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Fuzzleman54321 05-11-2005 12:28 PM

o.k! " I've gotta make sure nowone finds out about this!" Slasher said as he looked at a dead mudokon corspe on the floor! "FREEZE!" Loads of sligs surronded him! "Oh oh! They caught me!"

mudling 05-11-2005 12:41 PM

ooc: that's a bit better fuzzleman! remeber not to make huge dramas or action yet, we have to do it slowly, and there has already been one recently.
(noe heard some voices below him, but he decided to just collect some bird eggs)
noe: hear you litle birdies, let me take the eggs, please?
ooc: those were mudokon birds, not earth birds, just incase you are wondering.

Fuzzleman54321 05-11-2005 12:44 PM

"Errrrrr I can Explain!" Slasher says. "Start talking!" "Well, the mudokon hit me and then took a drug and died!" Slasher said lying. "Good for us. Come on boys!" "Phew!" Slasher said as the sligs went away.

Splat 05-11-2005 12:51 PM

FUZZLEMAN, MUST I ONCE MORE POINT YOU TOWARDS RULES THAT HAVE ALREADY BEEN EXPLAINED TO YOU?????

YOU CANNOT MAKE RANDOM CHARACTERS! No random sligs, no random mudokons even if you are only there to kill them off! Read the flipping rules!!!!!

If you want to make random character in COMPLETELY UNRELATED SITUATIONS go over to fancorner and write a story. This is not the place for random, senseless rubbish.

the brew master 05-11-2005 01:14 PM

:

Thanks!

OOC:I doubt the before comment was directed at you...

OMG!! New/Old character that im bringing back.

Name:Rob Phinex
Age:27
Gender:Male
Species:Slig
Bio:The leader of a 7 man Special Forces squad that was involved in the stockyard massacre and the mudoken incident.Rob is a cool calm guy who can get the job done can be nice from time to time but dont piss him off and he won't leave a bullet lodged in your torso.

------------------------------------------

After Geremy's long chase of the "pirates" he decided to venture off and explore his new security booth,as he entered he went and sat down by the monitors and finished off the rest of his scrab cake.

dripik 05-12-2005 10:19 AM

OOC: Fuzzleman, please keep our advises in mind.
And I see there are some OOC's missing too.



RG-49: "Head of Security, I would like some sort of asignment. I have good mechanic and terminating skills..."

#7 Slig: "Terminating skills... Who doesn't have that in this factory?"

Rick: "Hear, hear."

#7 Slig: "OK, I would like you to patrol in the factory and check the machinery you encounter. Fix them if needed."

RG-49: "Accepted. I'm signing off, going to help my unintelligent mech-brothers."

*goes out of the Security Office*

Rick: "I have to get used to his form of speech. Mech-brothers... Odd..."

T-nex 05-12-2005 01:17 PM

OOC| oy.. really... i dun wanna repeat myself again... These n00bs can either go, RP decent or receive a warning from me.. i'm getting fed up with it. *is tired* :(

Anni looked at Math, and saw that he probably didn't wanna say anything. So she started walking away, wondering if she should try an escape atempt or not.
-----

Razer stared at Geremy, but was amused by his stupidity. So he just snickered, and started movung back to the security-room.

Gretin 05-12-2005 09:29 PM

Groll walks slowly into the cafeteria.

Groll:"Do I smell food? I'm starving!"

Sefon looked up at Groll and thought he looked familiar. He got up and walked towards the door, stopping next to Groll.

Sefon:"Hi, Groll, fancy seeing you here!"
He walked out of the door and around the corner before Groll could answer.

Splat 05-13-2005 03:25 AM

AS RG walked past Stivik, Stivik stopped him.

Stivik: "Hey, Robo-Cop, are you sure you're happy with Repture Farms as they are now? I mean, it's not exactly up to Mullock's general standards is it? You've got muds running around everywhere. Take a look at the monitor tapes! Arnie's working himself into a whole lot of trouble!"

Havoc 05-13-2005 03:35 AM

Math: Kix! Eh, wait. I was wondering what you thought of the result of the trail. I mean... you and Nick used to be alright with each other, but you seem to hate him now. He is a good guy, but still a slig.

