Woah, that was very entertaining, BBS. :) You just pack all of your stories with action, don't you? :D I love it-you did a great job with that chapter!

Mmmmmmmm...Grilled fleech.
Right now, me and slug were eating fleeches and making Paramite pies.
Monty was selling weapons, and richey was letting a river of drool pouring out of his mouth, but the sligs didn't realisee were it was coming from, so they filled up there mugs!
"Would you like to buy a Vomit gun 10,000?" Monty asked two sligs.
They both replied "P*ss off!"
Monty's reaction was squirting a blast of spew at one of the sligs, and the other laughed.
Suddenly, the slig wined, and he started to vomit, and Puke poured out of his eye sockets.
Another new feature, I thought.
Suddenly, a huge Paramite came down, and grabbed Grunt.
I through a pie at it, but it stayed there.
A slig called Dock slowly picked up a blowpipe and blew.
A dart fired into the paramite's neck, and it dropped dead.
Suddenly, a stampeed of paramites galloped out of nowhere.
All the sligs started running for their lives.
Then, we stopped.
Richey suddenly fired at every single cable around, with the ripper.
One by one, a pole fell down over the pens.
We ran for our lives once again.
Eventually, we skidded down a huge cliff.
Impact!
We all crashed down on the ground, and looked around us.
There was a large rock in the centre of the bottom.
All around the stone, there were scorch marks.
We turned away, to see the monosaic lines...

That chapter was hilarious! :D Vomit pouring out of the slig's eye socket? That's so insane, it's funny! Nice job, BBS. I know I keep saying that, but this really is a good story.

We walked over to the cliff.
Suddenly, two robots rolled out of the temple, and unfolded.
They looked like enlarged robotic Woodlice enchanced with laser guns, and standing on two of their six legs.
"Freeze!" One shouted.
"The natives have got more futuristic." I whispered to Grunt.
They cave a chirping sound off and 3 more came out.
They circled the army, and Slim and the guru walked out of the temple.
"Like my new idea, Robolice?" The guru said.
The five 'Robolice' aimed their guns.
Suddenly, a hole army of Sligs parachuted out from nowhere and landed around the Robolice.
The robolice suddenly transformed into mobile mode and rolled to the guru.
"You are so out numbered!" Ziggy laughed.
"You may think that, Zigget, but you are the ones who are out numbered."
The hole army peared down the cliff.
About 1 million Mudarchers, tommahawkers and Robolice stood below us.
We parachuted into the valley.
The mudarchers were shooting at us like we were swarming wasps.
Sligs all around me were falling because their paracute had been shot.
But the sligs survived the fall.
Suddenly, a robolouse aimed, and fired.
Me, Monty, Richey, Grunt, Slug and Zigget stared at the blue ball of energy aiming for me.
It split up into six and hit our parachutes.
They vaporised, and we fell down onto the mud...

Robolice! That is a really cool idea that you came up with, BBS! I enjoy cool robot-fighting scenes in a story! That was a great chapter, BBS! Keep 'em coming! ;)

We all landed with a thud.
I stumbled up, kicked a mudarcher in the stomach as he was shooting me.
Slim, the remaining and founder of the Sumo-Wrestling Mudokons was now walking towards me with 2 new sumos.
"I would like to introduce you too my new members; Chub and Squash." Slim said as he pointed at them.
I chuckled and pulled out a sharp Blade-like Boomerang.
I chucked it at Chub, who screamed, and it sliced his hole stomach off.
Monty walked up with some scales and pushed Chub on.
"You just lost 40 stone!" Monty chuckled, as he stabbed the mud in the chest with his razor-sharp Claws.
"He didn't last very long, did he?" Grunt laughed.
We ran off, and a deep grey mist came in.
Suddenly, a slig got pulled down into the mist.
I ran over to where the slig had been.
I put my hand down into the mist.
I held in my vomit as I touched a soft, squishy thing and felt a bone.
"The paramites! They're attacking!"
It was too late, sligs were disappearing fast.
"Two can play at this game." I said.
"Slug, take off your pants."
He took them off.
"Now slug, you go under the mist and find and kill all the Paramites! You do the same Grunt!" I said.
The two went under into the mist.

