Wow, I love the freezing tornado idea, BBS. That's something that is unheard of in fanfictions! Great chapter! :D

As it got closer, a echoing whisper.
"Feel the Raisin's wrath..." The voice said.
"The raisan! He's trying to kill us! Run Kakulana!" I screamed.
There was a beam of light, and an opening appeared.
Suddenly, a slig fell off.
Ziggy fired a bullet from rusty.
There was a rumble, and the tunnel caved in.
The tornado swirled towards the fallen slig.
The slig limped back towards the rocky caved in wall.
The tornado froze.
The slig relaxed, but not for long.
The tornado shattered, smahing the shards into the slig.
The slig was still alive.
The tornado stopped, and dissapeared.
Meanwhile, back at Kakulana...

Kakulana swirved out into the country-side.
"Woah! Nice driving, Kakky!" I laughed.
Kakulana gave a look at Me, and said "Kakky? Why don't you just call me crap-face!"
I gave a laugh, and jumped of Kakulana.
"Slug! Did you think that was cool or what?! Slug?"
It gave a moment to realise the slig that fell off...it was Slug.
I told Kakulana, and me and Crap-face were off.
We bumbed into the wall.
I got off him, and we started removing the rocks.
I jumped over the top of the rocks, and saw Slug.
There were shards in his hands, and one in his stomach, and blood trickling out.
"Biggy...help me!" He screamed.
I pulled out the shards.
Slug gave a scream, and I picked him up.
I climbed over the rocks, and jumped on Kakulana.
We settled down where the rest of the army were, and we settled down.
"Monty! Can you stitch Slug's stomach up?" I asked Monty.
"No can-do, Biggy, my case got crushed back there." He pointed at the cave.
"Then Slug is going to die."

Poor Slug having glass shards sliced through his body! :( You know, one minute.....Crap-face (:lol:) is bad, then the next minute he's good! It's hard to tell who's side he's on most of the time! Anyway, nice chapter, BBS. Keep them coming! :)

I woke the next day.
Slug was sitting next to Monty, and Monty was stitching him up.
"I found a spare needle and thread in Richy's belly-button." Monty said, with his eyes fixed on the needle.
By now, I wasn't suprised by anything Richy could do.
Monty finished, and Slug walked off.
There was a tremble, and a loud explosion.
Suddenly, an army of Mudokons came running down a hill, shooting.
Sligs dived for there guns, but were shot before they had reached them.
I dodged the first Spoocebullet, and got hit by the next.
The bullet went through the pants, and then I was hit over the head by a tommahawker.

There was a scream, and I woke up.
It appeared to be an old Slig Chamber, and the instruments of torture the mudokons were using them on the sligs.
I pulled up, but I couldn't move.
I was tied to the wall, and a deep lava pit was underneath me.
I looked up.
There was a flame thrower, burning away at the rope.
A Mudokon in a cloak walked up to me.
"I am Chawton, and I am the founder of the Slig Rebellion. I am using this base as we killed all the sligs and rescued our Muokons who were trapped in here. And now we torture sligs!" He said.
He looked quite old, as his spiritual feathers were turning grey.
A native mudokon ran up to Chawton.
"Can we start shooting the vykkers now?" He asked.
"NO! Don't kill them!" I screeched.
"I don't think you aught to be worrying about the vykkers when your rope's just about to snap." Chawton said.
I looked up, and saw the rope snapping.
I closed my eyes, and waited...

Excellent chapter, BBS! It's really gripping and intense, and I can't wait for more! :D

I heard the rough voice of Chunky fueller.
I opened my eyes.
Chunky was tarzan swinging towards me.
He Knocked Chawton in.
"AGHHHHH! I'm burning!" Chawton screamed, and dissapeared in the lava.
My rope snapped.
I started falling.
Chunky grabbed me, and dropped me on the ground.
I jumped up.
Chunky dropped off beside me.
All the mudokons stopped torturing.
"Hello, Goodbye, no time to say Hi!" Chunky said, and fired a bomb into the roof.
There was a huge explosion, and part of the roof collapsed.
All the sligs started running for the doors.
I found slug, grunt, ziggy, Monty & Richy.
We ran out.
Chunky fueller walked to the door.
"Thankyou, thankyou, Now YOUR curtains close!" Chunky laughed, and ran out the door.
The mudokons screamed, and the ceiling collapsed on them.
We all popped out in a familliar place.
Flub Fuels.
We jumped out of the cave.
I walked up to it.
"We have to go through Flub Fuels." I said.
"Last time we went up that road?" Said a Big bro slig.
"You go that way then. I'm going this way."
The army split up in two as they seperated...

