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Vykker Lady 08-13-2005 08:18 AM

yay! another great chapter! :D
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“I’ll be on my best behavior, sir.”

Pugsley's so cute! X3

Dipstikk 08-13-2005 10:51 AM

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Especially thought that was down-right hilarious. :lol: :D


Yeah, I couldn't help but crack a smile at that too. :D

Munch's Master 08-13-2005 11:04 AM

Vry good chapter. You mixed in all the elements neccessary, humour, action, character's emotions, good dialogue, and it was a good read. The whole fic so far ahs beeen a very high standard, reminding me of some of the older fics by authors such as Teal and S'laskia (I may not have been here back then but I have read their fics), rather than non-paragraphed, block of text fics which are average. I can't wait to see that picture acted out, and I really want the next chapters. Please don't get writer's block!

The Marching Mudokon 08-13-2005 05:08 PM

All I can say is: Wow! Without repeating what the others have already praised you on. Keep up the good work and keep printing those chapters because I need my dose of great fan-fiction. Oh yeah, great art as well.

odd chick 08-14-2005 11:18 AM

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Vry good chapter. You mixed in all the elements neccessary, humour, action, character's emotions, good dialogue, and it was a good read. The whole fic so far ahs beeen a very high standard, reminding me of some of the older fics by authors such as Teal and S'laskia (I may not have been here back then but I have read their fics), rather than non-paragraphed, block of text fics which are average. I can't wait to see that picture acted out, and I really want the next chapters. Please don't get writer's block!

This is EXACTLY how I feel about this story as well. ;) All of the characters' personalities (well, the ones from the game, anyway) are on-par with the game, and that's great because that's the way a good fanfic should be. :) The humor is well-balanced as well and not overdone. I love this story! :D

big bro boogie 08-14-2005 01:50 PM

How could I have missed this chapter?...
Woo! That is fairly amazing. I really like this story.:)

Nice job Dipstikkley-dude.;)
Can't wait for another chapter.

ANN NEELY 09-02-2005 03:46 PM

This story is great! I can't wait for the next chapter! :)