Nice chapter, Dancing Steef-it was very descriptive! It was truly fantastic! :D I can't wait to see what else happens! :)

Yeah go on =D

You were kinda gone for a week. Was that a vacation?

well sort of or and i've been kinda busy working with our garden, ya know cutting the grass and so on...but it'll take longer time sending new parts in, that's why i send larger pieces at once so ya readers could read more and not wait for smal parts...:p well gotta go i'm gonna play on me Gamecube right now so... bye bye!

Bye, Dancing Steef! Have fun playing the Gamecube!! (I know I would! :lol:) We'll still be waiting for the next part of the story. ;)

hi again readers! here's some more of me story!



The Oracle - part four



Stranger woke up with a terrible head-ache. He had only figured out that he was inside some sort of a building, made of some strong bambosticks. He raised up on his reeling legs and tried to walk. At the same time he felt that his hind legs were chained up and the chains were stucked in the wall of the jail-liked hut. Suddenly a hoarse voice came from one of the hut's dusky corners. Stranger looked around in the little hut with a scared look for the owner of the voice. The voice said:

- You'll never get out of those chains without a key. You know, these chains can only be open by the one who's in charge for the Village's jail...and it used to be the Master, but now he has left the task to me.
- Who are you? What do you want from me anyway? Show yourself, said Stranger with angerness.

Abruptly, a shadow showed from on of the corners and soon a thin feminine body began to apear. Stranger rubed his eyes and after a couple seconds he saw that a female Legendary had come out from her hideout. She looked gently at him with her darkbrown eyes. She said:

- I heard from the Master that you're the Steef who intruded our land, is that correct?
- Intruded? I've never intruded your land! I mean the Grubb Leader and I were suposed to see the Oracle who lives on the other side of your territories in an ancient cave and...well we were first about to walk the long way around but then the Leader said that she knew a shortcut we could take instead, and so we did, explained Stranger to The female Legendary.
She nodded a little and said:
- If I shall be honest to you...I don't bother if there are any ones on our lands...
- What do you mean by that? Is there something I should know, asked Stranger carefully.
- I don't know if I can trust you, but at the same time it feels like you're trustworthy...alright if yu really want to know. I'll only tell you if you promise not to tell anyone of the other Legendaries in the village, promise?
- I promise, I wont tell anyone else, answered Stranger as he laid his hand on hers.
She sat down on the floor and strarted to tell him:
- Not long ago there were another spieces called the Toicers and they lived in our lands. They used to protect our territories and our tribe, but one day some hunters called the Wolclarks, a related spieces to the Wolwarks, came and tried to attack our homes, but then the Toicers defended us and defeated them Wolclarks. The Wolclarks didn't return after that so the leader of the Toicers, known as Strongus told our Alpha-leader that they couldn't protect us from something which didn't threating us or our lands so...they left our territories and has never returned since then. But It didn't take long time before the Wolclarks came back and terrorized us again. In that time we used to live on the ground, but these terrorists make us move high up in the trees and we've been here since the attack...and only the Toicers had the techinque and knowledge of fighting so it was kind of hard to defeat the enemies for us. Anyway we haven't got any threatings for a long time now, thanks to our method of being awake on the nights and sleeping on the days, which had given us more time to practice more on weapons, time to get married and so on... we only live up here, but the lands stil belongs to us... as one People, one Tribe.

- So you mean that your tribe were helpless like the Grubb tribe? But how do you survive so high up in the trees? I mean, the animals you hunt, are awaken on the day and...stranger began to say before he got interuppted by The female Legedary.
- Some of us are awaken on the day but that's only our guards and they use to hunt the food for us in the tribe, it's a hard work but they always succeed. At first, we were a people who were, well not helpless, but we hadn't the skills of fighting so, you may call it "The fightingless Legendaries of the South" but now we're one of the Strongest Tribes in the world.
- Right..., said Stranger with a sigh, What's your name?
- I'm not suposed to tell prisoners my name, but... you've shown me that you're trustworthy enough...my name is Liana, but you may call me Lia. What's your name?
- Well, the Grubb Leader calls me Stranger so I guess you can call me that to, answered Stranger with a smile.

hope ya guys liked it!

Cool story DS!... How old is that female legendary?

Nice chapter, Dancing Steef-the plot is building up perfectly in this story. :) Keep it going! :)

thanx everybody who's reading me Story! i'm writing on me story as much as I can right now and it's pretty tough... I know how the story is going to be, but it's hard to write it down I've many ideas bout the story, but I always choose the best alternative to make it both easier for ya to understand and for me to write it down.

well Duv... that's a good question! I haven't thought off that bfor but she's pretty young perhaps 17 or 20 years old. I hope you're pleased with my answer?

soon i'll send some more in

See ya

Dancing Steef

I totally understand-I haven't even updated my own fanfic in a looong time. :D But your story is great-keep up the good work. :)

Thanx Odd Chick! and here's some more on the story!



