When i got the idea for spoon, he was suppose to be in a different story of mine and i've just realised that all his jokes related only with that story, anyway. I'll try harder.

SPIRAL CITY DESTRUCTION IN: 1:59:58

"oh shit!" shouted Phillips. "we only got two hours to finish this!" "Phillips, stay cool" said Copland "just get the last 2 done so we can get out of here." They moved back to the elevator in a hurry. "Tower, get the APC started" said Copland into his comm. "Yessir" said Twoer back. They went to the elevator, and began going back down to the lobby.

"Okay team, i just got a message from the cap, we gotta get into the APC and start it, now" Tower, Beret and Jim ran into the APC, the were followed by Hicks and his team, they ran in and took a seat. But Koch and Demit did nothing, they just stood there, with there hands to there heads, as if they were listening to something on there comms. After about 5 mins, they came into the APC. "What was that all about!?" said Beret. "You dont need to know...yet" said Demit. Her pause was disterbing. Copland, Phillips and Lucas came running out of the building. They juped in the back, and the door closed. Lucas wentto the front of the APC. "West side of the city there is a large power surge, lets go" said Phillips, and the APC came to life and started moving. "Whats the rush?" said Hicks, "we got only 2 hours untill this city blows up" said Copland, when he finished his sentance, Koch and Demit looked at eachother, and they were the only ones still wearing their gas masks. "great" said Beret, sarcastically. Copland turned to Koch "you were suppose to take out the harddrive on the West side!" he said, "We were going to, when we got attacked" said Koch "thats it, you two are under arrest, for not obeing orders given by a superior officer!" said Copland "way to go, cap" whispered Beret. "I'm sorry, but you cant do that" said Koch, he got up, and aimed his F2000 at Copland, Demit moved and opened the door. "See you later Mr. Copland" said Koch. Then him and Demit jumped out of the back of the APC, and dissapered into the darkness. "Damn it!" said Copland "What could they be upto?" he said.

Koch and Demit, rolled to the left, and got up. "Hey hey, nice one back there" said Demit. "Thanks, where to now?" "we need to get the bio-matter intel, so we should go to the bio-matter main resarch station. It's not far away, about 5 mins on the run" "lets go then, we just need that, and the BOSS's can pull us out..."

ia anybody reading this?

Yes, I am. And I think it's a nice story.. You can look how many have read your topic but not replied, you know.

oh yeah, thanx SS.

"I knew from the start there was something funny about them... " said Beret "... they never spoke on the Ospray, they come in at the last minuet for no reason..." "Well they can do what ever they want now, they got two hours to do it and there are two of them, and eight of us" said Copland. "were nearly here" said Lucas. Spoon was holding his helmit in his lap, the APC hit some reckage on the track, and his helmit flew of his lap onto the floor. He stood up "on me 'ead Terry" he said. Terry kicked the helmit and it smacked Spoon on the head. "Ya twatter!" he shouted. "OI!, calm down you two" said Hicks. "Cant believe i had to miss the footy for this" said Spoon "look, if you dont shut up about missing that match i assure you, the bugs will have you bolloks for breakfast" said Hicks "fried or hard bolied sarge?" said Terry. "Scrambled" said Hicks. Spoon put his helmit on, and sat down. Jim had just now realised that Hicks, Terry and Spoon were British. He smiled, if he had the hard-as-steel British with him, they would be okay, right?