---

Nick had left the cafeteria and was on his way to the Security room where he had a print of all the mechnical flaws that needed fixing. He wanted to get back to work, if only it was to clear his mind.
He grabbed the list from the table and left without doing anything els. First stop, the meat grinders. After Red Moose's incident down there, they had became pretty banged up. And the entire production of Rupture Farms depended on the grinding of meat. He made a quike stop at the RR to get his toolbox, then got to work.

dripik 05-13-2005 04:36 AM

RG-49: *looks at Stivik* "Slig organic, worker class. Even if the boss has unusual ways of running a factory, he's still effective. I saw on the camera captures that he sold lots of meat products to different companies. Another of my functions is to serve the boss of this factory and follow his orders without questions. I may have complained about the Mudokon organics, but there's no real problem with them."

T-nex 05-13-2005 05:28 AM

OOC: Anni's out in the stockyard, and Kix is somewhere insode Rupturefarms, Havoc... but we just pretende that Math is inside too then :)

-IC-

Kix turned around to face Math.

"I... I just find this whole case rediciolous, really.... I don't think that Anni should ever have started this trial, but i also think that now that i happened... Arnie could at least have showed some fairness. I mean, in this case, Anni's the victim.
But personally i think it's good it's happened like this. then at least she can learn a bit about the true relationship between natives and industrialists." she saidm while her thoughts were somewhere else.

-----

Anni still wandered in the stockyard. It was like she could hear the wild call for her. She was only a few miles away from freedom. Just the other side of the stockyard.
Then she lay down. How would she survive if she did escape? what would she eat?

"Hmm... scrabcakes... we have plenty of scrabcakes..." she said to herself while laughing.

Then she got up again and ran inside the Rupture farms, to collect some scrabcakes.

Splat 05-13-2005 06:34 AM

A pained look flashed over Stivik's face at being called "worker class".

Stivik: "Who do you work for? Is Arnie your boss or are you loyal to the top - to the rules set out by the Magog Cartel? you know this palce is primed for a rebellion! Arnie just came this close to punishing a slig for smacking a mud! Don't you see that that's wrong? With the Cartel's rules the only person in the wrong there is Arnie!"

T-nex 05-13-2005 06:43 AM

"Uh, scrabcakes here, scrabcakes there..." Anni said happily, as she took the boxes from the storage room.

"Oh, I need something to put it in." she said, and ran out with her hands full of scrabcake-boxes. Then she suddenly stumbled across the floor, and landed a few steps away from the door to the security-room.
She rubbed her head in pain, but then she heard voices. She crawled across the floor a little closer to the door, and listened to what Stivik said. Then she noticed that a box of scrabcakes was just outside the door. She quickly snapped it, so the other wouldn't see it. Then she listened closer, not making a sound.

Havoc 05-13-2005 11:57 AM

Math: Yea I think this was a good lesson for her. And I'm not saying you're wrong about Nick, but next to what happend he IS a decent guy, and you know it.

---

Nick: *Repairs meatgrinder*

mudling 05-13-2005 11:33 PM

ooc: i think a little bit of hipocrocy is going on, including me, but i won't say anything.
noe: i'm hungry, i'll go look for the cafiterria. (smells some scrabcakes) mmmm, fresh scrab cakes! (to himself) wait, i forgot, i'm a vegetarian.
(noe walks off, looking for the cafeteria, but then decides instead to just get to work, lgoing towards the stockyards. the fuzzles abandon him, and go towards the scrabcakes)

T-nex 05-14-2005 01:35 AM

OOC| Plz, don't make the fuzzles go near Anni... And what hipocracy(sp?) are you talking about?

"Well, yea... He was good enough, untill he started feeling so Odd damn sorry for himself. Like, do you remember some time ago, i was talking with him about what he had done, and then i get a this reply: "Why are women so impossible?" Well, that was really childish. It reall give me a good picture about how he really is. He doesn't even feel sorry, only for his own arse. So i'm not gonna talk to that guy for some time." she said, and looked at math, then she continued, " But i really understand that you try to see the best in him. You two arte like pals, aren't ya?"

mudling 05-14-2005 01:52 AM

ooc: i only accept bribes.:D (kidding) ok, the fuzzles will leave her alone. don't worry about the hypcracy, it's just i'm not exactly welcome in these forums, and it's making me a bit mad.