Liana and the Steef talked and had a nice time together. Suddenly she said:

- I'm afraid I have to leave you now, I've been here for a long time and the others would get worried if I didn't show up in the first place...She turned around and began to walk towards the exit. But before she went out, she told Stranger:
- I will return about a few hours, then it's morning and the other wouldn't know if I'm here and then we could talk some more if you want.
Stranger nodded and said with a joyfull voice:
- Yeah, It'll be great. I'll see you in the morning then Lia.

Liana went out from the prison and walked to her hut to get som rest before the next meeting with Stranger.


A couple hours later...


- Stranger! Stranger wake up!
- Hmmmm...What is it, said Stranger with a little irritated voice, Oh Sorry Liana I thought it was someone else What is it?
- Well...err... I've been thinking on you the last few hours and I've decided something I know you would like to hear, Liana started to say, I can't stand they helding you like this...
- What do you mean? Is there something wrong, asked Stranger curiously
- What I'm going to tell you is...well it's sounds wierd but, I want you and your friend to have your freedom back and I've a plan for you to manage that...the Legendary girl answered.
- The Grubb Leader? Is she Okay? Were is she, asked Stranger with eagerness.
- Easy now! She's in another prison higher up in the village and yes she's Okay. Anyway if you and the Grubb are going to escape these place then you must do it now. The people are awaken on the night and if you're trying escape then, then you're good as dead. But we stil have to be on our look out though cause some guards are guarding around these parts, but they're almost sleeping on the job so if we are lucky, then you can escape as easy as a pie.
- Why are you helping me? I thought you Legendaries hated intruders, or have I missed something, asked Stranger.
- You're right when it comes to intruders, but I spoke to the Grubb Leader before I went back to you and she told me that you were searching for other Steefs, and that's when I began to think. Anyway if you want to hear the plan then I suggest you hear it now or otherwise it'll get too late, said Liana.
- Alrighty go on! Tell me, answered Stranger with eagerness.
- Well first I'll unlock them fetters and help you out of here then I'll free The Grubb Leader from her prison. After that I'll lead you to the emergency-rope at the end of the village. Use it to climb down from these hights and thereafter you have to sneak among the bushes under the village; it's safer than to run in the forests were the guards may see you, the Legendary girl began to explain.
- But I've to see the Oracle before I escape! She's the only one who knows if there are any Steefs left and were they might live, please I really have to see her, Stranger said with an stressed voice.
- The Oracle? The old Grubb in our village?! She lives in of our most guarded huts in the villiage and it's pretty hard to get a time to talk with her...but...okay changed plans!
First I'll free you and then the Grubb Leader, but while I'm freeing her, then you go to the Oracle to have your "little chat" and when I have freed the Grubb Leader and lead her to saftey then I come back to help you to get out of there...it's pretty simple; Those two Guards have for a long time been in love with me so if I get thier attention then you might be able to go in the back way of the hut, but that's before I save your friend, do you understand?
Stranger nodded and said:
- Yeah I understand. It sounds like a great plan to me...let's see how it works!

Liana unlocked the fetters and sneaked carefully out from the hut with Stranger. A couple minutes they saw the hut were the Oracle was and the Guards who were standing outside it. Liana told Stranger to sneak behind some other huts to reach the Oracle while she was going to get the Guards Attention. Stranger sneaked behind the huts and soon he reached the backway of the Oracle's hut. He waited on the Legendary girl's signal; and it was a flirt. She talked to the guards, and commended them with proud. They fell for her trick and soon she sended the signal, and Stranger went in to the Oracle.

Woah, it's getting intense! :D This story is awesome, Dancing Steef-it just keeps getting better and better as it goes along. :) Keep up the great work.

hehe! thanx! I'm working on me next part, and i guess it'll take longer time to write it cuz i haven't write anything latley, been with friends and takin' care of the garden...but the story is going to get finnished on me vaccation, cuz when i begin in school again i'm having alot of new subjects and stuff and then they're havin my attention and there will be no time left for writing...so it has to be finnished on my summer vaccation. Anyway good luck with yer writing I'll hold my fingers crossed for ya! ;)

Dancing Steef

Thanks, Dancing Steef. Good luck with your stuff, too! :D

yer welcome Odd Chick! Oh and here is some moer on the story... it's jus' a lil part of the second chapter and a larger part of chapter three... well here it is!:D



Liana flirted once more and then she said god bye to the easy-fooled Guards. " While Stranger is in the Oracle's hut and havivg his 'little chat' then I've to rescue the Grubb", The Legendary girl thought as she went to the other prison where the Grubb was holding up.



Chapter three: Backstory


The Oracle was sitting on a chair beside a table, with her back turned around, and was eating on a fruit. Stranger saw her and when he just were about to make contact with her she said with an very old and rasped voice:
- You don't have to ask me, I already know what you were about to ask me...sit down and I'll explain.