Koch and Demit came to a large building, Demits gas-biomatter sensor went mad, they had their gas masks on already though. They walked up to the building, and opened the doors. They turned one their flashlights on their F2000's. This building still had no power, it was very dark. "Any bugs?" said Koch "No, nothin' lives in here..." she said. They walked over to an elevator. "No power" said Koch. "We'll have to reactivate it, i think i saw a power junction on the way here, about 50ft. out the door and left" said Demit, "I'll be right back" She dashed out of the door. Koch crouched down by the elevator, and reloaded his Colt .45, It was his favorite gun, accurate, powerful, but old. It was proof that old things could be the best. He slammed in the new mag and closed the chambre. He heard a noise. He picked up the old spent mag and threw it accross the floor, and shined his light on where it had landed. There was some blue slime on the floor, just about a foot away from the mag. He lifted his light higher, and gasped. A skelinton lay in the corner, covered in the same blue gel-like matter. "poor sod" he saids under his breath. The lights suddenly flashed on, he noticed there were at least 5 skelintons on the floor, all covered in the same blue slime. Demit came in through the door. "ah..." she said. She punched the button to the elevator, and they both slipped in. She hit the button for level B12. It was underground where the main lab was, and she was hoping it was empty. the elevator came to a stop and They walked out, a long white hallway was infront of them, with what looked like a t-juntion at the end. Demit moved forward, checking their possision on her wrist computer. There were doors on both sides. and a row a airvent ducts on the celing, about one every 5 feet. "Here" she said, and Opened a door. the room inside was quite a sight, pale white bodies all over the floor, and in chairs. She went over to a control pannel, and started taking some info. Infront of her was a glass tank, smashed open and with a blue stain on the sides. Out side of the room, from on of the airvents, a blue gel leeked through the grate. It pooled on the floor, and slowly moved back up the wall. "Finished" said Demit "were home free" Koch smiled. and they both turned to walk up the door, demit went down the hall, when suddenly she stopped. A large blob of the blue gell, creeped down the hallway behind koch. He turned around. "BIO-MATTER!" shouted Demit. It was the most deadly thing spiral had made. It could turn from a liquid-gel like form, to a gas. It was designed to clear out bases, it could go inside you as a gas, and then fill you lungs with gel, or it could just cover you, and eat away at the flesh untill only bone is left, and it is just about invinsible, except to extream cold. Koch fired his F2000 at full auto at it, but you could see the bullets getting stuck in the blobs gel-like mass., he fired another clip, then another. The blob was now inbetween Koch and Demit, Demit couldnt jump over it, so she just watched in pain as her friend got cornered by it. One of the bullets his a gas pipe, bioling hot gas came out, burning Koch's leg, he fell down, with his back to the wall, put his F2000 on semi, and fired at it one handed, in his other hand he had pulled out his Colt .45 "GO!!!!!!!!" he shouted. Demit ran, and around the corner. Koch ran out of ammo for his F2000, so he dropped it. He fired His colt, bullet after bullet into the blob, not hurting it. It still came twards him, slowly. He ran out of ammo in all his guns. He just sat therem pinned up to the elevator door. He could get up and open the door, but he decided not to. He was to die with honour. The bio-matter climbed up his body, it was cold, it went up to his face, crawled in every open part of his body, he couldnt breath, he felt dry. He tried to scream, the the gel got down his throat. He strugged in pain as the matter started to eat away at his skin. "good bye" he managed to say into his radieo to Demit, his voice distorted. Then everything went black...

That was quite an interesting chapter, even if it was a bit hard to read. Aaand, I don't think you can say goodbye when you can't breath. I know it was just for drama, and drama is good (in reasonable amounts), but still... *feels very critical today*

The APC came to a stop and the special forces got out. Hicks, Terry, Spoon and Jim stayed at the APC. "its weird..." said Phillips. "The power sorce is coming from a place not on my map, must be a new level?" he said. "I dont cair if its in hell, the success of this mission is more important, then our lives" said Copland. They moved up to the building, it looked very old for some reason. Blood on the walls, bullet holes in the walls and windows. Some windows and sections of the wall were completely missing. "This building was close to the bug resarch centre, alot of civilians died in here, people who didnt have to" said Lucas. "I cant believe how we destroy ourselfs so much" she said. She looked on the verge of crying, but then she put a straight face on, and smiled. "Powers out, NV's on" said Copland. They all put their night visison goggles on, and dissapeared into the dark. Phillips came to a lift. "So many lifts..." he said. "what floor would it be on if its not on the map?" said Copland. "I dont really know, i'll see if floor B3 works." said Phillips, they crammed into an elevator. "des....t...inat...ion..." said the computerized voice, it was damaged. "B3" said Phillips. "floor....B....3......pas...s...word...requi....red" said the voice. "aw shit" said Lucas. "Dont worry" said Phillips. He went over to the controls and attached his wrist computer. He pushed some buttons. "Sorry to have to do this to ya..." he said to the computer. He hit a final button, and the elevator started moving. They didnt go for very long, but Phillips said something very intriguing. "If Dean still has control of the place, why dosnt he just drop the lift?" he said. They reached the bottom. The lights were on, revealing a large white circular room. Around the walls were test tubes, in each one was a small worm, about a foot long, and with a large cicular mouth at one end, lined with teeth. "What are these?" said Beret "i dont remeber these on the briefeing" he said. "Thats because they wernt made by then, this is Deans doing." said Phillips. the room was larger then it looked, and it had many corridors that led to other circular rooms, filled with the same "leeches". Phillips went down one corridor, followed by Lucas and Copland. Beret and Tower went another way. They came to a room filled with tubes, but they were all broken open. 'click' the safety came of Berets SL9. He looked around, and then went back out the way he came, Tower moving slowly behind him.

