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It's a brilliant story Al!!!:) :D :cool: ;) :)
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Chapter 12 Stuck between Time and Space
Jerec was simply stunned the Octigi were dragging his body away and he could not reach it . Even stranger was that he could not even re enter his own body. It was as if he was dead, and trapped in between time and space not really knowing what was going to happen next. Jerec was seeing visions of things that had heppened and things that had not. One of those such visions showed him a large battle for something of great importance something like a pure organic creature of Oddworld but Jerec could not make out the creature. He also saw a vision of someone traveling in the past hooded in a large and magnificant Oddworldian city thousands of years before where Mudokons once were the guadians of peace on the planet. But Jerec was losing his battle with himself his identity was slipping from his grasp and he was forgetting everything. Fearing that all hope was lost he began to just let it come. But as he thought it was over, something truly amazing happened. A large light sprang from thee darkness and a mudokon spirit took form he chanted and the Octigi ran off leaving Jerec's body behind life sprang back into Jerec and he floated back into his own body. He opened his eyes but the spirit was gone. He knew he had to continue into the darkest depths of this facility, but what was truly behind this dark vibes Jerec was feeling was unknown............. Check for the latest chapter also:) |
Chapter 13 into the Lair
Jerec headed forward and looked at the map he had retrieved. The factory was to only go down s far but Jerec found a new tunnel. It lead to an area that was not even on this map. The tunnel was very misty and covered with a strange green substance that was very sticky and thick. Jerec tried not to look but he had to continue. The tunnel lead into a series of catocombs all tunneled underneath Rupture Farms spanning for miles. Jerec could here the screaming of otheres being tortured. But he still continues through this maze. Jerec hid in the shadows as a group of Octigi followed by the zombie mudokons entered a large room. Jerec followed seeing a large weapon, in which its purpose was unknown. The weapon was not completed but was being worked on. The octigi continued into another room but sealed the room behind them. Jerec knew he had to do something but what he had his slypth with him. He continued but was stopped after being hit in the back of the head............ |
*puts her thumbs up* It's great Al!!! I love your story, carry on pwetty please?!!!
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Chapter 14 Caught
Jerec awakened to a dim light hanging above his head. He was inside a cell in the catocombs. He was next to another mud who was all bruised and sore, lying on the floor like a wounded elum. He looked all around but he seemed to be in the deepest parts of the catocombs. " You must be knew here," said one of the muds. " What is going on here," Jerec replied back. " Well, we are now slaves of the Octigi we will be forced to work." " Why?" "because they are all evil!" " Well I'm going to do something about it!" Jerec silently chanted and went into a transe. He left the cell and looked around in spirit form he could detect the presence of other things. He rentered his body and walked through the wall behind him. " I'll be back for you." Jerec headed through the dark passage as quickly and silently as he could. He came back to the main room with the weapon. He headed also to the main chamber of the facility. He found his slypth and picked it up. Jerec then entered the main audience chamber and saw Octigi with capes, surrounding a throne in which sat a Glukkon wearing a cape although no suit........... |
Chapter 15 The Final Showdown
" Welcome Jerec I have been waiting for years to finally extract my revenge," the hooded Glukkon said. " Who are you and how do you know my name?" Jerec inqired. " Well lets just say I know your father." " I want to savor this moment, Octigi release the Gloctigi Beast from containment!" " HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAH.............." Jerec dropped into a pit below the viewing Octigi and the Gloctigi emerged. Jerec was simply gasping. The creature was five times the size of Jerec and alot meaner than those Octigi. The creature lept at him but Jerec dodged quickly. It through him against a wall. Jerec was now bleeding. It came for another pass but Jerec took his slypth and stuck the spear through the Gloctigi's Chest. Not willing to die the Gloctigi began to get furious with Jerec and Pinned him against the wall. With time running out the GLoctigi was about to devour Jerec, but Jerec chanted and a wave of light shpt out. This temporarley stunned the beast, and Jerec took the Slypth and stabbed the Gloctigi through the the head finally giving it the Mortal and deathly blow. The creature felll to the ground as the crimson blood flowed from its deep wounds. Jerec klimbed back up to the main chamber and saw the Hooded glukkon threw his cigarrette on the ground and it lit the whole room filled with gas on fire. The glukkon stared coldyly with his dark red eyes as he escaped through the emergency exit. The doors closed behind him and Jerec looked forward........ |
Chapter 16 Wasn't I here before.....oh well escape
Jerec ran forward as he heard a voice saying that the factory was going to blow up in ten minutes. THe weapon that the GLukkon ordered built was now blowing up also . Mass confusion as the slaves were all running back to the surface. Jerec began fighting the zombie muds and Octigi but he still wished he was out already. He saw his cell mate with the others running and climbing up. Jerec continued and was making great time the factory was blowing up around him though. " Five minutes" Jerec was almost out he took the ventalation shaft up and was running away from the factory. A supernova type explosion ignited the morning sun as the Factory which was once Rupture Farms was finally laid to rest. It was finally over for Jerec and the slaves. The Hooded Glukkon had failed for now but soon victory would be his............................ THE END |
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sweet!
That was so cool Al! You write a good story! Hope you come up with more.:fuzblink: :) ;) :smokin:
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Watch very soon for my next story................
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