"I just saw something." Grunt panicked.
"Oh, relax. We've already just killed 5 Paramites." Slug said.
Suddenly, a paramite jumped from out of nowhere, and tried to attack.
"I told you!" Grunt screamed.
Slug grabbed his knife, and so did Grunt.
The paramite charged in, and fired some web at them.
Slug's arm got caugh in the piece, and was now stuck to the floor.
Grunt dropped his knife, and popped his head up.
He saw Slim running along.
Slim saw him, and went running towards him.
Grunt popped his head down, and lured the paramite next to a rock.
Suddenly, a huge stubby green foot stood on the paramite's back, and there was a snapping sound.
Grunt un-tied Slug, and they slithered back to Me...

Nice work with that chapter, BBS. :) I wonder who the person that squashed the paramite with his foot was? :D I'm sure I'll find out in the next chapter.

Marty & Timothy's return!
 

A huge stubby green foot, or 'Slim's huge stubby green foot!'
PM me if you want to know some info on the 3rd of Biggy Bro slig's oddventure.

The mist cleared away, revealing a big green sumo-mud lying on the muddy ground.
"Slim or Squash?" Grunt asked Slug.
Slug shrugged.
They both slithered over to the body.
It was slim, with cuts and slices all the way down him.
I walked up to them with the gang and their pants.
"Who did this?"
"That, would be me." A voice said.
We turned away from the carcas to face Marty and Timothy, Monty and Richy's doubles.
"Monty! How are you doing?" Marty asked.
"Fine, and you?"
I turned to see Richey and Timothy playing like dogs.
"You slaughtered him?" I asked.
"Oh, hello BBS, yes we slice him with my old vykker tools."
Suddenly, the army of Robolice rolled towards us.
"Brace yourselves, for the ultimate battle!" The guru cackled.
I aimed my Rope-gun at the standing guru on the cliff.
I blasted away, and the metal hook went through the guru.
I yanked him down, and he clanked onto the floor
He stood up, and ripped out the rope.
"Now it's my turn!" He laughed.
He pulled the rope, and I went flying foward towards the guru.
This is no peaceful native, I thought.

This is great, BBS. I thought it was quite funny when the two Vykkers started playing like dogs! :D And I'll PM you right now because I want to know more about your third story-these keep getting better and better each time you come up with a different story! ;)

I went flying towards the guru, and hit the floor.
"Biggy Bro Slig, I've been trying to get my hands on you for a very, long time!" He said.
"Why?" I asked im insanely.
"Why? Because I wanted to kill you before my brother does!" He said.
"What did I do to your brother?"
"You pulled out my heart, you've pushed me off a cliff, you've completely disindergrated me! And you turned me into a F*cking Robot!"
"Why is he upset about that?"
" In the words of Himself 'I won't let nobody push around my little brother!', and besides, you killed the sumo muds, and they weren't even mine! They were his!" He gasped.
"Anyway, back to buisness!" He said.
He grabbed me, and pushed me against the wall.
I winked at Marty, and he winked back, as he through a brick at the guru.
It landed on his head, and stars spun around his head.
He shook his head, and climbed up the cliff.

I love the bit with the stars flying round the head, it's so original

Yeah, I liked that too. It kind of gave a cartoony feel to the story. :D Nice work, BBS. I can't wait to read more of this!

