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Matriar 05-25-2006 01:04 AM

Mark
 
By the way: My sabertooth skeleton became finally marked at school...
The mark wasn't perfect but very good. The teacher also said: I did very well! ;)

Dark Elite_H2 05-25-2006 02:15 AM

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By the way: My sabertooth skeleton became finally marked at school (did I enunciate this sentence right?:fuzemb:)
The mark wasn't perfect but very good. The teacher also said: I did very well! ;)

Are ya kiddin'!?
It looks superb!
Maybe you should put a lil' skin on the next rough draft, so we can see a real sabre tooth.

Matriar 05-25-2006 02:21 AM

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Maybe you should put a lil' skin on the next rough draft, so we can see a real sabre tooth.

Aha! :D That's why the picture didn't get a perfect mark! I knew I forgot something...skin! LOL

Matriar 05-25-2006 12:48 PM

Well...
here are some sketches of a little guy I invented some months ago.
Enjoy:

Sketch 1 (There it was the first time I drew it)

And sketch 2 (I finished this picture today)

Dark Elite_H2 05-25-2006 02:13 PM

O.o
Looks like a gremlin. XD

Matriar 05-30-2006 06:36 AM

Do you mean, it looks cute or it looks ugly like a gremlin :D?

(What's the difference between ugly and cute to me? To me, oddworld's strangest person? :D

"Yikes :eek: that nasty thing is so... so... it's sooo cute
:love: !!!)


I think the cutest pose is the one when it is cross-legged. :p

Dark Elite_H2 06-01-2006 12:29 PM

Umm...the cute gremlin?
I mean...it's evil, but it's cute too. ^.^
It's evil, but in a cute way XD

Matriar 06-09-2006 06:59 AM

I drew this female plant-like creature at school. (Wow, was I bored...)


http://oddworldforums.net/attachment...1&d=1149865045
What do you think?

E'l Scrabino 06-15-2006 02:36 AM

NICE! Branch thingy for tail + bark for body = Awesome stuffs!

Matriar 06-15-2006 11:04 AM

:happy: Thank you, E'l Scrabino!

I once made my own signature symbol for my pictures some days ago. My symbol looks like: http://oddworldforums.net/attachment...1&d=1150400596
I think, I will always put it on the corner of my future pics.


The next picture I did is right here. Uuhm... only the guys who like tragedies should have a look at this one. Trust me. Maybe it's too bitter for ya. Well, here it is:
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EDIT: Huh? Where's my pic? :fuzemb: That sucks...

http://www.oddworldforums.net/attach...1&d=1150451169

Did it work this time? I don't know.
My computer drives my crazy.

Matriar 06-23-2006 06:38 AM

Hey. Comments are welcome. :rolleyes: Any feedbacks? My picture was too creepy for you, I guess.
Well, it doesn't make any difference to me. However...

Matriar 06-25-2006 12:23 AM

Another creepy one. I did this picture some weeks ago.

Dusan 06-25-2006 12:33 AM

WOW :chairhit:

Matriar 06-25-2006 03:57 AM

...thanks.

What do you mean with ":chairhit:" ?

E'l Scrabino 06-29-2006 04:39 PM

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:happy: Thank you, E'l Scrabino!

I once made my own signature symbol for my pictures some days ago. My symbol looks like: http://oddworldforums.net/attachment...1&d=1150400596
I think, I will always put it on the corner of my future pics.


The next picture I did is right here. Uuhm... only the guys who like tragedies should have a look at this one. Trust me. Maybe it's too bitter for ya. Well, here it is:
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EDIT: Huh? Where's my pic? :fuzemb: That sucks...

http://www.oddworldforums.net/attach...1&d=1150451169

Did it work this time? I don't know.
My computer drives my crazy.

Is it me or is that Jenna?

Matriar 06-30-2006 12:04 AM

Actually, it is Jennadelle. But she's... just... you know...
that's a too long story. :dodgy:

Don't you like the picture?