Suprised, Stranger sat down on the other chair which was free and asked the Oracle:
- I guess you know why I'm here and perhaps what I'm going to ask you, but I want things and stuff clear so; Are there any Steefs left around these parts?
- Well...said the Oracle and put her fruit away, If you really want to know if there are any steefs left then you must say please before I'll tell you anything.
- Can you tell me if there are any Steefs left, please, said Stranger with a sigh.
- Well that's my boy...the Oracle began to say, You wondered if there are any Steefs left and well...yes there are.
- There are?! Oh Thank Oddness! But... said Stranger before he got interrupted by the Oracle.
- I'm not finnished yet! There are three Steef-tribes left here outside Mongo Valley. They used to be four of them, but the fourth one got destoyed by the Wolwarks...and you came from that tribe... the Steef- tribe of the North... those three tribes which are left, lives in the South, in the West and in the East.
- I don't understand...four tribes except one which has been terminated?
- The tribe which was terminated, was yours...answered the Oracle.

Stranger nodded and asked her with a sad voice:
- Dear Oracle...why live these tribes in difftent directions? Haven't they once been one tribe?
- ... I can tell you the backstory off these tribes, I guess it'll answer the most questions you have.

- For a hundred years ago, there was a large Steef tribe which lived in the heart of mongo Valley. The leader of this tribe was married to a female Steef and two years after their marriage she gave birth to a son, whom they named Alca. The Leader got so proud over his wife and son, after all the son was about to take the father¨s place when he'd grown up. Two years later the female Steef gave birth to triplets and they were sons to. The Leader got happy, but the problem was; that if he had four sons and every one of them should take his place directly after his death, then it would be problems.
The years past and soon the Leader became too old to manage taking care of the tribe. Alca, who had reached the age of twenty, was about to take over. The old Father had chosen him, because Alca was the oldest one of the sons. But the other Sons, which were known as Noka, Vivay and Carak got really upset of their father's choise and started to protest against him. The Father said to them with anger:
- Alca is the oldest one of you boys, and he knows what's best for the village.
- But Father, doesn't the law say that the new Leader who's going to take over, must get married first , asked Carak saracastic.
- Yeah, and Alca haven't even got engaged yet, which is a shame... but we in the other hand have got engaged and are soon going to get married, but do you choose any of us? No! Instead you choose Alca to be the next Leader and that's not right you know that, said Noka with a grin.
- You two be quiet! I've heard enough. Alca's taking over whenever he's married or not, shouted the Father with angerness.
- Then you're breaking the law, Vivay joined in, and it's not usual when a Leader like you breaks the law .

The Father sended them away to their huts and went to talk to Alca, about the leadership and other things which were related to the subject.
A few months later the Father left the leadership to his son Alca, but the Father would help him as much as he could before his death. Alca ruled over the tribe with wisdom and justice for his people, and the people got really pleased with their new Leader. But in the younger brother's hearts, the jealousy were growing and began to transform in to dark madness. They didn't like when their older brother took all the people's attention from them, after all each one of the three younger brothers wanted to be a great Leader, a better one then Alca. Noka wispered to the others:

- We can't jus' letting our big brother taking care of our tribe like this...Father lets Alca take over his role as the Leader, but what do we get instead? Only standing in the shadow of a spiolted loser, that's all!
- Your right Noka, but if we're going to bask in the light of a loser, then what do you think it's best for us to do to change this... missunderstanding, asked Vivay.
- Perhaps we could try to make the people vote on one of us four, which they would like to have as a Leader but... we'll have to wait to mention the voting cause if we say something about it then Father will stop us...said Carak with a deep voice.
- You mean that if we wait with the voting, maybe after our Father's death, then... said Noka.
Carak nodded as he grined with proud.

Ooh, getting VERY intense.
You really have this great way of creating cliffhangers.
Way to go Dancin'

Great chapter, Dancing Steef-and yes, I agree that it is getting intense, too. This is a perfect example of what jealousy can do to people. ;) Keep up the great work! :D