Phillips came to a room with about 6 tubes in it, and a large computer terminal at the end. it had lots of writing on it, all sorts of data. He went over to it and started disabling it. He hummed to himself as he typed, code after code. "Done, easy" he said after about 2 minutes. Sudenly something came up on the screen. "biological leech steroid experiments releasing" it said on the screen. The 6 tubes beside them started to open, a sticky clear liquid coming out of them. They ran back through the way they came in, they could already hear gunfire, obviously from Beret and Tower. The next room was filled with them. They started firing, but they were too smal to hit. Lucas lobbed a grenade, killing tons of them. Phillips fired at the 6 coming behind them, killing them effeciantly. they walked forward, clearing a path ahead of them with gunfire.

"HOLY SHIT!" shouted Beret, as the leechs crawled twords him and Tower. Tower began shooting, while Beret slammed a 30 round clip into his SL9 and put it on automatic, he joined in. He saw Phillips, Lucas and Copland coming from behind them, shooting. Beret thought, "what if they miss and-" he suddenly felt a sharp pain in his side. He put his hand to it, and felt blood. He leaned on the wall "i'm hit!" he said. Tower glanced at him but only for a second, then got back to shooting. "aw crap" said Phillips, "Beret has been hit, must have veen one of us!" he shouted. They ran into the room with Tower and Beret. Beret looked up, to see an airvent in the ceiling shake, Copland was undernieth it. "CAP! LOOK OUT!" he shouted. Copland looked up, and the vent burst, leechs falling ontop of him. He screamed, and all the other leechs went over to him. Tower aimed. "Dont shoot!" said Lucas. The leechs crawled all overCopland, biting him, and going under his skin, he stood up, but they only surrounded him, climbing up his body. He looked up, and coughed, sending blood everywhere, where the blood landed the leechs ran too. He was coughing up alot of blood now, they could see the leeches under his skin. He fell over. "he....l..p.....m.....m....e" he started to say, but a leech came up his throat, he went limp, and the leeches swarmed all over him. "ARGGHHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!" shouted Tower, who began shooting at the leechs and the captains dead body. the leechs turned their attention to Tower, and they all went for him. "run, get out of here!" he said, the leeches went to him, he fired, and fired and fired. Beret, Lucas and Phillips ran to the lift. "GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" shouted Tower. He was a brave man, letting them escpae while he got the leeches after him. He fired untill he had no ammo left, but he held his finger on the trigger, the clicking noise being the loudest thing in the room. The leechs jumped on him, he didnt even struggle, he just let go, firing his empty HK21. Even now, the sounds of that rifle echoed through the area. His sacrafice was very meaningful...

Beret clutched his side. "aaaarrrrrrggghhhhh!!!" he moaned. "Hold still!" said Lucas, she wrapped a bandage around his body. "Its only a flesh wound, but your lucky to be alive, it nearly hit some internam organs" she said. The elevator moved up fast. "Hicks! this is Phillips! Tower and Copland are down, repete, Tower and Copland are down!" he said. "I need you to get the APC running NOW!" he screamed into his radieo. He the reloaded his MP2000, and waited. "Is he gonna be okay?" he said to Lucas. She looked at Beret. He smiled, "i'll survive" he said. He coughed "just abit shocked thats all...even though i just lost my best friend..." he said. He then looked down at the floor. Lucas could see tears coming down his cheeks. She put her arm around his back. Phillips hit his fist on the wall. "SHIT!" he said. "Tow...and the cap..." he said. Lucas was the only one still holding it together, but it was hard, its not easy seeing the people you grew up with dying infront of your eyes.

