Suddenly soem of the crew saw some bubbles coming out of the water while they were coming down.

"I've got a bad feeling about this." Said Kealton.

(a sea rex lept out of the water, it's mouth wide open)
lomna: uh oh!
(suddenly, nets are shot across the caynon, catching everyone, including the outlaw, they hang just several feet from the sea rex's mouth.)
lomna: wow, that was lucky.
wolvark's voice: come on, get yourself outa that net, you unda arrest!
(sudenly, the net begins to move towards the side of the caynon, reveiling some wolvarks and a machine reiling in the net.)

"Woah!" Meny says pushing up the Jaws of the sea rex. It tried to eat him but he held on. Then Wolvark grabs meny and throws him down on the floor. "Ow my arm!" he says. "Uh oh"

"Okay, I go on the Oddworld underground railroad, and now, I end up here. This is just screwed up! I thought I was going off to freedom, not to a prison!" Complained Kealton.

Moe was also captured in the nets and returned to dry land by the Wolvark group only to find dosens of them bunched up and guns up...

"No! Let me go! I'm off to freedom for crying out loud! Don't me me hurt you!" Complained Kealton.
"This guy is annoying. Feed him to the sea rex." Ordered a wolvark.
"Yes sir!" Replied another wolvark.
The wolvark grabbed Kealton.
"Noooo!" Yelled Kealton.
The wolvark tossed Kealton high in the air. The sea rex leaped in the air and devoured him.
"That guy is more annoying than my friend." Said a wolvark.

(um...are you relly dead?)

Kealton fell down in the sea rex in major pain.
"Ahhhh!" He screamed.
From his loincloth, he got his first aid kit.
"Better treat these wounds and broken bones." Said Kealton.
He began healing himself.

Moe jumped to his very sharp stick and bloted to the wolvark bye the cliff befor the other wolvarks could tell what was happining....he then put his stick through the enemys stomach....grabed its gun and mowd down the others where they stood...

wolvark leader: stop! we'll spare the rest of your lives! just tell us about the grubbs and we'll leave you alone! we saw them ambush you, do you realy want to be on their side?
lomna: (lomna stood there in misbelif) what about kelton? you probibly killed him!
wolvark: common, lets get him!
wolvark leader: oy, tracey, get those natives!
( a female wolvark heads towards lomna)
tracey: you've been picking on my boys! you're dun for! (starts shooting)
wolvark leader: but tracey, we need them to kill those dam grubbs!
wolvarks: who cares about stratigy? lets gettem!
lomna: wait, help! (his spooce bow starts shooting an acidy type of spooce, this time, it is explosive) wow! take this!

After the shot was fired, all of the people on the battleground except for the mudokkons were lying unconsious.
"Hey! I saw your friend get eaten by a sea rex." Said a mudokkon sticking out a window of the factory.
He had opened a book.
"I've got good news and bad news. The good news is that your friend won't die until five more day, but it would depend if he died on the way down the sea rex, which is most common. You'll have plenty more time to save him. The bad news is that the sea rex is swam far away now." Said the mudokkon.

"I am going to save him!" Meny said and got a uncoinces body and a stick and stud on the body in the water and paddeled off.

lomna: wait, lets save everyone in the facility first.
(his spooce bow glows, suddenly, lomna is transported into the mind of the sea rex)
lomna: (appears in a white space) where am i?
sea rex's mind: those natives, killed all of those fish, none of those back there.
lomna: who are you?
sea rex's mind: i am a sea rex, the waters been polluted by the wolvarks, then those "natives" eat all the fish! and they call themselves decendents of them!
(a picture appears in the white space, it is what the sea rex sees or a memory. a worry fish appears)
sea rex's mind: that grubb, tasted a bit like a bird, and i havn't realy tasted it yet.
(fuzzleman54321, i have updated my story again)

(Right!)

"What the?" Meny says as he falls off the body and lands in the water. He Wounds had healed now so he could swim. But under water the Sea rex put it paw on him and pinned him down. In his mind he said "Looks like i'm.......sunk"

"I'm goanna bust outta here once in a while," Kealton said to himself, "I just need some time to think."
Kealton sat down with a fist on his chin.
"This is going to take a while." Said Kealton.

lomna: sea rex, let go of your food!
sea rex's mind: i'll take you somewhere.
lomna: but, i want go back to land!
sea rex's mind: here we are! (aproaches a under ground beach with a long narrow tunnel.) we are here, you can leave now.
(lomna and everyone esle is pushed through the mouth of the sea rex, then the sea rex slowly submerges into the black, inky waters of the ocean)
lomna: bye! come on, lets get outta here!
*edit* if this mucks up the story line, then enore this post.

I really didn't get that, so I'll just post this:

After a good 30 minutes of thinking, Kealton had a plan.
"Sea rex! Can you speak?" Asked Kealton.
The sea rex was surprised he asked that question.
"Yes." He replied.
"I thought we could make up a deal." Said Kealton.
"Really? What kind of deal?" Asked the sea rex.
"Do you like fish?" Asked Kealton.
"I love them!" Replied the sea rex.
"I know a place where there's lot of yummy fish. If you let me out, I'll lead you there." Said Kealton.
The sea rex was silent for a short time.
"Sounds like a plan." Replied the sea rex.
"Good." Said Kealton.
He was finally spit out on land.
"Climb on my back and lead the way." Ordered the sea rex.
Kealton climbed on his back and then started.
"First, go straight." Ordered Kealton.
They started their journey.