thanx! here's some more! Enjoy! :D

Some months later the Father died in pneumonia and all the people were crying in sadness. Alca and his mother were the ones who cried most of them. The younger brothers cried to, but in them hearts they laughed in joy, because now they could have their voting without getting stoped by some old fool. The people gathered around the old Leader and four of them carried him to the graveyard to bury him, like they've done with their other Leaders along through times.
Next day the younger brothers decided to tell their new Leader about the voting. Noka who was going to do the talking said to the others:
- Alca is more sad than he'd ever been before...almost depressed, if we are lucky then he'll leave the leadership to us directly after we'd mentioned the voting...but we have to be prepared for anything, our big brother's stubborn like an Elum.
- If Alca would leave the leadership to us then who's going to be the Leader, asked Vivay.
- You idiot! Look, we'll have to let the inhabitants doing the voting... the leadership may wait, answered Noka with an irritated voice.
- Knock it of guys! I know Alca more than you two and he'll not leave the leadership to us that easy...we can only hope that the people will vote on anyone of us four and if the luck is on our side and someone of us three become the Leader then he'll rule well as a good Leader would, Agree, asked Carak them.
Both of them agreed.
They went to see Alca as were sitting outside his hut and talking to some of his friends. One of his friends who was ten years older than him asked:
- How do you feel now Alca to be the Great Leader? Is it good or what?
- It's good but... I miss my Father alot...answered Alca with a lump of cry in his throat.
- Oh...I see. I'm sorry...
- It's alright...It just that when my Father lived we used to do fun things together like...like go fishing, wrestling and talking... you know doing Father and son-things.
- I understand...but I hope you'll get over it. Your Father was about sixty years old when he died so that explains alot. Anyway I was thinking...haven't you thought about to get married yet? When I was in your age my Father told me to get married and a couple or maybe three years later I got married to Trialy. And now we're parents to two five-year old girls and soon we're having our third baby...aahhhh it's lovely to be a father...Imagine it Alca that about a couple years you'll having a wife that loves you and two,three or maybe four kids running around and playing...
- Yeah...that sounds great but... I guess I'm not ready to get married...I'll rather wait until I am.
- It's up to you Alca, you decides what's best but...don't forget...
Alca smiled and said:
- No I'll not forget... I'll promes you I wont.
They all laughed with happyness. Suddenly one of the friends saw the brothers and said:
- Alca look here comes your brothers...they're looking quite...quite happy?

I didn't write so much this time cuz I haven't got the time to write that much...anyway next part will be more of what shall I call it... more of exciting and yeah...you'll know soon.

see ya!

DS

Nice work, Dancing Steef. The backstory of the Steef tribes is very interesting...Poor Alca. :( Anyway, keep it up! It's still very good. :)

Thanx Odd Chick! and as I promissed the next part will be more of action and a bit of dramatic... here it is, enjoy!


Chapter three: Backstory- part two




Meanwhile at the other prison where the Grubb-Leader was holding up...

A couple of guards stood outside the prison and talked to each other. One said:
- I wonder what our Alpha-leader will do to that smelly little Steef which the Master and his apprentices captured beside the river...
The other one licked his lips and said:
- You know if the Alpha-leader should hold a cermony or a party just for fun, then our stinky friend would be the host of the night...Mmmmm I really love the smell of a roasted Steef...
- Yeah. And they're pretty tasty to, said the first one and laughed with an evil grin on his lips.

Liana who was sneaking behind the prison heard what the guards were talking about and thought " Shit...I've to hurry up rescue the Grubb-Leader and warn Stranger before they realize that he's gone...now where is the f***ing back door?" The Legendary girl found the back door, unlocked it with a key of hers and went in. She saw the Leader sitting tied up with some thick ropes in the corner of the room. The Leader cried a little and said to herself:
- Oh...it's all my fault...I should have told him about not to make fires at the mornings in the forest...Oh Stranger where are you when I need you?
- I know it's hard but...nobody's perfect, Liana started to explain.
The Grubb who'd first looked down on the floor looked up and saw her. With a quite sad but also a bit depressed face the Leader asked:
- Who are you and...what do you want? If you're here to kill me then just do it! I can't stand being held like this!
- I'm not here to kill you... Liana started to say, I'm here to rescue you and your pal...
- Stranger? Is he here? where is he? I want to talk to him quickly, please...
- Eh, calm down your crazy lizzard! And be quiet for Odd's sake! If the guards who are guarding this place hear you, then we both are toast...so listen up!

The Grubb calmed down and started to listend what she had to say.
- I've helped your friend out from his prison and guided him to the Oracle, so he's having his little chat with her right now...Oh and by the way I thought it would be nice to rescue you to...just for fun.
- Why are you doing this for us, asked the Grubb with curiousity.
- It's along story, but to make long story short... the Alpha-leader doesn't respect me as I am and that's kind of...a terrible thing. Not long time ago the Alpha-leader proposed to my sister but she in the other hand didn't like him that much so she said no to his proposal. The wierd thing is that I had a little chat with my sister the night before she said no to him and it was about the proposal...one of the alpha-leader's bodyguards was outside her hut and spying at us. He heard what we were talking about and directly after we'd got finnished, he retuned to the Alpha-leader and told him everything he'd heard. Next day the Alpha-leader orderd me to clean the prisons around the village and if I didn't do it he would...do something terrible to my sister...and after that he'd never given me the respect I wanted...it feels like that I don't belong here, nobody cares about me so I don't care if any of our prisoners escapes...
- I understand, said the Leader with a gentle voice.