Splat 05-14-2005 02:37 AM

ooc: It's ok when you're posting well. Now you've got used to it you're not a problem. it's just when someone appears and starts breaking the rules and saying a load of rubbish that it gets irritating. You used to be really bad at first but you've pretty much got the hang of it now and you're doing alright.

I can't really say much for Stivik till Dripik shows up...

T-nex 05-14-2005 02:59 AM

OOC|NAh, you're alright Mudling... You have really improved.. Just don't do the little mini-events that has no point ;)

dripik 05-14-2005 07:07 AM

OOC: I'm back, we visited my grandparents. They don't live very close to the capital, you know. So I often go away for a few days. Anyways, I'm back again.
Mudling, you have really improved a lot, I agree.

And, RG and Stivik are outside the Security Office right now, so it would be difficult for Anni to sneak on them at the same place. :D



RG-49: "I disagree with you, Slig organic. The Magog Cartel's main goal is to earn moolah, as I see it. And belive me, I saw a lot of things since I was created. Every Glukkon is moolah-hungry by their nature, they only have different methods for treating Mudokon organics. I'm sure Glukkons give some sort of reports to the Cartel sometimes. And if they see that this factory is productive, they will not complain. Finaly, as I said earlier, my job is to follow the boss' orders without questions."

T-nex 05-14-2005 07:29 AM

OOC| Hmm, lol ok.. The previous posts just make it look like they are there.. Anyways, lets just change it to a dark corner or soemthing...

Razer whent back to the security-room, and looked at the computer-screen.

"Oh, someone's been into one of the workers profiles." he said tiredly, and pressed on the back-cutton.

Then she slammed himself down in the chair. He had suddenly got very tired. He looked a bit at the monitors, to see what was going on in rupturefarms. Then he whent outside to do a little. He felt that he needed to do something else then just sitting on a chair.

Splat 05-14-2005 08:24 AM

Stivik: "The Magog Cartel's laws clearly say that mudokons are to be treated as slaves and nothing else. It's just the way thing are done. A little leniency and... well, look what happened to the last Repture Farms! If you've been looking at the monitors you must no about the terrorist, Abe."

Stivik pauses and glances around. Razer had just appeared down the corridor but showed no sign of hearing their conversation. He glances around the passage but doesn't see Anni in the corner.

Stivik: "What would you say if... some one with a higher rank than... your boss... gave you an order? Would you still listen to Arnie?"

dripik 05-14-2005 09:01 AM

RG-49: "Negatory. As I told you many times, I take orders from nobody else than the boss of Rupture Farms himself. I can't help it, I'm programmed that way. As long as Arnie is the boss, I follow him."

---------------------------------------------

*#7 Slig sits down on his chair and looks at the screen, Rick stands next to his chair*

#7 Slig: "Let's see if we can find something about this registry."

*starts searching*

#7 Slig: "Ah, here it is... Rupture Farms Data Registry... Found on the 3rd level... That means we have to find a platform which takes us up there... Code required to enter the Registry... Where could that be?... Oh, here it is. I'll print it out. Take it, will you?"

Rick: "Sure."

*takes the piece of paper coming out of the printer*

#7 Slig: "That's all. Let's go then."

*they leave the Security Office*

Havoc 05-14-2005 09:09 AM

Math: You're mad about that remark? Oh come on, thats just his humor. And woman ARE impossible.

He grins and has a playfull look at Kix.

Math: And yea, me and Nick go way back. We both come from the old Rupture Farms. You know, when Mullock was still in charge? We experienced and survived my br... eh, Abe's rampage and now we came back to were it all started. We kinda lost everyone we knew in here back then. So the only firm holdon for us is eachother.

He was sillent for a moment.

Math: Anyway, I better go look for him, so I can get back to work. C ya around alright?

Splat 05-14-2005 10:54 AM

Stivik: "Fine. But be warned, Arnie is heading towards a lot of trouble that you don't wanna be caught up in when the Cartel catch up with him. And don't call me worker class again, I'm a higher rank than anyone here will probably ever know."

