OOC: Jammer and the cyborg slig had a fight, he went bezirk :P. Im gonna make a reply later, don't have time now.

Anni, walked around in the factory, thinking of how easy it was to skip work and just play around. She just ran along the walls, and talked to herself. Then she saw Freak, who had escaped of some reason she didn't know. He seemed sory and sad.

Anni: "Aww... What are you doing here? Did Kix let you out, and forget about you?"

She took Freak up, and started to play with him.

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Kix Had lost Freak somewhere, and hoped she'd find him, before he found his way to the stockyard. She was worried. She looked all the places she knew the most. Then she met Javi and Dean, who where sitting down and talked.

Kix: "Have you seen Freak?"

Dean: " No... Well, i heard some barking some time ago, but i didn't wanna check it."

Kix then walked away.

Javi: "Hmm... Soo... what should we do now? And when will i go out hunting?"

Dean: "I don't know... Maybe you should remind Arnie about it."

Javi: "Yeah, he doesn't seem to have control on anything here... It's all a bit messy."

Arnie: "OK, #7 Slig, go and find Dean and tell him that today he has a day off."

#7 Slig: "Sure thing, boss."

*runs away*

Otto: "What now, Arn?"

Arnie: "Well... Let's go up to the Executive Office."

Otto: "OK."

*they find a platform and go to the upper levels*

(occ: Hy I only here in this weekend: So my chars are watching the FortuneWheel show where Will will die... or not... this will be the start of a Sub-Fan Fiction, inside of the Rpg, separated from the original story... you can join to this fiction in the start... but not now... I will start this in December... I write soon, but I have a lot of things to do...)

OOC: Ummm... Not to be mean, but your grammars aren't very good, although it's gotten better since the start(which is a good thing.) I think you should wait.

Later at night Expert was in his room but could'nt sleep . Some annoying sound was going off

Expert : Shut up Fang!

With that he kicked Fang as it sounded like barking but it was'nt him either . Another Slog was in there somewhere .....

(occ: 1 - I'm written this very fast...
2 - You mean I wrote "hy"? I always use this, I know it's "Hi" but I now reformating my own language, so... Duh... nevermind...)

ooc : But Will It's plain lazy . Like sg . You can type ''something'' easily enough but instead you have to abbreviate it ....

(OOC: Oh great, I send Nick to Vykers Lab and now I can't remember why...)

Nick got of the meetle balloon when he reached Vykers labs. He had a look around, things were still being restored from the crash, interns were doing their best to fix everything up. Well at least the damn thing was flying again...

Nick: Hey! Someone take me inside!

(occ: I know I'm lazy... )

Bela and co. are watching the Tv...

Showslig: Can I start now? Umm... ladies and gentleglucks! Here comes the FortuneWheel!

Dave: What a lame name.

Bela: Yeah.

Showslig: Now we have a special, exclusive prisoner here in Mudcatraz. He's not a scrub or a scrab, he is old, and not so tasty and mysterious! Behold! Will the Wander!

Steve: It's him.

Bela: Yeah.

Showslig: And the first "spinner" is... Tex!

Tex: Howdy, folks!

Showslig: Ok, the wheel is spinning, spinning... and... and, it's... the Tear Extractor 500000 Moolah! Congratulations, Tex!

Tex: Thanks.

Showslig: So the Torture 1 is: Tear Extractor! Hear the scream!

ZAP!

Will: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaarrrrghhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!

Showslig: Yeah, scream, scream!!!!

---a half hour later---

Showslig: And the Killing Blow is: A fan of knives! Bloody!

Suddenly the MFF appears... Joe touch Will's shoulder and start chanting ( With one hand)... suddenly a blue wave destroys the camera...

Bela: Wow...

Dave: WTF???

Steve: ...???

Slig: M.O.M. news here! A blue energy wave destroyed Mudcatraz. The wander and the natives are heading to Rupture Farms! They will arrive in one week!

Dave switches off the TV...

Dave: We need a weapon!

Bela: I have Gina.

Dave: No, we need a more powerful weapon!

Bela: Gina is not enought powerful?

Steve: But where we find one...?

