 10:24 AM

*Rincewynd woke up and looked around*
Rincewynd:"where is everyone?"
*Rincewynd began to walk around, soon he came past Dominus*
Rincewynd:"Hi there mr mud"
*rincewynd stopped and backstepped*
*He startde to think*
Rincewynd:"Want some moolah? All you have to do is trash that Expert's room, oh and get me something from the cafeteria, nothing chewy, I had a bad incident last time"
*Rincewynd shivers and walks off*

Sheriff-Murder 12-15-2004 10:24 AM

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Finaly! The other scrabs in Ixon`s group arrived!
With 5-7 Scrabs walking slowly closer to the slig. i wonder what the slig will do?

T-nex 12-15-2004 10:46 AM

(OOC: Umm... Seriff, i just wanna remind you. Your starting to take control of the RPGn and others characters, which is not allowed. You should be less contrling. And by the way, how can a scrab get inside rupture farms? They can't climb walls...)

Sheriff-Murder 12-15-2004 12:07 PM

(OOC:Sorry, i didnt meant to...he ran in back door by the stockyard..im really sorry...)

dripik 12-16-2004 05:07 AM

ooc: Yeah, T-nex is right. A couple of Scrabs can't just get in to Rupture Farms. It would be a bit action-packed to get out of that situation. :D
You can edit it if you have another idea.



Arnie: "Well, we should start planning on the security towers."

Otto: "Yeah, that will not do harm. It will be finished sooner."




Rick: "That's good. At least she can gain control on some Sligs. But still, she must be careful."

Sheriff-Murder 12-16-2004 06:56 AM

OOC:Sorry for this post it was and accident

Sheriff-Murder 12-16-2004 06:59 AM

(new char)
Name: Sligslog
Race: slig
peronal info: He LOVES explosives, but all the explosions has destroyed most of his braincells, making him very dumb! Nobody knows how but in a strange way he can talk the scrabs languege. did i say he love explosives?

Super moose 12-16-2004 07:13 AM

Ethel saw a group of scrabs.

Ethel: "Damn, no one helped me."

He quickly took his cell phone radio, and call for help

Ethel to cell phone: "May day! I need reinforcements in sector 3 coma 6 Stocky Yard, a group of scrabs is attacking!!! I repeat! Reinforcements to sector 3,6 in Stocky Yard!! AND GET HURRY!!"

Ethel was holding defence as long as he can. But no one comes..

Ethel: "If no one come, these scrabs rip me up!"

Havoc 12-16-2004 07:19 AM

Nick was still standing with #7 in the hallway. He had a look around to make sure no one was around.

Nick: The Magog Cartel orderd me to trow him in jail at Vykers Labs as soon as Abe shut down Rupture Farms. He's been there two years, but since we havn't heard from Abe in a while now, so I figured, it might be save to get him to work again...

Math still didn't say a word, he just looked at both sligs in fear.

Sheriff-Murder 12-17-2004 12:14 AM

Suddenly the scrabs heard something..
and ran away.
in the distance you could hear thousands of thousands of paramites screaming and howling... they were coming quickly closer.
-----------------------------------------------------------
Sligslog got a new job inside the rupture farms.
He was a ....washer...
while he was washing he saw a box with explosives, hehehe and he LOVES explosives.
Sligslog: this is gonna be fun!
He lightened one of the dynemites and ran away...
then KABOOM!!!
he blew away a wall..
Sligslog: oops first day of job and this happens...(he thinks about it)
I wasnt here!
it seems that the wall he blew was right behind the stockyard
so npow everybody could get inside.
so what about the paramites that where coming?

T-nex 12-17-2004 02:28 AM

(OOC: Sheriff, i'm sorry to say it, But you start to annoy the hell out of me. You're taking completely control of the RPG. No, there didn't come thousands of paramites, and no, Sligslog didn't blow up the wall. You make all this to start sounding like your character are some kind of main-character hero-thingy. Stop! just stop taking control of the RPG and take it more easy. All of us has to be here not just you...)