I grabbed on the wall and chased the guru.
The guru grabbed the ledge, and climbed up onto the filthy Muddy floor of the Monosaic Lines.
He ran into the temple.
I looked down.
The others were making their way up.
I got up, and chased after the guru.
I walked into the temple.
There were hunderds of Computers everywhere, and the same old rusty chair in the middle of the room.
I stared into one corner.
There was a Tube full of Green goo, and inside, was Nitro, the slig who had saved them through the ice.
He was screaming, and pulling the finger at the guru.
"Stop worrying, you little scumbag!" The Guru barked.
He walked over to a control pannel, and fiddeld with the buttons.
Suddenly, nineteen Amps of electricity shot out and into the tube.
They hit Nitro, and he turned into a huge Slig, with a mind saying 'kil alll sligs'.
He walked over to me, and grabbed me.
He walked out.
"Nitro, kill the slig." The guru braked again.
"I never wanted to kill one of my own species but-" Suddenly, I pulled out a sword, slashed Nitro's arm off, and I ran off.
It was clear that Nitro couldn't take the pain, so he ran up to the cliff and jumped off.
There was a loud bang, and a couple of screams.
I looked down.
Nitro had just squashed 20 Robolice.
I chuckled, but didn't notice the figure behind me.
The guru stabbed a knife in the back of me, and pushed me off the cliff...

Great chapter, BBS. :) The guru is completely insane with that machine he uses to turn sligs into killing machines. I can't wait to see more!

The final words
 

I thank you all for these nice comments!

I fell to my death.
And I thought this was the final time.
I pulled out the knife, and dropped it.
I hit the bottom.
I was shocked, I had landed on Nitro.
I limped over to the gang.
"Are you Ok-" Marty wwas cut off as a bullet went right through his neck.
There was a splatter of blood from his mouth, and he fell down.
I tunred around to see a smiling Guru with a sniper-rifle on the cliff.
"Marty!" Monty Screamed "Why does everyone of my friends have to die or be completely stupid?"
Richy looked at him.
"No offence but-" Monty trailed off as he saw the guru's next action.
"Slug!" He shouted. "Move!".
Slug moved, and Timothy was just at the wrong place at the wrong time, as the bullet hit Timothy.
"I'll kill you shmuck!" Monty screamed.
"Give up and go, or Richy dies!"
"You wouldn't." I said.
"I would. Just watch me." The guru said, as he changed target to Grunt.
He fired.
The bullet went right into the sligs chest.
"GRUNT! NO!" I screamed.
The guru gave a little laugh, and ran away.
I ran over to slug.
"I want to go home." Grunt said.
"I don't think you will." I said.
"I want to talk to slug." Grunt whispered.
We turned to Slug, who was crying his eyes out.
"I know who to kill the Guru." He gasped.
"How?" Ziggy asked.
"You have to shoot him at his Core. Then you steel his chip." Grunt whispered again.
"It's been great knowing you all." Grunt trailed off and stopped.
He was dead.

Awww, it sucks that Grunt died because he was one of the coolest characters in the story! :( It was a nice chapter and the only error that I found that sort of stuck out was this:
"I know who to kill the Guru." He gasped.
It should be "I know HOW to kill the Guru." ;) But it's just a minor error. :) Other than that, it was a great chapter as usual, BBS.

That was me typing to fast!

I turned away.
I climbed up the cliff again, and went into the temple.
There were rows of the containers now, and sligs in them.
The guru walked up to me.
"Still crying about your friend?" The guru said.
I punched him in the face.
He jolted backwards, smashing through the containers.
I pulled out my gun.
I fired at him.
The bullet went right into him, and he bounced right through the wall.
He stood up, and he looked no different.
Apart from his eyes.
They had changed from a bright Orange to a dark brown.
"You may have just about blinded me, but I can still see!" He cried.
He stumbled away, into the forrest.
"I will kill him. Even if it's the last thing I do!" I screamed.

We sat around the fire at camp watching the body of Grunt burn.
Suddenly, life returned to grunt's visor.
He jumped up, and ran around in circles.
I grabbed Richy, and squeased his belly as hard as I could.
Richy shot out sylivia, hitting the burning grunt.
"GRUNT! YOU'RE ALIVE!" I shouted.
"Who the hell are you?" Grunt asked.
"Ok, he's lost his memory. Me and Richy can fix that up." Monty said.
"You do that. I'm setting my plan up." I said, evily like the guru.