Stivik walks off angrilly then paused, spotting a pack of scrabcakes on the floor. He glances at the door to the stockroom which has been left open. He is sure it was closed when he came past earlier.

He looks wearily round the passage.

Stivik: "Hey, Robo-cop?"


ooc: Would RG have left by this point Dripik? Probably but he's your character, it's for you to say.

Gretin 05-14-2005 01:36 PM

Sefon decides to go out to the Stockyards. He came past the door to Abe's "execution room"
:

They passed a few rooms, then they stopped at a door which was sealed with wood and had 'NO ENTRY' spraypainted on them.

Sefon:"Hmmm..."
He walked up to the wall next to the door and put his hand against it.
Sefon (thinking aloud):"Strange... I can't sense anything beyond this wall... Oh well. I'll have to ask about this sometime."
He continued towards the stockyards.
_______

Groll, when nobody answered his question about food, decided to just help himself. He got himself some paramite pies and sat down, devouring them in a most ungainly fashion.

mudling 05-14-2005 02:05 PM

ooc:thanks everyone! :) i'm sorry i started out as such a bad poster.
(noe returns to the stockyards, and starts carring for the animals)
noe:awww, you're all so cute! but this is sooo boring, i'll guess i'll be off for a while.
(noe leaves, and finds a brocken chant supressor)
noe:well, i guess this thing isn't needed, better hide it from the robot. (he drags it into an emty room, and then decides to wonder more) well, maybe i can talk to someone here, this place is pretty boring, neh, mabye i can find some more animals around here.

T-nex 05-15-2005 01:59 AM

"The cartel???" Anni wondered for herself, "They are those bastards who had kept me in that lab."

She took a deep, silent breath, and didn't move a finger. She wanted to get away now, but wasn't sure if they'd see her. So she decided to wait till they were all gone from the corridor.
-----

Kix stared at Math.

"Well yea.. Se ya i guess. But there's one thing i don't understand... Why would he want to kill you if you were such good friends?" she asked wondering, and shrugged her shoulders.

Havoc 05-15-2005 02:18 AM

Math: Try to kill me? Nah, he just has his rage attacks every once in a while. Thats what happends when he gets pissed off. But I know Nick, it takes a lot before he gets mad. Not that I try to imply Anni....

*Has a doubtfull look*

Math: Right, I'm off now. See ya later!

Oddish 05-15-2005 10:05 AM

Ade: Oh dear, I think were doomed. There's no out way I tells ya.

Ade paneced

Lemon: Calm down Ade, I know the power is off here, the doors are shut, and were stuck here...

Ade: What your's point!?

Lemon looked at Ade

Lemon: Well.... I... we might have to get contatced outside, becuase the leevers to the open the doors are outside.

Ade: Oh spooch balls! There must be a way.

Lemon: Well look at the brightside, we got food here to last forever.

Ade signed

Ade: Arh.. mabey yer right, well atleast we got brew! mmm bone tasty surlping Soulstorm brew! I don't know what's in`em , I just can't stop drinkin'em. Hey look theres a vendo right there.

*points at Soulstorm brew vendo machine*

Lemon: Ermm.. Ade?..

Ade: Good old loving brew. ye-haw!

*Ade get's exicted*

Lemon: Ade... I don't know how to brake this to you buddy, but there no brew in the vending machine.


Ade: Oh don't be silly, of course there is.

Lemon sees "00" on the vendo machine

*oddly enought, Ade puches the big prurble botton with his back side of his paw*

Ade: :D

*waits*

Lemon: Errr.... :(

*Ade pushes again*

Ade:..... oh no

*and again, and again*

Ade: Erm, this is inpossble, there should be brew there, there should. Brew. There. Should.

Ade laughts nervously in a high wimper pitched

*pushes button, the big purple one*

Ade: I don't understand.. it's supposed to have brew, yes?

Lemon: Ade... there no Soulstorm brew... it's out of ORDER

Ade: Noo.. it's not true! No.. I won't beleive it. Noo!

Lemon: It's say "00" Ade

Ade: Noooo... it can't nooo! Noooooo!


