Chapter 16: Dawn of War

Warro was fighting some Outlaws with a sword. He stabbed one and then slashed another Outlaw's gun in half before kicking him in the chest. Maru was wrestling with a skinny Outlaw, the Outlaw moaned as Maru punched him in the head and then held him in a chokehold.

Park was using his spear to attack a group of Outlaws. He swung the spear from left to right, making them all trip up. He jumped onto an Outlaw, crushing his bones under the weight of his armor, the Outlaw howled with pain. Tury, Une and Aero were all firing their arrows towards the Outlaws. As one Outlaw went down, another stepped up and tried to fire his gun towards the tower. Tury dodged the shot and then sent a flaming arrow towards the Outlaw. The Outlaw was running around trying to put the fire out.

Nara and Oren were dueling with some Outlaws. Nara's curved dagger made it easy to deflect their knife attacks and then attack with ferocity. Oren punched an Outlaw and then threw him into the moat area. The Outlaw cursed as he tried to get out of the moat, but was struggling under the pressure of the water. Mern stood next to the tower and threw a dagger towards the nearest Outlaw, the Outlaw collapsed on the ground.

It looked like they were winning, but could they keep this up before more of the city re-inforcements arrived?

good fight scene, i liked Park's actions.

Seems to me that those outlaws are on orders to certain death.:D

Time for a bit of explanation. Emarka means; "A large amount of luck / The luckiest day".

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Chapter 17: General Chaos

Park just swiped his spear towards another Outlaw when he saw something in the distance. It was a golden flag, with a skull imprinted onto the fabric. "Look! It's their leader!".

The golden flag was covering a large mechanical travelling device, on the device was a large Outlaw. The Outlaw had numerous scars and was carrying a large axe. Engraved on the axe were the words "Death Tribe". The Outlaw guided the rolling device towards the nearest gate. Park noticed this and yelled, "We need the Prida Chief".

Nara was trying to hold off some Outlaws, a couple of the Fortuna and Honora fighters had some injuries and had to pull back. Une appeared as Nara's reinforcement and helped her to defend her line. Nara turned to look at her, "Thank you, Une Fortuna". Une smiled, "No problem, come on... let's make them run back to their mothers!". Nara smiled and focused on the attackers in the distance.

A few minutes later, Park saw the leader of the Prida clan. His armor was much thicker than the armor worn by Park. Galamos wielded two spears, his steel tipped boots made a lasting impression on anyone who saw them. Galamos looked at Park, "I will settle this". Park nodded, "Emarka sir". Galamos smiled, "Emarka on you as well, Park". A fight would happen fairly soon, Park could sense it.

Main characters are a writers biggest enemy and greatest friend. They make the story go round, but if you don't write in their shoes, they won't work with it. Just some advice.

And I look forward to reading Galamos spearing this outlaw.:D

that boss outlaw seems to be made of tough stuff.

Chapter 18: Only Warfare

The Outlaw reached the gate and climbed off his vehicle. Galamos stepped forward, "You led this ambush to our city. Why?". The Outlaw chuckled, "We placed a tracking device in a common Slig and observed his movements, leading us here. We plunder and pillage, we kill and burn, we slash anyone and everything in our way. The Death Tribe will never stop". Galamos sighed, "In that case... Shall we settle this in a one-on-one match?". The Outlaw laughed, "You don't stand a chance against me". Galamos smiled, "We shall soon see".

The Outlaw threw off his robe menacingly, it hit the ground with tremendous force. Park looked closely at the robe to see it had weights connected to it. It was obviously a garb used to train the body. Galamos withdrew his two spears, entering into a battle stance.

The Outlaw gave a yell and ran towards Galamos. Galamos twisted his body and jumped out of the way. He used his spear to slash at the Outlaw, leaving a small wound. The Outlaw swung his massive axe, the axe was flying through the air towards Galamos, but he ducked and ran towards the Outlaw. He plunged one of the spears into the Outlaw. He started walking away when he heard a laugh behind him.

i hope Galamos hasnt put himself in a trap.

That cheif is probrably like the Urak-Hai leader from Lord of the Rings.:D

Chapter 19: Resolution

The Outlaw got up and hit Galamos with one gigantic fist. Galamos was thrown to one side, Galamos stood up, his spear was still sticking out of the Outlaw's body. Galamos held his other spear in his right hand, "You're lucky to be alive". The Outlaw once more picked up his axe and swung it at Galamos. Galamos rolled out of the way just in time, he jumped onto the Outlaw's back and kicked it. The Outlaw gave a yell of pain and fell to his knees.