That guru is pure evil! I hope he gets what he deserves! You know, you create some interesting villains, BBS-they have great characteristics that just make you love to hate them! :D And Grunt's alive? That's great! :D I hope something bad hasn't happened to him with his memory being gone and everything. Keep those chapters coming! :)

We walked towards the guru.
He was smiling.
Smiling his evil smile.
"I'm obsessed with the colour Chrome. Noticed? That's why i'm chrome, that's why the robo-lice are chrome. Change subject- I've had enough of you trying to kill me! This is the end-" The guru stopped as slug butted in saying "for you!"
The guru looked at the slig, and gave a little whistle.
Suddenly, out of the temple, came 10 Mega-sligs, like Nitro was like.
They all looked the same, except the one. It was general Krakkerz!
He had a rifle.
And he was about to use it.
Slig number two ran up to Ziggy.
"Do you want a taste of my Bazooka? Huh?" Zigget said.
He fired a missle at the bulk and repeated on the others.
The bodies rolled over the cliff for the sligs to catch and eat.
Only General Krakkerz was left.
"Krakkerz! You are on our side! Kill the guru!" I screamed.
The huge slig drooled a little, and realised who's side he was on.
He turned to the guru.
"No...no...no! We can be friends! And we could rule Mudos together! And we could-" There were no more words for the guru, as Krakkerz stamped his foot on the guru.
There was an explosion, and the choking smell of petrol polluted the area.
Krakkerz lifted his foot, and was so shocked of the smell, he tripped up over the cliff.
Gradually, the guru reformed.
I ran quickly ran away, and bumped into a weird robot.
"Hi! My names Chunky Fueller!" He said as he fired a bomb into the valley.
"Biggy Bro Slig." I replied.
"I've been huntin' down the Guru ever since he breached my factiry and blew it up!" Chunky said.
"Right, if you see a steef with a hat and a cross-bow, kill'em, 'cause he's after me!"
"You got any henchmen?" I asked Chunky.
"Hell yeah. Come out boys!"
About fifty outlaws popped out.
"I've got a plan. And this one can't fail."

Nice chapter, BBS. I especially liked this part:

"I'm obsessed with the colour Chrome. Noticed? That's why i'm chrome, that's why the robo-lice are chrome. Change subject- I've had enough of you trying to kill me! This is the end-" The guru stopped as slug butted in saying "for you!"
The guru looked at the slig, and gave a little whistle.

That sort of reminded me of something Nefarious might say! :D Nice work, BBS. And I see you added a new character as well (Chunky).

Yeah, Because of Strangers wrath, I'm trying to put some things in from stranger.

Chunky's gang were shooting and slicing the guards at the temple.
"Biggy! Grunt's fine!" Monty said as he and richy walked out of nowhere.
Grunt came running towards me, and fired at a mud.
Monty came running towards a Tommahawker, squirted the VG 1000 at him, and he burst into pure vomit.
Richy was on all six, jumping on people and biting their heads.
Ziggy was with his bazooka 'rusty' and firing it at muds.
Slug was next to Chunky, firing at muds.
"Move in!" I shouted.
Me, Slug, Grunt, Ziggy, Monty and Richy ran into the temple.
The guru saw us, and stopped.
"Guru, say your last words." I said.
"Ok, I hate you!" He screamed.
He pulled out a grey colored machine gun, and quickly painted it chrome, and fired.
I dodged the bullets, and Grunt looked at me.
"Would you do like to finish our mission?" I asked Grunt.
"It would be a pleasure." Grunt said, smiling.
Grunt pulled out Rusty the bazooka and hit the guru.
He dropped the gun, and stopped.
"You think you could kill me? Ha! You could never kill the great Gur-" The guru stopped, and his bottom jaw dropped off, and his eyes went dark.
Suddenly, there were sparks from his arms, and he blew up, into a million peices and fired off a spectacular fireworks desplay of sparks.
The whole of the Monosaic lines stopped.
The Mudokons stopped fighting, and screamed and ran away.
We had conquered the Monosaic Lines!
I walked up to where the guru had last been, and picked up his chip.
I looked at it one last time, and cracked it into 5.


