Hmmm you could be odd chick but only time will what could happen...

:D I hope I am! It would be really cool to have that play out as an important part! :)

A nice Slig... I wonder if bringing a slig to Bigface has something to do with the nice Slig...

Chapter 19-The statue

When they moved on they found themselfs lost in the temple. "This is just great." Said Fren. "Abe should know what to do." Said Munch. "Nope. I've never been in this temple." Replied Abe. They kept moving on deeper in the temple. After a while, they found a huge statue of a scrab. "Wow." Said Abe. "This is cool." Said Fren. They got closer to the statue. They spotted a story stone. "Read it Abe." Ordered Munch. Abe put his hand into the story stone. He read in his mind:

"This statue is a memory of all the scrabs that got killed because of the past Rupturefarms incident. We spirits hope that peace and harmony will be with the scrabs for many generations to come."

"Well their wrong at this time." Whispered Abe. "What did it say?" Asked Fren. "Nothing important." Replied Abe. "Let's continue on."

Back at Rupturefarms:

Molluk was still happy that Fren, Abe, and Munch were dead. All of a sudden, a slig came in. "Sir, all the scrabs escaped." Said the slig. "Impossible!" Exclaimed Molluk. "How could they ever escape this high security?" "I dunno boss. Some people say that they dissapeared." Replied the slig. "Foolish people. Scrabs just don't dissapear." Said Molluk. "It's a odd world, boss. Anything can happen." Replied the slig. The slig went out, and Molluk growled.

Hmm...scrabs disappearing even after Abe, Munch and Fren are "dead"? That's interesting. Nice one, sliguy! Keep it up! :)

Chapter 20-Scrab doors

After a while, our heros found themselfs even more lost. "Why does this have to be such a big temple?" Asked Fren. "It must carry many scrabs. If we had small temples, scrab would be easy to capture." Replied Abe. "Yet Rupturefarms has many barrel loads of scrabs." Said Munch. "They must have come from the Stockyards and not from here." Replied Abe. "Must be because this is a secret place." Said Fren. They walked on until they saw a well. "Jump in here." Ordered Munch. They all jumped in. When they came out, they saw a big room with ten doors. "Aw man! I knew the other trail would be one of these!" Exclaimed Abe. "Look. A story stone." Pointed out Fren. Abe put his hand into it. It read:

"You are not yet done with your quest. You must beat these ten doors that lead to small areas of the temple. You must complete these areas by getting rid of all the enemies and then possesing a spirit. When you posses the spirit, guide it to the exit. You'll see that there is a big lock on the exit. You can un-posses the spirit, then it will explode, and finally the door will be unlocked. Once you've got all then doors beat, it will unlock an other door. Beware, this level is very hard to get through. Once you've beaten the final level, Big Face shall teleport you back into the dream world and then give you half your lives back."

"Okay people. First door." Said Abe. They all walked up to the first door, and then entered the first room.

Ooh, our heroes have a tough road ahead! :D Good chapter, sliguy! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Wee more story goodness! ^-^

could people please comment this story more? They're important to me.
BTW next chapter should be here by tommorrow.

ok. Umm.... I like the idea of this story, but it could be better if you took more time on describing the things. I'd also like if you were a bit slower on moving to the next event. Take your time. Other then that, yer story's great :)

Chapter 21-First door

When they went to the other side, they first saw two levers, one had an X by it, the other was by a lifting wall with fleeches behind it. "I have an idea. Fren, go to the level with the X by it, not don't stand on the X, I'll go near the other lever. Munch, you better stay back." Ordered Abe. They both did as he said. Abe pulled the lever, and ran. Fleeches were slowly running after him. Once Abe was at the end and the fleeches were near the X, he told Fren to pull the lever. He did, and the fleeches were crushed. "Moving on." Said Abe. They did as he said. When they took the next path, they saw the spirit. "Not just yet. The path is not yet cleared." Said Munch. They went on to the other path. They saw a scrab behind bars. "I'll try to posses it." Said Abe. So he tried, and did it. The scrab walked to the other path. He was still behind bars. So the scrab chanted, and was un-possesed. "We somehow have to get that scrab out." Said Fren. "If that scrab is out, we'll be his dinner if were not lucky." Replied Munch. "Let's just climb over the ledge then." Suggested Fren. So they did. The next path they saw a level. Abe pulled it, and the scrab was free. "Posses it Abe!" Ordered Munch. He did as Munch said. the scrab was possesed again. The possesed scrab went to the next path, and saw another scrab. They put up a small fight, and Abe's scrab won. On the next path, the possesed scrab saw a ledge he could not climb. So he possesed Abe back. "Once the scrab get's under us, we'll jump off this ledge, and run to the next one." Said Abe. So once that scrab got under them, they leaped out and ran as fast as they could with the scrab running after them. They climbed over the ledge. The last path showed the exit with a big lock on it. "Back to the spirit." Ordered Munch. They outran the scrab yet again, and went back to the spirit. Abe possesed it, guided the spirit up in the air where that scrab couldn't get them, and exploded the spirit right in the center of the lock. The lock fell off, and the door was opened. So then they outran the scrab AGAIN, and finally made it to the exit. "That made me tired." Said Munch. "You better get used to it." Replied Fren. They went through the exit.

It seems like you planned out this chapter before writing it because everything was so detailed and descriptive-especially how they were outsmarting the fleeches and possessing scrabs. That was a great chapter-keep 'em coming! :)

Yahoo! Show us more! It's swayed! (cool) ^-^

nice story.

News Flash:

This story might progress slowly. I have a life, ya know.

That's fine. I can wait. ;)

i just don't want this thread to die out if ya know what I mean.