Hey! Sorry it took me so long to reply-I didn't know that you had updated the story and I thought you stopped writing it! :( Anyway, that was a good chapter, BBS. Keep up the good work. ;)

We walked through the creepy, abandond flub fuels.
We went round a corner, and found a slig splattered on the wall.
"Ewww." Monty said. "Feel sorry for that slig."
A vykker ran in.
"He'll kill us all! run for your lives!" The vykker said, running out a window.
"Weirdo." Ziggy said.
"Wonder what killed that slig?" Slug said.
Suddenly, I got a glimpse of a wrecker ball swinging towards us from behind.
"I think that might be something to do with it!" I shouted, and dived away.
The others did the same.
The ball hit the wall, and dented it.
Out of the crane came a tall, evil Gloktigi.
"Run." I whispered.
The gloktigi darted towards me.
I ran.
Suddenly, the vykker ran past again.
"You'll never kill me!" He laughed.
The Gloktigi spun a web around the vykker.
"HELP! Don't just stand there, do something!" The vykker screamed.
"Distract the Gloktigi for a while. I have a plan!" Grunt shouted.
Ziggy pulled out 'rusty' and fired.
The gloktigi jumped back, and dodged the huge bullet.
Grunt got into the crane.
Grunt started to move the wrecker ball.
"Get the Gloktigi infront of the vykker! And don't stop him from getting the vykker!" Grunt screamed.
The Gloktigi darted towards the vykker.
Grunt pressed a big button.
The wrecker ball swung towards the Gloktigi.
The gloktigi turned around.
Impact!
The ball pushed the Gloktigi into the wall, and green goo went everywhere.
The vykker started to get out of the gloktigi web.
He jumped up.
The wrecker ball swung towards him.
"AGGGGGHHHHHH!" The vykker screamed.
The ball splattered him against the wall.
Grunt was still in the crane, wondering how that had happend.
It took him a while to figure ou that there was a mudokon behind him, who had pressed it.
Grunt swung out of the crane.
The mudokon had a spoocebow.
He started firing at Grunt.
"Do it, Ziggy!" Grunt screamed.
By the words 'do it', he pressumed he meant Rusty.
Ziggy loaded up, and pulled the trigger.
The mudokon splattered everywhere.
"Let's move out of this place." Ziggy said.
The rest of the army was walking towards the door.
"Where going the other way. This is too dangerous.
The only people left were Monty, Richy, Ziggy, Slug, Grunt, Me and Chunky Fueller.

Woah, that was intense....gross, but intense!! I loved it! :) Keep up this story because it's non-stop action!! It's just like a movie!

We came to the exit.
"What's that sound?" Chunky said.
We figured that out when a slig with no pants trailed towards us, with something pink hanging out of his gut.
"Help us!" He groaned.
"What's happened?" Monty asked.
The slig froze, and dropped dead.
We followed the trail of blood that the slig left.
We bumped into splitnerz.
There were millions of Sligs running into spliterz because of the massivve army of Mudokons and Grubs.
A grub ran past Monty.
"Die, Vykker!" The grub shouted.
I grabbed my gun, and fired.
The grub screamed, and dropped.
We ran into Splinterz.
There were sligs running everywhere.
I ran to Splinterz' office.
Splinterz was hiding behind his desk.
He stuck his head out the window and shouted "I've got a present for you!"
A slig next to him lobbed a Grenade out the window.
There was a boom, and a head went flying in the air.
Splinterz turned around.
"Biggy Bro Slig! You survived! And you can do me a favour." He said.
"Whats that?" I asked.
"The mudokons have activated a generator which will blow this place up soon, and I want you to de-activate it." He said.
"Well, that should be easy. Where is it?" I asked.
"Right over the army of Muds." He said gloomily.
"Oh." I mouthed.
I walked out, and prepared myself for the gauntlet...