Ade dramaticly express his upseting feeling torwards this tragedy

*lays on the floor shaking*

Gretin 05-16-2005 11:22 PM

(OOC: I just had a thought; Mudling is your character's name in any way related to the older form of the name "Noah?" Just curious.)

Sefon arrives at the Stockyards and begins to scan it with his eyes. (of course:))
He moves to what looks like the loneliest looking spot and, after looking around to make sure nobody was watching, he starts chanting. A blue orb appears in his hands and he stops chanting. He looks straight into the orb.

Sefon:"This is Sefon Haupet reporting. I haven't seen any sign of it so far, but there is one room I just passed that I'm a bit suspicous of. The door is covered with wood and 'No Entry' is painted on them, so there has to be something hidden there. However, I don't think that I'll try getting in there unless I have to, the boss appears to be a bit of a soft touch, but I still don't think it's worth the risk right now."

(OOC: I hope nobody has any objections to anything I've done so far?)

mudling 05-17-2005 02:26 AM

ooc: never heard of noah, sorry. i've been putting it off for a while, but i was wondering if i could create a character, but as a chipunk, or is it too small?
(noe hears the animals in the stockyards, something is makeing them restless, but he decides it is nothing and continues walking, and finds a injujed mudokon bird, but then it just turns inot a tiny green orb, and floats away)
noe: that was different. *thinks, and scratches his head* well, maybe i can convince the boss to make more vegetarian meals. *he heads off to find arnies*
ooc: that was an excuse for something noe to do, please don't take it too seriosly, i just can't think of anything else at the moment, sorry.

T-nex 05-17-2005 02:37 AM

OOC| Nah, create your Chippunk, just don't make it silly or anything :)

Splat 05-18-2005 05:17 AM

ooc: Talking of Arnie, WHERE'S DRIPIK????? I can't do anything till he turns up! Neither can Anni of course but T's got about 20 other characters so it dusnt bother her. WHERE ON ODD ARE YOU DRIPIK???

Oddish 05-18-2005 08:25 AM

It been 3 weeks. 3 bloody weeks stuck in a room with no light and no way out. Ade stroked his feathery beard. The area was surrounded with empety boxes of RF treats and products

Ade: .....

He said.

Lemon: Want a left over Rott-roll? It's the last one.

Ade: Did you make it yourself?

Lemon: No, of course not.

Ade: Pass it here then.

*passes the Rottroll over the flames*

*unwraps*

Ade: Oh right!

Lemmon: What is it Adey?

Ade: I won a prize!

Lemon: What did you win???

Ade: well it says ....

"Congratz! You tubbys of fat lard have won our magicifent prize! You and your mates get the chance to go to a FREE factory tour in Rupturefamrs!!!"

Ade:.. oh great, I'm so thrilled :fuzemb:

Lemon: Well we have already arrived.

Ade: It also says we get lifetime suppliey of ....Rottrolls...

*they looks around seesing hundreds, mountains of emptey packets of Rottrolls*

T-nex 05-18-2005 09:33 AM

OOC| I'm actually gonna wait too... Cos i'm havin' a lil' writer's block, and dunno what to write. I'd only do some weird One-liner post, and i wanna avoid that.

dripik 05-18-2005 10:36 AM

OOC: I check in everyday, but I don't have time to post that often. Exams and all, you know what's it like.

RG would stay where Stivik left him, OK, Splat?



RG-49: "What is it, Slig organic?... And by the way, you're not higher in ranks than any other Sligs here. Or working for Magog Cartel makes Slig organics supperior to others?"

Splat 05-18-2005 11:21 AM

ooc: Marvelous.

Stivik: "You're pretty smart for a prototype. You got a heat sensor or something in your head? It appears someone has been listening in on our conversation. So much for Arnie's perfect system."

T-nex 05-18-2005 11:45 AM

"Hmm? Uh oh, they didn't notice me, did they?" Anni thought for herself, and backed away, in the shadow.

"Working for the Cartel? i should have known, those bastards..." she then thought angrily, and felt like smashing something.
-----

"Uh, farewell i guess..." Kix said, and bend her head down.

She felt that all this shouldn't have happened, and that she couldn't just stay mad at Nick. He was her friend afterall. Anni had forgiven him too, kind of.
She shook ehr head slightly, and whent somewhere to clean anything up.