This is not the end!

Wow! They actually gave their bazooka a NAME? :lol: That was a great chapter, BBS. I got your PM. Are you really going to move this story? It will be a shame to not get to read it on these forums. :( But I understand your reasons. ;)

Arrrrrrgggh hell, I'll do it here.

Chunky walked up to me.
"Well, you killed'em!" He laughed.
"No, We killed him!" I said, as I gave the metal robot a hug.
"Well," I said. "We better be going."
I walked off with the remaining slig army and into the forest.

"Something doesn't feel right." Grunt said.
"I'm scared." Said another.
There was a rigid sound of Paramites, and then, the same type of creature that tried to kill Monty apeared, but in an army.
"Brakmaka! Me Grush!" One of the Grushes shouted.
Then, something awful came from behind.
Kakulana.
He was half Bolamite, half mechanicilized.
His legs were a bronze color which were connected by a crowd of gears inside his body.
"You! You tried to kill me! Take one of the vykkers! Now!"
He grabbed the corpse of Timothy.
"Now! Do it!" He screamed.
The Grushes did what they were told, and Kakulana swallowed Timothy.
The grushes fired out of their staffs a red liquid into him.
There was a bang.
There was Kakulana- Well, his shredded skin.
Kakulana was as big as Rupture farms now, and had a stinger and two pincers.
He skidded towards me.
He slipped, and his metal leg hit me.
I fell unconious...

Kakulana's back!! Yes!! :D He makes a cool boss. ;) Nice job with this chapter, BBS. But I must say that there is a bit of a similarity to the state of his body and the guru's.

I woke up.
There, standing above me, was Chunky Fueller.
"Wake up, Biggy Bro Slig!" He screamed.
I got up.
There were sligs being slinged everywhere, and I got a glimpse of Richy flying past me spraying syliva everywhere.
Chunky Fueller lobbed a bomb at a grush with a bow and arrow.
It hit him, and a lowd explosion went off.
Suddenly a huge outlaw came out of the lush green bushes.
"Ralph! You made it!" Chunky said to the outlaw.
"Ralph?" I said.
"Red hot Furnace, the best outlaw I've ever met." Chunky said, as he split open a Grush's neck.
RHF ran towards a grush, slit his throat, and ran towards the next.
"Ralph H. Furnace-" He was cut off by shock as RHF was stabbed by Kakulana's Stinger.
I loaded up Rusty.
"Kakulana! You stop this madness! You've got what you wanted! Now let your army go and you come back to our side." I screamed.
He eyed the bazooka, and then his army.
"Go ahead, kill me. I don't care." He smiled.
"He's onto something." I whispered.
I figured what he was going to do.
I aimed slightly above Kakulana, and he didn't see my move.
He jumped up, the bullet hit him, and the cogs smashed together.
He hit the flor, and the grushes were squashed by his bulk.
I walked towards him.
"No you've got to come with us." I said, as I caught the flying Richy.

That was great, BBS. I thought it was funny when Richy sprayed drool everywhere when he was thrusted through the air! :D

We kept on walking.
Kakulana kept on looking at us.
"My legs are getting tired. Could we jump on your back?" Slug said.
"No-" Kakulana was cut off.
"No, let him get on your back other wise-" He tapped Rusty.
He stopped, let slug get on his back, and his eyes went evil.
We came to a meep.
With a bottle of soul storm brew.
"Oh no." Monty said.
The meep walked towards the bottle, and drank it.
The meep bubbled, and transformed into the meepontosaurus.
Kakulana thought this was a perfect time to escape, kicked Slug off, and ran away.
The Mutant meep spotted him, and zapped Kakulana.
"You want it, don't you?" Kakulana said, as he walked up to the meep.
The meep nodded.
Kakulana sent a flash of web at the meep, but it rejected it by forming a sphere around it.
While Kakulana distracted it, we were sneeking towards it.
Suddenly, the meep turned around, and swallowed us all...