E'l Scrabino 06-30-2006 12:05 AM

Yes, i loved it! And i'm 'ere all night, i'd like to listen to the story! (cureeosoty compels me to delve deeper) :D

Matriar 06-30-2006 12:14 AM

:D I'm glad.
I started to work on a fan fiction story about Jennadelle some weeks ago. The only little problem is to translate it in english. But I guess the first chapter is finished in one or two weeks...
Well, in this fan fiction you can read the "too long story". I ask for your patience ;)

E'l Scrabino 06-30-2006 12:15 AM

here you go *hands of patience* :)

Matriar 06-30-2006 12:21 AM

here you go *hands-off grin* :D

Dancing Steef 06-30-2006 01:26 AM

Wow these pictures are so awesome!!! :cheer: the one in the prison and the one with Jenna are my favs ;) Good work!:D


~DS~

Kimon 06-30-2006 05:43 PM

I know pretty much all you hear on these forums is just flattery, which is fun to get, but if you don't get a serious criticism, you're never going to get better, so here I go:

I have a problem with a lot of the hands and feet in your creature drawings, they seem out of proportion with the rest of the creatures, and the feet in particular face at odd angles when they touch the ground. Like the front legs of the horse-like thing in your latest 'creepy' drawing. The angles at which the feet are pointing are all the same, save for the front left, which seems to be protruding forward. If that creature were 3-D, the legs would all be different lengths and they'd be in a very uncomfortable position, not at all suited for carrying the weight of the other creature.

My advice would be to draw skeletal stick figures, and not skeletal in the traditional sense, with bones and that sorts of thing, but just very, very basic mannequin-like people/creatures with all the proper joints and proportions. I'm no teacher, so looking up a quick tutorial online would be a great course of action, and from those sorts of drawing excersizes you'd learn a lot about posture and how weight is carried, which will significantly improve your sketches.

And remember, I wouldn't write all this up if I didn't think you had any skill. ;)

Matriar 07-01-2006 09:14 AM

I'm not that good in drawing yet. I already know this :) But I'm working on it. There are mistakes I made. And maybe I'll do some more little mistakes in future.
Well, it isn't so important to me.

I only started to draw to show the feeling I had in my life and the ones I'm going to have all the time. That's more important to me. Drawing is just more than a piece of paper and some pencils...

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I have a problem with a lot of the hands and feet in your creature drawings, they seem out of proportion with the rest of the creatures, and the feet in particular face at odd angles when they touch the ground.

If the feet are having a oblique angle then turn the whole picture some degrees :D. Maybe it works.

Kimon 07-02-2006 05:40 AM

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I only started to draw to show the feeling I had in my life and the ones I'm going to have all the time. That's more important to me. Drawing is just more than a piece of paper and some pencils...

Drawing is thousands of times more than paper and pencils. Unfortunately, you have to be adept with such things to make your drawings easy to understand and meaningful, let alont aesthetically pleasing. I was just under the impression that you wanted to get better, maybe to convey your feelings more clearly. Guess notski.

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If the feet are having a oblique angle then turn the whole picture some degrees :D. Maybe it works.

'Fraid not, little lady.

I still implore that you try out my suggestions, because you do have talent, and I'd love to see you use it to the fullest.

Matriar 07-02-2006 06:24 AM

Yes. :D Sure, I'm going to try out your suggestions.

You know, I just had to tell you what drawing means to me. :)

Dusan 07-02-2006 06:47 AM

I like Kimmon's comments. I would like to post somthing like that, but my "english" is so bad and you probably wouldn't understand a thing (used sad that to me, is he right?), and I will look like a fool to rest of a people (but i'm not, I just like to use long sentences) .

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I only started to draw to show the feeling I had in my life and the ones I'm going to have all the time.
I respect that!

Matriar 07-02-2006 06:58 AM

Hey lad, english isn't my mother-tongue too :D.
...I mean I needed to look up some words to understand what Kimon wanted to say me :D:D. But I understood every messages of you because your words are not that difficult to me...!
I just want to say you're not the only one who feels helpless sometimes...

Dusan 07-02-2006 07:08 AM

What is hard to understand in "great" or "very good" ;) .
What is your "mother-tongue"?

Matriar 07-02-2006 07:36 AM

...german.
But I'm perfect in spoken and written in this language after all. Who other than me can this? :D

(I'm just a dork who wants to be something special... so dismiss me.)

Kimon 07-09-2006 06:51 PM

Stranger's Maid, I'm surprised. You're quite articulate for someone of another tongue. Well-done. And Dusan, I'm sure you'll get better with practice. Just keep on trying. :)


Awww, Fan Corner brings out the nice in me. :p