Well, the unmasked slig looks great anyway, but maybe drawing it with mask and then unmask him can help you :fuzconf:
Well, you can do vectors in Photoshop (drawing tool) but it is not good. I use Adobe Illustrator for vectors. It's complicated, but it's the same thing as Photoshop: just learn it :) I think it can look like this. |
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and you are right with the Slig, that might help, and thanx I'll see what I can do to get this program :pipe:...or is it for free? :D |
I don't like why but I like that rasterized vector (Ubuntu's one). It's simply and sucessful, and when I saw your drawing that image arrived to my mind.
Is there a way to talk with you in private? PMs are blocked.. |
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OK this isn't a drawing, it's something I was writing I'll never stop writing stories :hungry: and still I said that I wont write anymore x( so here is: The reason why I don’t write anymore, (enjoy:)): Uhm.. yeah there are swearwords and stuff in this story… and it's a bit illogical :p _this is just a first draft (sorry for my english and the grammar mistakes and stuff like that)_ Prologue: The last murder ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A buzzing sound neared. Metal feet slipped uneasily on the wet floor and came abruptly to a halt. The icy rain was dripping from the Sligs mask as he hammered frantically against the window, bespattering everything with blood that was running down his arms. “What do you want, Shmuck?!” The other Slig yelled irritated and opened the rusty window, which creaked as if it could fall apart every next moment. Splints breath filled the air like a little white cloud as he finally explained: “Hurry call the Vykker! Someone got shot, if you don’t hurry and call him he’s gonna die!” “Hehehehe! Beats me.” –the other one replied mockingly “…Hell how many times we’ve told you to not use guns cuz ya can’t handle them Splint! Now go and call the Vykker yourself, I don’t care if you have shot someone hehehehe. But you have to go somewhere else, you can’t use our phone now…” Splint needed a few seconds to reply to this: “Liar, the phone is right behind you! And it wasn’t me you bloody bastard! –I don’t shot my best friend! Give me the damn phone!” Desperately he tried to climb in but the Slig threw him out again and slammed shut the old window. Splint landed hard on the cold floor but jumped up again in rage, clenching his fists. “You can find him at the other end of the SSM (southern sawmills) I suppose you know where that is dimwit?!” Splint thought of walking in and smashing the other ones head through the window and taking the phone while he was unconscious, but instead he stood up and ran down the road. … The only sound that could be heard was the buzzing of Splints pants and the pattering of the rain while he ran back as fast as his mechanical legs could carry him. Soon he reached the place where he has left his friend. Scar was lying on his back. Blood was coloring the water around him in a deep red. His whole body was overflowed with blood. Splint staggered nearer in shock and sank down on his knees, pressing his hands firmly on the wound in Scars chest. “Scar…?” Panic rose in him while he tried to think about how he could help him. “Scar… hold on… help will soon..” but he lost his voice before he had finished the sentence. He had an idea but it was very risky and the more he thought of it the more he realized that it was his only chance to safe Scars life. He had to carry him the whole way. Slowly he stood up, wiping the rain from his visors to see a little better (his tears blurred his vision anyway) then he lifted his friends limp body up and started to run. ~…later in the night, the stars are glittering high above the lab. Splint is at the outside…~ Splint was still sitting on the ground, a cigarette in his shaky hands, sunken in thought, when Slate put his hand on Splints shoulder and slumped down the wall next to him. “I’m sorry…If we just…” Suddenly somebody was yelling and they heard the sound of wood breaking into pieces, then Jet marched out and threw something away in the darkness, it was a silvery lighter. Splint couldn't see where it landed. “I wanted to return him the damn thing, I don’t need it anyways!” Jet cried hoarsely kicking and boxing the wall. “Shut it!” A BB Slig with a little red Slig on his shoulder appeared behind him. The BB Slig moved his hands quickly and Dozer, the little red Slig on his shoulder, translated his sign language: “Mimicry, wants you to shut up, he says he can’t bear your permanent outbursts, and me by the way too, it sucks to always be with you, all the time you-“ Slate suddenly stood up. “You bastard” They fell silent and stared at him. “Ramón…you bloody bastard, I know it was you!“ ... every time when I read it again i correct so much that i totally mess it up. I wan't constructive criticism :fuzwink: thanx for reading ...and for the sake of good stories please tell me if it was boring! I won't continue this thats why I havent made an own thread for it... |
As I said before, I like this. It's interesting, mysterious and I want to read more. But I still can't think of any critisism. *is rubbish at helping people*
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thank you :D
and it doesn't matter *is rubbish at helping people too* x3 |
long time no see! :D (Happy new Year btw)
well do you like the way I draw Sligs? Or should I change my style? here are some sketches of unmasked Sligs and they aren't at dA yet :D cuz I wont upload them there, not the way they are now:p so tell me what you think! |
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http://www.oddworldforums.net/attach...7&d=1226164615 No, don't change it! |
I really like those last pictures. The one with the Outlaws is my favorite.