Dave. I dunno......Wait!... The Industrial Central System! Where's a computer?

----------------------
Acessing Data....... done
Password: ****
Confirm Password: ****
Write down again: ****
I know i's not four stars! Now the Real Password!
Real Password: Pass
2nd Password: Word
Ok.....
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Moogle
Search: WANDER
Searching............................................"WANDER" not found

Search: spoocerope, parachute bags
Searching..............................Expedition287.GXG found
Open Expedition287.Gxg.
executing.........
GENERAL PROTECTION FAULT
Restart

Open [LAST DOWNLOADED FILE]
Open Expedition287.Gxg
Processing..........
Executing...........
Thinking.............
Loading..............
Something..........
Ok.
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Expedition 287 Diary:

"I found a strange wallpainting in a valley, near the sea of Mudos. This is a painting from a creature who has a somekind of organic parachute bags. Yesterday I found a strange sacred gate to a cave. I can't open it with help of scrubs, weapons, anything. I heard: the expedition is cancelled."

Dave: A gate?

Steve: We must go there! there is something behind that gate! Anyone want to come?

Bela: No, I stay here...

Steve: Ok... but we still need some help!

(occ: And now the Sub-Rpg-Fan Fiction starts... in december...)

OOC: Really, i didn't get a thing of what just happened.. I hope you do not start some kind of war again. I hate when RPG's turn into a plain war. :(

(occ: No, don't worry... be happy! You will see it...)

(Well.... You did see that the last war didn't work out, so don't start a new. Keep it calm, and let it come with the time. If this RPG needs some major change, it think we'd all know.)

Anni playede with Freak, but then he started barking. Then he ran away. Anni followed.
Anni: "Where are you going?"
Then Freak stopped up and started barking at a door.
Anni: "Wow, this slog sure is screwed up..."

ooc: yeah, I don't mind leaving wars out of RF. Just concentrate on the "factory life". :D


*Arnie and Otto go into the Executive Office*

Arnie: "Now... We should consider doing more efforts for more profit."

Otto: "If you say so."

Arnie: "I do. Our last buyer was... Bob, was it?"

Otto: "That's right. That was a looong time ago. What we need is a rich Glukkon with a huge company full of workers."

Arnie: "That's right. But which company is the largest. Most of them have been shut down, like Magog Motors, Splinters etc."

Freak still barked at the door, then he turned at Anni, and sqeaked a bit. Then he barked at the door again.

Anni: "What is it?"

She impatiantly opened the door and turned on the light. Boxes of Scrabcakes and Paramite pies, lay everywhere. Freak started biting the boxes.

Anni: "NO! Stop! What are you doinG!? You can't just eat the cakes!"

But Freak wouldn't stop. Then she tried to take the cakes away from him, but he just ran away. Anni didn't know what to do, so she just walked away.

Anni: "I have no idea of what just happened..."

Can I please join, this sounds like a lot of fun :)
Name:Rincewynd
Species:Slig
Age:20
Personality:Works well, sleeps when nobody is looking
Appearence:Shiny new legs and mask. Rifle, with paramite and scrab scratches (there was an....Incedent, don't ask)
Biography:Worked at Fee co. depot (left soon after security was breached 'i am not a coward, it was a strtegic retreat')

(OOC: hmmm... maybe it's time for a new character.)

Name: Razer
Age: 18
Species: Helicopter Slig(spelling?)
Personality: His heart is black as it can get. Would never do anything good for anyone, and does not trust anyone. He likes to make veryone's life hell. Well, at leats the mudokons. But is more frindly to sligs.
Biography: HAs a tattoo of a dead mudokon on his shoulder. His skin is dark-green. His size, is normal slig-size.

Razer when to the information-box, where a slig sat down.

Razer: "I'm the the slig who will keep everything in order."

Slig: "Umm.. yeah, the intance is right over there. You can put your stuff in the restroom."

Razer: "whatever."

Then he when inside.

