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Alpha 09-03-2004 09:21 AM

hey i know something that youre doin cyber but come on it cant atke that long to finish it!?

Cyber-Slig 09-03-2004 09:24 AM

dude some stories have been up for a whole year and are less than 10 chapters long . Calm down . I am awaiting oddish to complete the pictures for chapters one and 2 . Then after he does the chapter 3 pic (I will tell him the story and he can make one) I will write the story with the picture. easy as that

Alpha 09-03-2004 09:27 AM

oops i thought you were on about spelling dont worry ill try

Alpha 09-04-2004 07:42 AM

i knew that thats how you were doin it cyber slig

Cyber-Slig 11-13-2004 07:42 AM

DAMNIT! I have to rewrite now

Oddish 11-13-2004 07:56 AM

I know, it's just gay. But I think I know a way you can get it back with out typing it all again.

I think it go's like this. Click on tools And click on Internet Options , then go on General, and then Settings and finally click on View files. Once you've done that you'll get these millions of files, and you have try and find an older file of the forums wich you've been on, and it should show the thread with the old text.

But I not sure if it will be replaced.

Cyber-Slig 11-20-2004 12:27 PM

Can anyone remember where we left off ? Was it when the guards caught Expert for attacking Bela ?

Oddish 11-20-2004 01:21 PM

I think so.

Cyber-Slig 11-20-2004 01:33 PM

Ah right . Time to get this Baby running again

Chp 4 : Whisper before you shout..

Expert : I should'nt have attacked him .. I gotta escape...

The sight of the blood stained room and tortured , dead sligs was not a pretty sight . He could'nt work in this sector anymore as they would find him and kill him for good . He picked up a rusty knife for one of the dead sligs and sliced the strap off . He then hid in an air vent and slept till night ... then he crawled and look for a higher slig class room . He found one alright . It was a fancy , clean , little , yellow room with an anti-possession orb . The bed was luxury unlike the smelly , small lockers . With that Expert opened the vent and stabbed the sleeping higher class slig . Taking his I.D. and pants (different with icons on it) he hid the body in another slig's room while he was away . But when he went deeper into the compound he was amazed . Big bro sligs guarded every corner where the ''higher class'' were working their asses off . It was'nt so luxury at all . Suddenly a big bro came to talk to Expert...

Big Bro : Where have you been ? Slacking off again Joe ?

Expert : Joe ? Oh yes it's me Joe . Do I usually slack ?

Big Bro : Don't be a smart-ass and get down to youre post .

Expert : yeah ....where is it again ?

Big Bro : Joe whatever you've been smokin' I want some . Go down and guard the boiler as usual . Oh and also they've promoted you to full timer . Graveyard shift fer ya now..... Get goin' before the Brew Master finds youre little slacking ass ....

Cyber-Slig 11-21-2004 07:05 AM

OK Does anyone want to subscribe so I'll PM them whenever there is a new chapter ?

The Marching Mudokon 02-11-2005 08:35 PM

I'll suscribe, I like your story. Keep up the good work.

Alpha 02-16-2005 11:57 AM

Does this mean your not posting the story public anymore?

Angel-FoX-crescent 02-16-2005 12:41 PM

I do too!
It's cool keep it up dude!

Cyber-Slig 02-16-2005 01:05 PM

OK. I kinda got fed up with my computer a while ago, which meant I did'nt do the story cos it kept crashing half way through chapters. However, now that you to have revivied it, I think I'll continue. But tommorow. I got homework.

Alpha 02-16-2005 01:10 PM

Yay!, I never really understood subscribing to a thread anyway so this is a good thing.

Cyber-Slig 03-04-2005 11:38 AM

Right. Here I go. I have a sudden urge, to write this again, and have it finished.

Expert finished his graveyard shift. He was extremely tired. He got back to his locker. And slept for ages. If the glukkons found him, he'd be dead.But they didn't. Apparently that Big Bro that was actually his supervisor, has been shipped off to Rupture farms to help with the situation. Expert snuck out of his locker, to get his legs and mask on before anyone noticed he'd been sleeping for so long. He found his Daily Deception, which sligs got all the time lying next to his gun. ''Rupture Farms explodes! Molluck not found dead! Turn to page 4 for more news! And in other news the sky may be falling, Director Phleg asks for all donations so he can put it good use!'' . Expert as shocked to find this had happened, and got a hell of a thread when an arm touched his shoulder. A slig asked him to come to his office. The word that Expert just thougtht, ''I'm dead.'' But instead the slig had other things to say. ''So Joe, remember Mike, your supervisor?''

Expert: Uh.... Yeah.....Mike...sure...''

Slig:Well, let's just say Abe had a go at him''

Expert: ''Oh....don't tell me what happened. I already get the idea.''

Slig: ''Yes... well your being promoted to supervisor now. You'll be helping some sligs down at the boiler. Be there at 12 pm.''

Expert got out and thought, ''Damn'' . He's back where he started. Back at the boilers, late at night. He decided, not to disobey, or face the wrath of Scylla. He got there at 12 pm. Very dark, and quiet. And the sligs weren't even there.....

Cyber-Slig 03-05-2005 11:14 AM

OK, this has moved down, almost half a page. *bump*