Galamos and the Outlaw started fighting again, the Outlaw kept trying to attack Galamos, but Galamos was far too quick. Galamos managed to slash the Outlaw many times, the Outlaw kept getting back up. The Outlaw then punched Galamos, but Galamos then stuck his spear into the Outlaw's fist, "You're too slow... Outlaw". As Galamos raised his weapon, Park looked away from the final blow.

The outsider was shaking, the computer chip in his hand. "I... I didn't know anything about that locator chip, honest!". The guard held the outsider up by his robe and raised his weapon. Nara raised a hand, "Hold, He is telling us the full truth about this. I believe him". The guard let go of the outsider's robe.

The computer chip was a small black box with a red circle in the center. The circle blinked on and off, like a GPS tracking device. The outsider held out his hand, Nara took the computer chip and smashed it. "Obviously he could not have been the only one. Question all newcomers about this and discover any remaining computer chips". The guard gave her a salute, "Confirmed". The outsider bowed to Nara, "Thank you". Nara smiled, "Let us take you back to the information point".

Galamos beat the outlaw pretty bad.

Time for a new phrase to be revealed; Demda - This is a shortened version of "I demand to hear the truth". Usually this phrase is offered to Honora clan members. Honora members are bound by this rule to tell the whole truth about a particular subject. However, this phrase should not be overused and never for personal matters of any sort.

I'm putting a cap of 20 chapters for this story, just so I can re-formulate some ideas and get a bit of breathing space. I will be continuing the Four Dominions story in due time.

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Chapter 20: Knowing Them

Park was tending to Galamos' wounds. Park dabbed a white cloth onto Galamos' shoulder, "What do you think that was sir? A warning?". Galamos shook his head, "It seemed more like, an aggressive takeover. This Death Tribe situation worries me". Park looked up at him, "How so, sir?". Galamos put his hand on his chin, "Well... we don't know how many of them there are. What if that was just a scouting party and we are all in serious danger". Park looked a bit shocked, "Do you think this is some kind of conspiracy?". Galamos sighed, "Hard to tell. We'll just have to wait".

Warro had found Tury. Tury wasn't too badly injured, but his arm was aching from the previous battle. Warro waved, "Hey Tury". Tury walked over, "Oh, Hi Warro. Everything alright?". Warro sighed, "Yeah, it was annoying to be woken up so early though, we'd just finished a long shift was well". Tury smiled, "Never mind, let's go see how the others are".

Honora members often stick to having a few close friends, most of these friends will be from other clans. The reason being that Honora members are famous for not talking about their injuries to each other. Park walked up to Nara, "Demda, did you sustain any injuries during the battle?". Nara smiled, "Negative, I did not sustain any injuries". Park chuckled, "Okay then, I guess that was a bit unnecessary then". Nara walked up to Park and put a hand on his shoulder, "Thank you Park Prida. You were checking my personal condition, I appreciate that".

= Epilogue =

The next day, a strange sequence of events occured. Sarouki, Galamos, Rikardo and Valhala, the four leaders of each clan called together a council and arranged to meet with one of the clan members. The room was dark and circular. The leaders wore black robes and sat on four thrones.

The nervous clan member stepped forward, "You asked to see me sir?". Sarouki spoke, "We are in need of your help. We have a quest you must complete. Take three of your closest friends, one from each clan. Your destination is north, to the Blizzard Mountains". As the clan member left the hall, Sarouki spoke once more, "Emarka... Warro Brava".

good edition. i'll be awaiting the next.

Appendix! Here's some extra bits for you to sink your teeth into!

Drawing of the clans; http://alexfili.deviantart.com/art/F...nfic-125711596

Here are the names of the leaders and the weapons they use;
=BRAVA: FIERCE WARRIORS=
Sarouki - Longsword

=PRIDA: JUSTICE KEEPERS=
Galamos - Two Spears, Leader

=FORTUNA: KEEN ARCHERS=
Rikardo - Repeating Crossbow

=HONORA: HONORABLE FIGHTERS=
Valhala - Sacred Sword

=DEATH TRIBE=
Oraka - Axe dude (the outlaw that Galamos defeated)

oh this is good, a bit of info. i like the pictures also.

I look forward to the next bit. Until then... Good job.:D

The next thing you can expect is a Four Dominions spin-off game. It will be in the style of a tower defense game.