yay! another great chapter! :D
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Vry good chapter. You mixed in all the elements neccessary, humour, action, character's emotions, good dialogue, and it was a good read. The whole fic so far ahs beeen a very high standard, reminding me of some of the older fics by authors such as Teal and S'laskia (I may not have been here back then but I have read their fics), rather than non-paragraphed, block of text fics which are average. I can't wait to see that picture acted out, and I really want the next chapters. Please don't get writer's block!
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All I can say is: Wow! Without repeating what the others have already praised you on. Keep up the good work and keep printing those chapters because I need my dose of great fan-fiction. Oh yeah, great art as well.
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How could I have missed this chapter?...
Woo! That is fairly amazing. I really like this story.:) Nice job Dipstikkley-dude.;) Can't wait for another chapter. |
This story is great! I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
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