Liana smiled and said:
- I don't have much time left talking to you now, so I better free you from these ropes and lead you to the emergency-rope that'll lead you to a safer distance under the village. Stay there while I help Stranger out from the Oracle's place.
- Okay...and Thanks for doing this for me and my friend, we really preciate what you're doing, said the Grubb with gratefullness.
The Legendary girl nodded and picked out a knife from one of her tiny bags and began to sickle the ropes. When she got finnished she said to the Grubb:
- Let's go, before it's too late! C'mon jump up on my back and I'll lead you to the exit.
The Grubb-leader jumped up on her back and then they ran of to the emergency-rope.


While back at the Oracle's hut...



- What hapend next, asked Stranger with eagerness.
- Well... where was I...Oh yeah now I remember...


Alca saw his three brothers and said to them:
- Noka, Vivay and Carak what a suprise! I didn't expect you to come, here sit down!

The brothers sat down and began to talk to him. Noka said:
- Alca... there's something we want to tell you and it's quite important to all of us...
- Tell me, please I want to know what's on your minds...Is there a problem, asked Alca.
- Hehe, not exactly a problem but there's stil something...
- Oh c'mon tell me I want to help you guys, don't be so shy.
- Easy brother... we're giong to tell you, Vivay joined in, Noka go on and tell him!

Noka cleared his throat and began to tell to the young Leader.
- You see... Father choosed you as the next leader and left us behind...and now we want, as your brothers just make an simple request...
- Go on, said Alca with a calm voice.
- ...I Noka, Carak and Vivay wants to have a... what shall I call it hmmm...a voting contest about who's going to be the leader.
When Alca heard them mentioned the voting contest he stood up and said to his friends to leave them. Then Alca said with disappiontment and anger:
- You know the law and you know me... And I decide that there will not be a voting contest until the day I'm gone. Do I have make myself clear?

Noka became quiet and so did also Vivay, but Carak raised his voice to Alca and said:
- Our Father left the leadership to you, but he didn't gave us a chance to become the Leader he'd wished did he?...So tell me Alca; Why can't we just try to have this little contest? It'll give us a chance to make us change our minds and other things.

soon i'll have my real vaccation at my relatives place and then it'll take longer time before i send some more in... i'll send more in, but it'll take it's time. Then I send larger parts in I think it's the best.

See ya!

DS

I absolutely love your story, Dancing Steef, you are such a good writer and artist!

Keep up the good work, I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Thanx Ann Neely and to everybody else who are reading my story! I'm going to have my vaccation on thursday this week... and as a your writer may I ask you readers a favor? ya see... I use to be on this site about 15 minutes each day and write and send more on me story, but now when I'm going to have me vaccation it'll get little more complicated to do it... I'm suposed to me at me grandmother's place and she has a comp. but she's afraid I'm going to infect her comp. with some f***ing virus and all of those shit things... anyway I guess I might be able to send me story...when she doesn't know I'm on the net:D:p but I wonder if you readers could ya know...update this site, jus' send an email to this site and it'll be good. I don't want this site to disappear as my Odd-poem thread and it'll be a shame if this disappers to isn't it?

well here is some more on me story enjoy! it's not much but I sended in it anyway...


Alca shouted with angerness:
- Knock it of! I've heard enough! There will be NO voting contest and that's the way it is! If anyone of you three tries to have this contest anyhow... then he'll meet my deepest anger which no-one has ever met before... and don't make me loose my temper. The one of you who choose to do it have to leave the tribe and never return. Do you understand?
- I understand, Carak said as he turned around, Loser... Let's go brothers.

They walked away to their hut and sat down on the carpet. Vivay suddenly said:
- How are we going to have this contest now? Alca will not leave the leadership to us and if we're having this contest anyway he'll send us away from the tribe...
- Eh, calm down a bit! We stil have a chance to have our voting contest without getting discoverd by our loser to brother, said Carak with a sarcastic voice.
- What do you mean Carak? There is no way we can do it! If you and Noka are going to do that then I'm not helping you two, said Vivay.
- Oh really? It doesn't matter if you're joining or not, 'cause if he figures out that we're having the little contest anyway then he'll send us away and that includes you to. After all you were helping us in the begining...said Carak and grined.
- It's not fair, said Vivay with a sad look in his eyes.
- What is fair? NOTHING is fair! And that's it, yelled Carak.
- Carak's right Vivay... Alca is too selfish and don't care a thing about us, if he hadn't been selfish, then he would left the leadership to us without any argue... I suggest we fight against Alca and make him weak and powerless then we take his place. The only thin we have to do is how and when we're going to do our attack, asked Noka.
- Good thinking, but then we need to have a plan... a very good plan, said Carak and smiled with an evil look in his eyes.

bye see ya soon!