Another meepontosaurus! This is great! I can tell you had a bit of an influence from the mutant protopet in Ratchet and Clank: Going Commando, am I right? :D That was a good chapter, BBS. I really enjoyed it!

Well, no, but now I think about it, it's just like it!

Monty, Richey, and slug grabbed the tonsels, until Ziggy knocked them all off.
We all hit the floor.
We heard Sligs screaming.
We looked across.
Stomach acid.
A slig limped towards me out of the Stomach acid.
He had two big holes in his leg, no arm, and a hole burned in his visor.
"Must...get...out...now!" He screamed, as he fell down on the grubby floor.
I picked the slig up, and ran towards Monty.
"Bombs? We need them to get out of here before all the acid burns us!" I said.
"No more bombs. We sold the last of them to a bounty while killing the Guru." Monty said.
"What do we do?" I screamed.
"Then we dig our way out." Monty replied, and pulled out a chainsaw.
He cut one rib off, and stabbed it in the gut.
There was a huge tremble, and blood squirted out.
"You idiot! You hit an artery!" I shouted.
"How was I supposed to know where it was in a Meep?" He screamed. "I don't even know where my own arteries are!"
I checked up on the Acid.
"Hurry up!" I shouted.
Monty cut a square shape in the skin, and into a blinding light.
We hopped out, to find the Meepontosaurus Squirming on the floor.
We looked around, but we couldn't find Kakulana.
He legged it why he had the chance.

Good chapter, BBS. ;) I'm actually shocked that you didn't think about the protopet when writing that chapter before this one! :lol: I guess Monty would not qualify as a surgeon, would he? :D Keep it up because it's great and funny at times.

Once again, thanx.

"Gander! Get your filthy green arse over here now!" Syrom said, and looked at the map.
Syrom was the guru's brother, a deformed steef, with only two legs.
He, and his hang of Sumos where taking a holiday away from Mudos, to get away from the battles.
Gander waddled into the steaming Geiser, and screamed.
"You chump! Did you even see the path around it?" Syrom screamed.
"I think he's got no brain." Whispered one of his Mudarchers called Bilo.
Gander's big fat green feet waddled past the geiser, and stood on a fat juicy bug that looked like a beetle.
"Right," He said. "We go this way." He said, as he pointed into the darkness.
The team wondered into the darkness.

"Hey, what's that?" said A weird looking outlaw said with 3 eyes.
Syrom swore, and through a silver dagger with the word 'Scrutter' on it.
He ducked, and said "Scrutter, dear brother. Or otherwise known as the Guru."
The three eyed thing got hit in the stomach, and the group walked up to it.
Syrom picked up the dagger, and picked up a laptop beside the body.
He tiped in a couple of words, and a screen popped up.
"No idea where we are." He said, and dropped the laptop.
They walked into the darker woods...

I just thought about introducing some new characters coming up in the next story, 'Syrom's Retribution'.

:lol: I think that Gander is funny! He seems to be another Richy! :lol: Yes!!! The Guru's real name is revealed!! I had no idea that it would be a name like 'Scrutter'! Keep it going! :D

"Where the hell is Kakulana?!" I screamed.
"No idea, but we better move on." said slug.

The hot springs and volcanoes made it an unbearable heat.
Monty, slug, grunt ziggy and me were in a hot, bubbling pool.
Richy, however, walked up to a geiser, stood on it, and he went flying up in the air.
Chunky fueller was catching food.
"That's one hell of a firefly!" He said, as a huge golden flying insect came buzzing towards him.
"That's no firefly!" One of his outlaws said.
The creature gave an ultra-sonic whistle, and a swarm of over grown fireflies came buzzing after them.
Ziggy hopped out of the pool, and ran.
So did everyone else.
They chased us up to a volcano.
"One more step, and we're doomed!" A slig screamed.
The fireflies moved foreward.
Monty, unaware of the volcano stepped backwards.
"MONTY!!!!!!!!!!" I cried.
Monty hit the lava...