*GASP* Meny swam to the land and started coughing upi water.

"Left." Said Kealton.
The sea rex turned left.
"Down." Said Kealton.
The sea rex went down.
The rest of the pattern went like this:
Right, Up, Left, Up, Left, Up.
They had arrived to a coast line. The sea rex let Kealton go on the coast. The sea rex saw lots and lots of fish there.
"Thank you. By the way, what is your name?" Asked the sea rex.
"My name is Kealton. What's your's?" Asked Kealton
"My name is Menolesar. Sorry for eating you." Said the sea rex.
"It was pretty much the wolvark's faults." Replied Kealton.
There was short silence.
"So were pretty much friends by now right?" Asked Kealton.
"Friends. Yes." Replied Menolesar.
"I wish I could hang around more, but I must get back to my crew. Maybe once I get to the free zone, we could hang out more." Said Kealton.
"Okay." Replied Menolesar.
He swam away and Kealton walked off to find his crew.

Reptite tried to follow the river in hope of finding the sea rex.
Then suddenly he get to a fork at the river.
Reptite:* dont hope it took the left way, cuz im on the right side so i must follow this one!*
sadly it was the left side the sea rex with kealton had swum...

"What is that over there?" Asked Kealton to himself.
He got a better look what was coming.
"Oh no, it's a wolvark navy! I must warn the others!" Exclaimed Kealton.
He ran along. When the navy got close to him, he hid in the bushes.
"No sign of that mudokkon gang here." Said a wolvark on his radio.
Kealton was dead nervous.

lomna: (he was still in the mind of the sea rex) so, your name is Menoeslar? i'm glad you let my brother go. now i need to get out too.
Menolesar's mind: my will is not willing to leave you, i am lonely, i need company!
(they pass a bay, surronded with wolvarks)
lomna: you want revenge on those wolvarks and natives? the sewers are over there, please let me go, we will meet in the facility!
Menolesar's mind: the sewers could'nt even fit you through! but there is a awy, where they leave their submarines. i will meet you in the facillity. good luck!
(lomna appears on the bay, filled with wolvarks, he luanches into an attack)
lomna: (his spooce bow starts realesing a black flame) help! muds, come back!

Kealton had heard the cry for help. Kealton was still hiding in the bushes
"Where is that coming from?" Asked Kealton.
Kealton had felt something below him. It was his tomahawker weapon!
"There you are." Said Kealton as he picked it up.
As he ran along, he saw the factory.
"I'll just take the front entrance, even though it's the hardest way." Kealton had said to himself.
Since the wolvarks were still unconsious, he got access to the front door.
He went in, the tomahawker weapon held tight.
"Freeze!" Yelled the wolvark. Lots of wolvarks crowded him.
"Wanna fight? Fine." Said Kealton.
He rushed at the wolvarks.

(um i dont now where the hell im ment to be in this?...)

*Kealton was panting, looking at all the wolvarks he killed*
Kealton: I didn't know I could take on such a battle.
*Kealton sees Menolesar come in*
Kealton: Menolesar? What are you doing here?
Menolesar: Your brother told be to come in here. He said I would meet up with him soon.
Kealton: My.....brother?

may i join as a gliukkon
Name:General Zizzy
Age:18
Caries: his wallet.
Short bio: after general dtipik "mysteriously" died he was put in charge of the slig barracks 2.0

First of all, we are MUDOKKONS.
Second of all, you don't have all the proper details to join.

ok why cant i b a glukkon trying 2 catch the mudokons trying 2 escape

(hey kool u live in minnesota)

Once again, you double post. Please use the edit button or you might get a warning. (If you don't already have one.)

(:S ya i noticed it that time but i dint kno how 2 delete it )

I don't think that'll work.

Kealton was standing with Menolesar.
"Freeze!" Yelled Amy as she walked in.
"Menolesar! Move out of the way!" Ordered Kealton.
They both dodged her bullet.
"You'll pay for knocking me out." She yelled.
She ran around very fast.
"Come and get me!" Ordered Amy.

(ok then ill be a mud
Name:spike
Age:18
Work at:used 2 work at splinterz
Likes:guns(hes not a peasful mud)
Dislikes:glukkons,slig,and expecialy vykers
Short Bio:was razed by glukkons 2 be a powerful warior but desided 2 escape and help free his fellow mudokons and now has armor and a hand gun

Kealton was starting to get dizzy.
Amy was running very fast, practicly invisible to the naked eye.
She kept shooting Kealton, him dodging the bullets.
"Slow down!" Yelled Kealton as he threw his tomahawker.
The tomahawker hit Amy, and she just layed down on the floor.
"Where are the other mudokkons?" Asked Kealton.

lomna: (his spooce bow goes blue and suddenly, all the wolvarks he shoots turn into grubbs) wow!
grubbs: get him wolvarks!
lomna: help, grubb invasion!
grubbs: you trying to trick us, ya hippie?
(lomna's spooce bow starts shooting out the black acid)
lomna: take that! (he runs towards a tunnel)

(so can i join)

ooc: sure, just find a way to enter.

(ummm ok)spike was stinking into a building

(OOC: Sligco, i undertsand that you are new to all of this, but please do not post one-liners. That was probably the most meaningless post ever. Please reveiw the rules.)