Demit walked through the brightly lit corridors, looking for another lift. If she didnt find one in 5 mins she'd turn back, hoping that the bio-matter was gone. She checked her GPS, but it wasnt working very well, probably because she was so far underground. She was alone, she hated being alone. She checked her F2000, she wished she had brought all the attachments Koch had taken with him but she had to make do. So many labs she passed, all with the same, shattered glass tube, and lots of skelintons. Suddenly infront of her she saw a lift. She checked her GPS. This lift wasnt on it. She walked up to it, and puched the button. The doors opened and she walked in. It was a long elevator, probably for storage. It had only one button, she pressed it. "transport to Bug hive, engaged" said a voice. The lift suddenly moved bakwards, instead of down. It was more like a small train then anything else. "Better then nothing" she thought, she knew her way out of the hive.

Hicks went to the control pannel for the APC, "erm..." he said "anyone know how to drive this?" he said. Jim walked over, "I guess i do." he said. Suddenly Phillips jumped in the back, Lucas followed, the Beret. Beret had a large bandage over his belly. "have fun?" said Spoon. Beret reached for his Colt .45, but Lucas stopped him. "No...we didnt...we lost two men..." she said. "Oh, sorry mate, thought i missed something fun" he said. Beret just gave him the finger. Phillips checked his wrist computer, "last one. Its in a lab in the hive. Take the APC to the hive entrance elevator." "and we got about 1 hour, 15 mins left, more then enough time" he said. "I hope so..." said Beret.

Demit looked around the lift, no blood, nothing. Must have been safe. She puty a new mag into her F2000, just to be sure shes a full. She then slung it, and drew her Desert Eagle .50AE. He needed heavy firepower if she were to make it to the elevator. She checked the map. She would go to the lab in the centre of the base, have a rest, reload. She would then look for a radieo that could reach the surface, and call for the BOSS's to get her out. If she didnt find one, she would use her radieo when she reached the surface. The tarin started to slow down. Through the glass sides she could start to make out the features of the hive, Dark, cold, wet, dangerous. The train stopped, and she moved out of it. No bio-matter present, so she took of her gas mask and put on her night visison goggles. She moved out, keeping to the wall. The train's doors closed, and it started moving back out. "great, no escape" she though. She walked slowly, checking her GPS, about 20 yards streight ahead was the lab. She started to jog, no movement. Suddenly something cought her eye. A metal object just moved, right beside her. She picked up the pace, and was running full pelt. She could now hear the bugs screaming and running behind her. She turned. Nothing. She turned back and screamed...

A huge bug rose up abouve her, but it wasnt normal. Whirring sounds could be heard. It was a machine. It resembled a bug, but it was taller, much taller. It had what looked like a laser on its left shoulder, and a grenade launcher on its right shoulder. Protruding from its chest were two smaller arms, one ended with a drill, while the other had 3 razor sharp claws on it. Its two main arms had fingers going all the way around its hand, they were very sharp, and its right hand had a flamethrower on it. From its back came 4 tenticles, each ending in a three fingered claw. A single red eye glowed in the dark. It metal body glistened with some liquid...blood...bug blood. It raised over Demit and she ran. A blue light suddenly started glowing on its left shoulder, and then a huge beam of bright blue laser went over her head, lighting up the cavern. Bugs suddenly screamed and ran out of the corners, they swarmed and jumpedd on the mechanical beast, but it swiped them away, and fired its laser at them. Up ahead she could see the lab. A blue laser fired from her left, looking down the tunnel she saw another bug droid. She waited for the beam to stop, and she ran. A third blue laser came at her from infront. She ducked and fell into one of the many holes in the walls. She lied down and aimed her Desert Eagle. One of the machines walkewd past, she fired, and fired and fired. 3 hole magazines went into it. But the .50 caliber bullets seemed to do nothing but dent its armour. However, the one she had been shooting at stopped for a while, its red eye going dim. She ran for it, coming to the door of the lab, still covered in the bodies of the bugs she had shot at in the past. He hurled the bodies out of the way and went in. she locked the door, hoping it would help.