Nice chapter, BBS. It was funny when Richy shot up out of the geiser! :lol:

I didn't even think about my self.
I dived in, grabbed Monty, crying for a rope.
Nobody was giving me a rope, due to the fireflies.
I got fed up, and grabbed the side of the volcano.
I through Monty up, and he landed on the ground.
I climbed onto another rock, and slipped.
I hit the lava again, and grabbed another rock.
Eventually got to the top, and collapsed.
My arm was bleeding, my back was burned, and my pants were destroyed.
I looked at Chunky fueller.
He was shooting bombs at the fireflies.
Richy helped Monty up, and he pulled a out a little button.
He pressed it, and a little machine popped out frm the floor.
"Terminate all Fireflies!" It said.
It flashed out a little gun, and the flies dissapeared...

Well, to be honest, that wasn't one of your best chapters, BBS, but it was ok. :) To be honest, I've had writer's block myself while writing my R&C fanfic on R&C Files. Overall, it wasn't a bad chapter, though. It was a bit short, but I've had short chapters in my stories too. Keep it up! :)

I know, I had to rush it becuase I had to go to the shops.
And besides, I got a bit carried away with a new Oddworld Story I'm writing.

I slithered towards Monty.
"You saved my life." Monty coughed."How could I ever re-pay you?"
"You could start by getting me some pants." I smiled.
Monty grabbed his bag, and pulled out a little box.
He opened the lid, and poured out screws, bolts, and metal.
He quickly whizzed the pants together, and passed them to me.
I jumped in them.
"I think we keep moving." I said.

"What the F*ck do you think you're doing, Gander?" Said the voice of Syrom.
Gander was doing his normal routeen...being an idiot.
Gander was staring at a big button in the side of the wall.
"Big button...must press." Gander said.
His finger reached out and pressed the button.
Suddenly, a huge siren went off.
"Oh Sh*t! Now you've done it!" Shouted Syrom.
Suddenly, 5 big monsters came running down the corridor.
They grabbed the group, and beat them up.

Now that chapter was much better. :lol: Gander is even more dense than Richy! :lol: I never thought that anyone could be dumber than Richy!! Keep it up because that chapter was hilarious! :lol:

The snow poured down fast.
"We'll never make it past the storm." Shouted Monty.
"I think we won't even make it a step further." I said.
"Why's that?" Slug asked.
I looked behind us.
There was a huge Tornado spinning as fast as hell.
Suddenly, it froze.
It rumbled, and the ice went smashing everywhere.
Some ice went darting towards a slig.
He dropped dead.
"Run! Quick! Now!" I shouted.
But we couldn't. The snow was piling over mound over mound.
"Need any help?" Said Kakulana bursting out from behind a tree.
"Kakulana! Quick! Get all the sligs on your back!" I shouted.
Eventually all the army was on.
"That Twister's gaining on us!" Shouted Chunky
And it was. It was litterally behind them.
The Twister froze, and shattered again.
A few sligs fell off, and a shard went through his head.
"RICHY!" I said as I shook him.
He just simply said hello.
"That proves there is no Brain in there." I laughed.
"Go faster!" Ziggy shouted.
Suddenly, a slig fell off, and tumbled into the twister.
It froze, with the slig inside.
Then, it shattered, flying frozen peices of slig everywhere.
We came to a Cliff.
A BIG cliff.
Kakulana skidded past it, and jolted right past a couple of Grubs.
Suddenly, we went through a tunnel.
And the Twister went in the tunnel too.
Now that was Frighning.
We went into the darkness...

A freezing Tornado! Mudos must be very cold. Nice chapter :)