DS

Absolutely great, DS.
I really really like this story, and I don't think this thread will vanish soonly, so don't worry.
I'll (or We'll)be waiting for updates as long as... as... you need to...
Aww, I suck at english sometimes.

We'll just wait 'till your next update.

See ya next time.

thanx BBB! and well i'm going home about two days and then i'll send some more in to you readers:D ;) I've written one an a half page on me vaccation, it isn't much but it's better than notheing at all :) anyway on thursday you'll get my story!

See ya!

DS

Nice chapter, Dancing Steef! It's really getting intense-even more than before! :D

hehe thanx Odd Chick! and sorry that I didn't send me story in yesterday, I was so tired after my vaccation... I went by train and it took almost two hours to get back home:( anyway here's a new part of the story and well enjoy!


Chapter four: Frey – part one




When Liana had return to the Oracle’s hut she saw that the guards had went away from their position outside it. She thought “ It’ll soon grew darker and then the rest of the tribe will wake up. And when the Alpha-leader recognize that the Steef and the Grubb’s gone then he’ll kill me...I have to warn Stranger before it’s too late!” She went in to the hut and the first thing she saw was that the Oracle talked to Stranger. The Oracle stoped talking and said:

- You don’t have to hide my little friend, c’mon in! I knew you should come so I didn’t get supriced. You’ve done a great job girl and I’m proud of you! You know...you are taking a big risk to save this young Steef ‘s life here and...well as much as I know, the Legendaries doesn’t like newcomers, but you have shown that there are some goodness in the hearts of your people...oh my, oh my...
The Legendary girl took a seat and said with an ashamed voice:
- Well uhm... thank you but I didn’t know that myself, that I was the chosen one to save a Steef and his Grubb from my own village... It’s kind of odd, isn’t it?
- Not that odd my dear...maybe it’s odd but not as odd as the Steef over here...his story and future are pretty...amazing and yes quite odd, said the Oracle and laughed a bit.

Stranger gave a strange look to the Oracle and just when he should ask the Oracle said:
- I know you’re full of questions, but you see... the backstory about the Steefs is quite massive and as you may have noticed already... I can tell you the rest but it’ll take longer time and now when the night’s falling then I guess we can’t do it...
- She’s right Stranger, the Legendaries will soon recognize that you’re gone and also your friend...Liana joined in.
- But how am I going to find out were these tribes destinations are? I can’t just search all over the world to find them, it’s kind of hard to do and I REALLY need to know where they’re...please I have to know...Stranger beged.
- Eh, don’t you worry my friend...I know someone who may help you. His name is Frey and he’s also an oracle, but more powerful and more wise than me. You see he has traveled around the world and discovered things nobody has ever seen or heard of before... and he’s old as the mountains. Frey is not a Grubb he’s Wolclark.
- A Wolclark, shouted Stranger and Liana with a supriced voice at the same time.
- Yes a Wolclark. I see you two are quite supriced that a Wolclark had the ability of knowing everything. He doesn’t live with the other Wolclarks though, ‘cause they thought that he was some sort of an old fool who were pretending to know everything so...Frey moved far away from them to find a better place to live on and he found a beautiful place in the deepest and darkest corner of the Humble Mumble forest. He build a little cottage and he has stayed there since then... anyway you should be leaving now while you can. Oh I almost forgot! Here’s a map and there’s were he lives, said the Oracle and pointed at a dark spot on it and above it, it said written “ The deep Humble Mumble swamp”.
- This is where he lives... and another thing; he doesn’t let everybody come in to his cottage at least not without a password, said the Oracle as she yawned.
- A password? What’s the password then? You who has the knowledge of knowing should know, right, asked Stranger.
- I may know everything, but don’t push me and don’t make me use my powers at you!
- Oh sorry, I didn’t know that you would get so upset, said Stranger with a laid-back voice.
- Anyway... I’ll tell you the password...the password is Black Lizzard...he change the password from time to time so...if you try to use it more than once, then he wont open for you, said the Oracle with a tired look in her eyes.
- We have to go now Stranger before it’s too late, c’mon let’s move, said Liana as she rose up from her seat and went towards the exit.
- Alright let’s go...said Stranger and before he went away he thanked the Oracle for her help and giudence.