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Yes I really like the last three pictures too. :D
The Slig is so cute without a mask and the outlaws are really good too! |
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haha okay I wont change this but I meant the sligs without masks ;) :
thank you GlacieDragon :happy: :
okay I wont bother you guys with crap anymore!!! (although this isn't as good as I wanted it to be but probably I'll correct the mistakes someday) I have finnished the fanart for GlacierDragons story Shrown, (you remember?... I wanted to draw Vechks experiment) well I know there are a few mistakes and I hope you don't mind that i changed her arms a bit :p (if yes then I'm going to draw her again with the correct arms because It really made fun to draw her :D) although the background sucks xD she's in some sort of cage thinking about nature *shrugs* ~enjoy~ |
AHH!! :eek: Oh my God!! =O
Tis awesome!! Kick Butt Scrab! I like it alot! You have such an awesome character GlacierDragon!! :D |
Gor mate, this is amazing!!! I really like the way you made the mechanical arms look mechanic and organic at the same time. The anatomy on the Scrab is great as well. I'm looking forward to seeing where this beastie goes in the future...
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AZGADFLITKANGHDU! *Hyperventilates*
I love it! Thankyouthankyouthankyou so much! I love the way you did her arms, they look so much better than the design I use. The anatomy is great as well, you even got the wings right. :D I really like how you drew her in a cage, with the grass to show that she's wishing she was outside. Again, thank you! This has really cheared me up :p |
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Yay for GlacierDragons writing skills and her OC's!!! :D :
well why don't you read Shrown then :happy: you won't regret it ^^ it's awesome!!! :
thank you GlacierDragon :fuzgrin: I'm glad you like the arms ^^ you're very welcome ^__^ ********************************************************** ok to make it short I thought I could upload my little smoking slig animation :) it's not finnished yet but I guess i won't finnish it very soon, first comes the art trade with crazysteef ^^ well and I'll use it as my new avatar at dA or signature here at OWF ^^ coughI'mtoolazycoughcough CLICK TO FULLVIEW IT'S BIGGER THAN DOWN THERE AND NOT SO MESSY :laugh: ... hehe for some reason I tend to draw them unmasked ^^ :D enjoy :D |
I'd make an Oddworld Crime Noir adventure game just so I could base it around that one gif.
:D Absolutely awesome work Scion! |
*hugs da smoking Slig*
These are so cute scipionyx! :D |
ya better don't look... ya better not cry...
ya better not pout i'm tellin you why... santa slig is coming, tonight. Nice Flying Scrab btw, I just read up to that bit in Shrown. Nice un-masked sligs! |
Hey, not bad! Very nice animations. :)
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*_* thank you WoF!!! :3 :
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:lol: ahahaha x'D nice rhyme :p well ^^; I try to not be annoying anymore :fuzsmile: ...altough it's true I can even prove it with the picture I upload now :p lol anyway thank you AlexFili :D Shrown is sooooo great 8D :
^^; ok I shut up for now ... but... *forces herself to not write anything* ...but ... ¬ ¬U *fake smile* hehe ^__^ ...maybe I shouldn't have uploaded it x_x q_q ...maybe I should leave the Forums ...no worries I'm just kidding :p ;) http://fc52.deviantart.com/fs43/i/20...BlueBluish.jpg |
Awww, that Slig looks really sad. 'Tis cute though, I like the shading.
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I've said this before but this slig face looks amazing!!!!!!! The texture on the mask is very nice, not to mention the mood you convey in it is very interesting.
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so here is Ramón again!!! I know I should draw other things, but it was after midnight when I drew this, and it wasn't even on purpose, I was just tired and couldn't sleep :p I started to draw Ramóns hat, and in the end it turned out like this, I like it :happy: although I messed up his pants :goof: anyways, hope ya like it to :3 http://fc09.deviantart.com/fs42/i/20...BlueBluish.jpg |
An outlaw Slig would be awesome. Sligs are already quite capable with any kind of weapon :D
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Ramón is an Outlaw although he's a Slig ;) :D |
How did he become an outlaw? Did he run away from a factory? or was he born free?
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since I won't write my fanficion any time soon I guess I can tell you: they have thrown him in a garbage container when he was a Sliglet, he never lived in any factory nor worked for the industrialists, and I won't reveal more :p >:3 I'm so looking forward to write my fanfiction... :happy: |
By the way, I had a dream last night that I was playing an Xbox game where you could choose which mercenaries to recruit... and guess what I saw when I chose one of the options. SLIG OUTLAWS! There were about 3 Slig outlaws to choose from, and one of them was female! I might even make my own Outlaw Slig game, that would rule!
Anyway, thanks for getting the idea into my head. It made for a rather interesting dream! |
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you're welcome ^^ ok here is my part of an art trade with crazysteef the final version... and 4 of the seperated drawings... :D |
D Caste Raider does seem to be an interesting villain. I've seen him in several FMVs but haven't had a fight with him yet. I'm looking forward to it.
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