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Vyrien 12-10-2013 11:04 AM

Thanks for the critique and sketches MM, honestly she was just supposed to be standing there with the torch up but this raises a point in itself in that the pose is difficult to read.

The tassels are actually tentacles which are often portrayed as being stiff, this is why some are stuck one way and some are going the other.
http://puu.sh/5Iu9i.jpg
(fanart because I can't find the official art anywhere)

Also you don't sound patronising at all, I love critique, even if it's just 'this is shit, hands don't work like that' or similar.

STM 12-10-2013 03:14 PM

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ALL TIPS ARE WELCOME

I've got a tip for you. >w>

Slog Bait 12-10-2013 03:33 PM

That STM. What a charmer.

Vyrien 02-24-2014 06:19 PM

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I've got a tip for you. >w>

oh bby

Mostly anime, apologies in advance if you aren't a ginormous fucking weeaboo like me.

http://puu.sh/69FxR.jpg

http://puu.sh/69Qns.jpg

http://puu.sh/6d9EL.jpg

http://puu.sh/6higN.jpg

http://puu.sh/6owtu.jpg

http://puu.sh/6nt9g.jpg

http://puu.sh/6Wpl3.jpg

http://puu.sh/6Wprx.jpg

http://puu.sh/6Wqle.jpg

http://puu.sh/6WpC6.jpg
Fucking speedpaint needs more contrast.

http://puu.sh/72LY7.jpg
There we go.

Slog Bait 02-24-2014 09:27 PM

MOST EXCELLENT CONTRAST

Also the one right above the dragon. Wicked.

I'm totally going to critique you next time I see you on skype.

MA 03-18-2014 11:03 AM

i never realised quite how much i fucking love dragons. kudos on all that work man.