Chapter four: Frey- part two




When they’d reached the bottom of the village, Liana called on the Grubb Leader and as a sniper bullet the Leader ran out from her hideout and jumped in to the Steef’s arms with happyness. She said with joy:
- Oh Stranger I’m so glad you’re here and you’re stil alive! I thought first that them Legendaries had left you in the forest or had killed you!
- Yeah, yeah...humph! You’re going to squeze me to death if you’re huging me like that, said Stranger with a chock.
- Oh sorry Stranger, but you see I was so scared that they’d done something bad to you that’s why I reacted...explained the Leader as she climed down from him.
- It’s alright... and by the way the Oracle told me that there were some Steef-tribes left and she also told me the backstory of them...but not all of it so she gave me a map and pointed out a place were another Oracle lived. And I guess that he would tell me the rest of the story for me, explained Stranger to her as he showed the map.
- Hmmm, sounds great to me...well where do that oracle live then, asked the Leader.
- In the Humble Mumble swamp, that’s what the Oracle said to me but...I’m kind of sucpisious when it comes to swamps and all of those things, said Stranger and streched.
- Well I better get back to the village before they began to look after me...Liana paused, and Stranger be on your guard...you never know what sort of creepy creatures hiding in the swamps... and promise me to be careful, you promise?
- I promise you, I’ll be careful so don’t you worry ‘bout anything, answered Stranger while he took her hands. He thanked her for rescueing them from the prisons and guided them on the way.
She smiled, let go of his hands and climbed up the rope.

Nice chapter, DS, post more soon!

Nice Chapter :) Write more!

Aww, she will.
Very nice chapter, DS. I won't rush you, so um, you just go and rest,
and I hope to see s'more of your cool writing style.

See ya.

thanx everybody! and yes, as BBB said; I WILL send more of my story, but it'll be another day, perhaps about two or three days... I want me story to be a story with quality, if ya guys know what I mean...;) anyway thanx again for reading it I really preciate that!

See ya!

DS

Great chapter, Dancing Steef. ;) A swamp, huh? Sounds really cool. Anyway, you rest....Get to writing the story again when you have time and don't rush just for our account. ;) Great work! :)

thanx Odd Chick! And let me apologize for not have sending in a new part of me story when I said I should, but you see; my comp got infected with virus and some shit so I wasn't able to send me new part which was a shame:(... anyway here's the new part and I hope you'll like it!


Chapter four: Frey - part three



As well as they were sneakning among the tall gras and the dusty bushes, the sun began to go down in the west, and left a stripe of beautiful colours at the horizon. For five hours Stranger and the Leader had been wandering. Both of them were very exhausted and needed to rest, but the strength and the obstancy made them continue. After a couple hours the Grubb Leader stoped and took a look at the map. Stranger stoped to and asked:
- Where are we?
- Well according to the map we're close to the swamp now and if we follow the smal road over there then we'll shortly reach it, answered the Leader as she pointed at a little road.
- Right... how long is it to Frey the oracle nr two, asked the Steef.
- Hmmm...let's see...yeah well I'm not sure but I guess it's about five miles that's only my guess though, so I can't tell if the way is shorter or longer, said the Leader as she put the map in her rucksack.
- You're looking pretty tired...do you want to rest a bit, asked Stranger kindly.
- No, that's not nessesary... I'll make it I just... I just need something to eat that's all... answered the Grubb with a tired voice and with an exhuasted look in her eyes.
- So, do you have any food left or?
- Of course I have, but it's not much... You see, I thought we only would be gone a couple or three days, but we've been away for almost a week and the Grubbs in the village may wonder what has hapend to us... I hadn't expect this journey to be so long and I didn't brought that much food for both of us so, I have decided to return home...
- But you can't do that! I need your help and guidence and without you then... I'll never find Frey or any of the Steef tribes! You've got to stay and help me! Please I can't make it without you!
- Oh nonsense! You can make this trip alone... first you're stronger and faster than me, second you're wearing great Steef armour plus an dubble barrled crossbow... and I was only about to guide you to the Oracle at the first place and nomore than that. And after all this searching for other Steefs is a quest for you, not for me... and the food which's left can only feed on person am afraid, said the Leader with both a sad and a saracastic voice.
- You're making a misstake you know... I mean if we reach Frey's place and he tells us where the Steef tribes are then... it'll be much more easier to find 'em and that's not all... the Oracle told me about the Steef tribes but she also mentioned something about Carak, your old pal.
- WHAT?! But I thought Carak was gone for ever...If I'm not mistaken he must be around 40 years old, cause it was 20 years since I saw him and then he was about twenty years old...anyhow why are you telling me this now?
- I thought you would like to see him again, wouldn't you... and if I'm not misstaken then he would like to see you to, don't you think?
-...errr...I guess your right about that, but how are we going to make this trip with so little food I mean there are nothing eatable out here in the swamp and it'll take long time before we get out of here and the forest as well... but if we're stinting with the food by eating a smal part of it then I guess we can make it, said the Leader.

Stranger smiled and said with proud:
- I knew you would change your mind. C'mon let's have sometinhg to eat and then we'll continue our trip to Frey.

more of the story will come soon!

DS

Woo! Update!
Well that was an interesting chapter... Food.:D It made me hungry, so I'll go and make something to eat.