The APC stopped by an elevator in the middle of the street. They all had to go down, because of their small numbers, and how dangerous it was down there. Jim pulled out his Five seveN, and cocked it. He didnt want to leave the APc, it had been like a safe house for him, but he had to. Phillips went to the elevator and pushed a button, it opened and the team piled in. "Last harddrive" said Phillips. "Its gonna be a hell of a fight" "no prob, my team'll get us in and out faster then you can say 'bobs your uncle'" said Hicks. "I hope so" said Lucas as the elevator doors closed. Jim was surprised how much of the city was underground. He had been working here for only about a month at the most. He checked his watch. "0 hours 45 minuets left" he said. The elevator stopped, and the doors opened into the armoury, the same sceane of slaughter. Beret picked up an M-8, and checked the mag. "They're all blanks" he said. Jim noticed an unopened locker. It had a key pad. He wasnt sure, but for some reason he felt he knew the code. He typed in some numbers: 01126, the locker opened. He was shocked. "LOOK!" he said. It was full with FN P90's and M-8's. as well as tons of ammo. Jim picked up a FN P90, and lots of mags. Lucas and Phillips ditched their MP2000's for the M-8's. "Nice work Jimmy, you do come in handy" said Lucas. Hicks and his team loaded their shotguns. The doors opened, the darkness of the hive seemed to fill the room. "aw shit, problem" said Hicks. "We aint got no night vision, we have to use the lights on our shottys" he said. "Damn, there goes our element of surprise on any bugs down here" said Beret, angrly. They moved out, the special forces with their night vision goggles on, hick's security team with their flashlights on, and Jim, sticking close to Hicks.

2 more chapters to go.

They team stuck together, aiming in every dark corner. Movement. BOOM...ka-chik Terry shot a bug. They saw the Lab infront, and heard some weird noise's. Like a whistling sound, that lasted for a while, then stopped. They got to the lab doors, bug bodies were all around the floor, as well as hundreds of 5.56 cases. "Hawken must have been here" said Lucas. they stepped over the bodies, and phillips opened the door. Demit whirled around. "Demit?" said Jim. She smiled. "Am i glad to see you guys, you'll never guess whats out there" she said. "erm...bugs?" said Spoon. "No, something worse, Dean has managed to build mechanical versions of bugs! theirs three of them back there" she pointed to the door. Phillips ran to the consol. He started typing in some things. Suddenly the door behind Demit burts down. Through the smoke came a blue laser. "shi-" said Terry, but he was cut in half. Hicks and Spoon began shooting at them. The first machine picked up Hicks. He shot it in the head with his Shotgun, its red eye smashed, and it fell to the ground, limp, dead. Hicks got back up, Lucas, Beret, Bemit and even Jim had joined in. The bullets didnt hurt them much. "AIM FOR THE HEAD!" shouted Hicks, but from between the two robots, bugs started pouring in. "aw shit, we cant do this!" shouted spoon. "Hurry up Phil" said Beret. Phillips typed fast, "DONE!" he shouted. "great, lets move." said Hicks, they started running to the door they came in. Demit stopped to see Hicks, a tenticle suddenly burst through his chest, blood spewing everwhere. "bloody hell!" said Spoon. They ran out of the door, only to be greated with more bugs, they fired their way through. Demit got lost in the frey and tripped over, she turned around to see another of the robots raise above her. It aimed its flamethrower. Demit started to cry as the robot picked her up instead. "run..." she said. and a small drill like arm burst through her mouth.

Phillips and the others got to the armoury. Still being followed. He had seen Demit go. She carried all the info of the experiments, it was good that they would never be seen again. They went into the armoury and locked the door. "Wheres Spoon?" said Lucas.

the door closed before Spoon could get in. He turned to see a bug smash the shotgun from his hands. He punched it in the mouth, and a single tooth from the bugs mouth flew out. He punched it in the stomach a few times and took of all his heavy sercurity gear. "COME AND HAVE A GO IF YOU THINK YOUR 'ARD ENOUGH!" he shouted. The bug pinned him to the wall. "I hope i give you the shits" he said, and spat in the bugs face, just as it bit his face off.

one more chapter left, who will surive?

The lights were flickering in the armoury, the bugs bash on the locked doors. "Quick get in!" shouted Jim, as the elevator door opened. They dashed in, Phillips last. "Erm...what floor?" said Jim. Phillips punched in main.