Ooh, you now have a mission to de-activate a generater, eh? This should be interesting..I can't wait to see what happens! *begins countdown to next chapter* That chapter was great, by the way. ;)

I walked out the door.
"Slig! Let's kick his ass!" A Grub screamed.
Suddenly, 10 grubs and Mudokons ran towards me.
I loaded my machine gun.
They took no notice on what weapon I had, they started firing.
I fired.
Suddenly, a Mudokon with a blue cloak dived forward, and blue energy darted out of his hands.
A sheild of blue liquid spirted from the energy.
I fired again, but the bullets didn't go through.
"Silly me." I chuckled.
I walked forward into the transparent blue dome.
I loaded my gun.
I fired.
The bullets went bouncing everywhere, killing the Muds and Grubbs.
The bullets hit the Mudokon with the cloak, and the sheild dissapeared.
I ran towards the army.
The Grubbs started throwing spears at me.
The Mudarchers started shooting at me.
Suddenly, an arrow landed right in my left arm.
I screamed, and grabbed my machine gun with my right arm, and fired at the Mudokons.
The mudokons where dying...but not enough.
Then I saw the leader of this rebellion.
I shivered, and loaded my Shotgun.
The leader was looking rather like Kakulana.
"Wait a tick...that is Kakulana!" I screamed.
I fired my shotgun.
"Kakulana! You've got your power! What do you want now?" I shouted.
Kakulana smiled.
"Power!" He cried. "And Revenge"
"Revenge for what?" I asked.
"I new the Guru. He was nice to me! And you killed him!" Kakulana bellowed.
I stepped back.
"So this really is, The Guru's Revenge!" Kakulana screamed, sending all his army towards Splinterz for attacking.
"You can either save Splinterz with the generator, or you can kill me." Kakulana laughed.
I looked at Splinterz.
But when I turned back to Kakulana, he was gone.
I walked towards the Generator.
I was about to press the Generator button to diactivate it, but a million arrows darted towards me.
An arrow went in my right arm, and one in my back.
I screamed, and jolted forward, and pressed the button
Suddenly, and arrow went right in my head.
I stopped, and fell to the floor...

Oooh, intense! I like this story, BBS. Keep it up because I have nothing to criticise you on-it's that good! :)

Remembering...
 

Slug was goofing around with the contols in his office at Rupture Farms.
"Stop it, Slug! Do you want to be turned into Slog meat?" I screamed.
"I'm not going to be turned into Slog Meat, BBS!" Slug said.
"Fine then, your going to be turned into Slug meat." I said.
The speakers went on.
"Slug! Stop messing with those controls! I nearlly got pushed into the Scrab cake maker!"
It was Molluck. That was bad news.
"If you do that again, You'll be in the stockyards with the Paramites!" Molluck screamed. "And Biggy Bro Slig! Get back to work!"
Everything went white, and I woke up.

There hovering over me was Splinterz, Monty, Richy, Ziggy, Slug and Grunt.
"You saved us all!" Splinterz said. "I'll give you a raise. $5"
"Kakulana got away!" I said.
"So what, Kid? An oversized Bolamite chickened out of a fight? Big Deal." Splinterz said.
"He will kill us. Even if he has to destroy the Monosaic lines." I shot back.
"Well how was I to know that? I've never met him in my life?" He answered.
"Then how do you know that he's an oversized Bolamite?" I asked.
All eyes shot to Splinterz.
"Well, I have met him before. Before I tell you, let's go inside." Splinterz said.
I got up, and we helped Splinterz across the muddy ditches and craters to his office.

Great chapter, BBS. :) The flashback scene at the beginning was the coolest part! I can't wait to see what else you come up with! :)

"I can't tell you." Splinterz said.
"Why?" I asked.
"Syrom is coming. And he is going to kill. No time for stories now, BBS! You have to get ready for when Syrom comes back." He replied.
"Syrom?" I asked.
"The Guru's brother. And he will kill you when he finds out about the Guru." Splinterz said.

That was very short, BBS, but it was still very good. ;) (especially for a short paragraph-most people can't pull something like that off, but you did!) Keep the story goin'! :)

Yeah, well, there it is, short, but it sure gives a little exitement for the next story, "Syrom's Retribution".
If Syrom ever does die, I'll make sure he dies in a horrible way...