Laterz

Yes, an interesting chapter it was...(Gaahh! I'm speaking like Yoda again! :D) Anyway, the lack of food part makes the story very interesting and a bit dramatic. I can't wait to see the Leader's reaction when she sees her old friend. :)

glad ya liked it guys! I haven't written any new part yet cuz I've been gone for a couple of days, ya know being with friends and been with me family n' so on... anyway I'll send some more in soon so don't ya worry;)

*writes new part*

Here's more on the story for ya readers:D enjoy.



Chapther four: Frey - part four



It had started raining with potent and large puddles of water began to fill the deep lichens around the swamp. Stranger and the Leader were seaking after a place to settle down on to wait for the raining to stop. The Large puddles level got higher and transformed in to a great flood. Suddenly the Leader sliped on some slipery stones and fell in to the water. Stranger reached his hand to take hers, she grabed it and he pull her up from the mighty water. He put her on his shoulders to make sure that she didn't fell in to the flood again. The Leader said with a chock and a frightend voice:
- Oh... Thanks pal! I thought I was a goner...phew. Stranger if you weren't here then I would be lying at the bottom of the flood by now, thanks again!
- Yeah, yeah no problem... Just calm down and it'll be ok, said Stranger as he looked around for a shortcut with screwed-up eyes.
- Okay... We have to find Frey's cottage as fast as we can before the weather gets worse! C'mon hurry up, said the Leader as she also began to look around for a shortcut.
As well as they were searching, suddenly a voice ecoed through the swamp. Stranger listend. "Over Here!" the voice called. The Leader turned her head to the left and saw something grey jumping up 'n down and waved with it's hands. She gloated with amazement and shouted, while she pointed at it:
- Stranger I see something over there!

Stranger turned around and saw it to. He screwed-up his eyes to see what it was and shouted:
- Who are you?
The voice answered:
- I'm the One whom you seak! I'm Frey!
- Frey?! Great! How are you?
- I'm just fine! I know how you can across the flood. Just climb up the tree behind you and jump to the other tree right beside it. Keep going till you reach my place! The whole swamp is inundated by water, but my cottage's stands on a "little isle" now so it wouldn't be that hard to find it. Good luck to both of you! I see you at my place!
- Okay. Thanks Frey, shouted Stranger thankfully and began to climb up in the tree.
Frey, the Wolclark Oracle wispered a magic word, lifted up his hands in the air and then disappeared.



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After some jumping, and some searching for the Oracle's home, they finaly found the little cottage. It had stoped raining and the sun peeked among the clouds and sended it's rays of sunshine at them. Stranger climbed down from the tree and went towards the cottage. Unexpected, The Wolclark who was in the cottage went out and welcomed them in to the house. When they were inside it the Leader asked him:
- I thought that there was some sort of password involved... why?
- I heard from the Grubb Oracle, whom you met before me, that you were on an important mission... and she asked me to tell you the rest of the story about the Steefs history, am I correct, answered Frey.
- Your correct when it comes to the story, but...how in the name of Odd did you find it out from the Oracle? I mean she lives in a accient cave...well now she's with them Legendaries, but anyway it's far away from here and she's to old to walk here by herself 'cause of her age, said the Leader with a supriced voice.
- I use something which is called telepathic conection to the spiritworld, and well when I use this I can let my spirit leave my body. I often do this trip to talk to other Oracle's around the world, and this time when I was on this "little trip" I met the Grubb Oracle's spirit and then she left her message to me about you. Ahhh it's so wonderful to be out sometimes... and let me tell you something else; when the spirit leaves the body then it becomes young and healthy, so it can travel long ways without to rest on the way to it's goal... pretty amazing if you ask me, he he! Enough about me, let's get to the story, shall we? Please, take a seat.

Stranger and the Leader nodded and took a seat beside a table. The Wolclark began to tell them the rest of the Story.

Oooh, a cliffie! I bet that the wolclark's history is going to be very interesting. Nice chapter, DS. ;) You really know how to set the mood of a story. :)

Thanx Odd Chick! and yes the Wolclark's history are going to be quite interessting and both a lil action;) I'll be off about five days, me and my family are going to take a trip and the last day I'm goin' to be on a carneval with my pals, playing samba music:D I'm jus' longing for that now:) anyway I'll write a new part on Friday but I send it in on Saturday...
I'm glad yer Fine now;)

See Ya 'bout a week!

DS

Wut? New chapter? Oh! I missed that one. Oopsie.:)
Cool chapter DS. ;)
And um, have a nice carneval and see you next week.:)

Bye, DS! Have fun at that carnival. ;)

Another great chapter, DS! Have fun!

I'm back! Hi everyone I've missed all of ya :) and I'm happy to be back on the forums. The vaccation or the trip was VERY good and I really liked it alot;) the bad is; that there will not be any carnival for me:(:(:(:(:( which's very bad cuz I really wanted to go but some problems got in the way so...
Anyway enough 'bout my trip and the carneval...I'll write some more on the story and send it in as fast as I can it wont take so long. On Saturday...yeah.

See Ya soon!

DS