They arrived at the top quickly, and ran out the door. Jim checked his watch 7 minuets remaning. "Shit! we gotta keep up the pace!" he shouted. They ran to a street and stopped. "shhh" said Phillips, all the drains at the edge of each sidewalk was moving. They aimed their weapons at them. Suddenly the one beneth them burst open, and out swarmed hundreds of leechs. They fired at them, killing only a few, as their small bodies made them hard to hit. So they ran. "YES! the city exit is right in font of us!" said Jim. The leeches were now poring out of the drains infront of them too. Phillips was out of breath. "c'mon Phil! were almost there!" said Beret. But the leechs started to circle Phillips. "no, no, NO!" shouted Beret. They jumped on to him, but he swiped them off, he was now walking though, and they started to crawl up his legs. He stopped to lean on a fuel truck. Just about every leech was on to him, he started to cough out blood. "Take this" he said, and threw Beret a mini-disk. "Its got info about all the experiments, get this corporation shut down." he said. Beret caught it. "I'm not going out like Copland..." said Phillips, and he took a grenade, and smiled at the others. They ran. He pulled the pin and dropped it. The explosion took out the fuel truck too. Beret, Lucas and Jim ducked down. The leechs were fried.

They got to the main doors to the city. Jim pushed in a code, but the doors wouldnt open. He typed in another, it didnt work. "SHIT" my codes dont work, were trapped !" he said. They could hear screams from the bugs, the last of them. They had only 4 minuets to go. Beret saw a wide airvent near the entrance. "HERE!" he shouted. Lucas shot the vent to pieces and they went in. Beret cought site of some bugs following them. They moved through the airvents. They were just tall enough to crouch in and run. Lucas went in last, Jim at the front. Jim followed the light. Lucas truned to see some bugs after her, she fired her M-8. 'click' out of ammo. She had no time to reload, so she drew her beretta and started shooting. The 9mm bullets didnt seem to have much effect, she killed one, and it cut her chest as it fell. "Wheres Lucas?" said Beret. "Go on, i'll get her" he said, and tapped Jim on the shoulder. Beret found her lying down with her backto the side of the vent. She was shooting at tons of incoming bugs. Beret fired of the rest of his clip, killing a few but there was always more. He grabbed Lucas. Suddenly the floor of the airvent behind them burst open, and bugs poured in. They were surrounded. Beret pulled out a HE grenade. "I love you" he said to Lucas. "I love you too" she said back to him, and they held eachother closly as the grenade went, killing the rest of the bugs.

A huge explosion kocked Jim down, but he got up. "Just me now" he thought. He saw the end of the vent, and day light. He shot the vent apart with his P90 and threw it away. He jumped out into the desart. The sun was just rising. He ran looking at his watch. 2 minuets. He saw infront of him 3 black vans, and some people in black. He ran to them. "Run that place is gonna blow!" he shouted. 3 men in suits stopped him. "LET GO OF ME!" he shouted. One laughed, and pushed him to the floor. He pulled an item from his pocket, and pushed a button. "There, the city wont blow" he said.

"who are you?"
"we are the three founders of Spiral, we have come to see our city. Are you the only one left"?
"yeah"
"did the black ops we sent in make it?"
"no, they died"
"what a shame, they had all our plans. They were originally sent in to take all the info regarding Dean, the bugs, everything and set the city to explode, as we thought all was lost. But then Dean stopped it. So we bypassed Dean and restarted the countdown when you deactivated one of his harddrives. But we now know that you have our info."
"what info?"
"you are a scientist are you not?"
"yeah i am"
"so you know about our experiments?"
"yeah, all of them, and i'm gonna make it so that this corporation is shut down!"

they laughed.

"No my friend, we shall never go.
"what?"

the three black men moved past him, twards the city. They were followed by more black ops.

"Get us in, i want to bring back this city, and find out what went wrong.
"NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" shouted Jim. He turned to see a black op with a gun to his head. "Leave no witnesses" said a man in a suit. The Black op shot Jim between the eyes, and moved on.




"Gentlemen, i think were back in bussiness" said a man in a suit...

THE END...

Mmm... good ending, I didn't expect that. Oh happy anti-hollywood ending :). So, now write another story, please.

lol, thanx SS.