Name: Virgil
Age: 16
Species: Slig, Worker Class
Personality: Sarcastic slacker
Appearance: Your average Slig. Recognized when heard, not seen.
Biography: Virgil is a slig who has come under the idea that he is a tragically misunderstood genus of the Slig race. After spending a rather absurd amount of his life writing an advice page* for the "Daily Deception," he was conscripted into Rumor Kontrol**, where he spread mayhem and chaos. In a noble (but possibly misguided) effort to simultaneously continue to employ Virgil, and salvage RK, he was transfered to the newly restored Rupture Farms, where he currently resides as the local smart-alec. Sharp tongue, but lack of any work ethic, many scratch their heads as to why he has yet to be fired. Enjoys being problematic and offering, "advice with a price."
Odd Trait(s): Where in Hades did he obtain that Russian accent?
Favorite Hang-Out: The SoulStorm Brew Vendo, located in the Employee Lounge.
Catch Phrase: "The trouble with this universe, is the surplus of problems and the lack of complainers."





*"Ya want sympathy? Write to Abby. Ya want sarcasm? Write to Virgil."
**"What the public don't know, won't hurt us."

NOTICE: Virgil is currently boarding at FeeCo Depot, and shall not appear at Rupture Farms until later notification. Thank you.

ooc: Great, three more characters! Welcome to W@RF, Nepharski and Rincewynd!



Arnie: "We can ask the Magog Infonet about the largest factory, can't we?"

Otto: "OK, I'll do that."

*Otto steps to the Fone, steps on a few buttons on the floor to dial*

InfoGlukk: "Hello?"

Otto: "I would like to know which is the largest corporation of the Magog Cartel."

InfoGlukk: "Wait a sec... and don't forget the greeting next time..."

Anni returned to Feak, only to find out thathe had eaten almost all the Paramite Pies and Scrab cakes.

Anni: "Oh NO! OH NO! What should i do? If anyone finds out, i'm in trouble."

Then she picked up Freak, who had become slightly heavier and walked out, whistling.

Anni: "Me didn't do anything. Shame on you Freak. Now i must find Kix and tell what bad slog you've been."

Freak made weeping sounds.

Anni: "No, crying doesn't help you. You have been a baddie!"

Then she walked down a path, and saw Kix, doing nothing.

Anni: "Oh kix! I have Freak!"

Kix looked over at Annie.

Kix: "OOH! Here you are big boy."

She took Freak.

Anni: "But... He has been quite bad."

Then she told what happened.

Kix: "Aha... So Little Freak couldn't resist the urge to eat the cookies. Oh well, he's just a dog anyway."

Then she patted Freak, and walked away. Anni, looked at her, with a big question inside head.

Anni: "OOOKAY! Everyone, is screwed up here i see."

Hi guys!, I'm the great oddworld fan, and it'll be very good, when I play that interesting game with you :) But... There is a little problem..... Not very little I think... Beceause I'm from Polland, and my English is not very good, as You see... And I'm 13, and I speak Polish, not English, byt I think, I can play with you. :) Could I ? PLEASE..... :)

But I understand, if You don't wont apply me in game. :) That's no problem, I'll come again, when I learn more English.

(OOC: No prob at all, :) If you feel like you've misspelled something, you could read it again, ask someone for help, or write it in Word and use the autocorrecter.)

ooc: There's nothing wrong if your English is not very good. We usually get the point, even if there are spelling mistakes and such. And writing a story can improve English very much. So, I advise you to join, if you still want to play. Post your character's profile and you can start, and read the rules on the first page, please. :fuzsmile:

Ok, thanks guys :)
Name:Ralph
Species:Mudokon
Age:16
Gender:Male
Appearance: Normal looking mudokon. Gray-blue skin, arms, legs, long hair, and funny pants :)

*Wake up*
Ralph: Yeh... It's my first day of work here. Mayby I should go, and talk with my boss.
*And he do, what he said*

Anni saw a new Mudokon, and she got all exited.

Anni: "OH MY ODD! A NEW MUD? Hello new Mud! Whats your name? My name is Anni!"

Razer had just arrived at the same time, but he didn't see anni, and she didn't see him.

Razer: "Now where might i find the boss for my assignement?"

Then he searched for anyone to tell him who to speak with.

Ralph: "Hi Anni! My name is Ralph, and I'm new here. Could you tell me, where I can ask for orders?"

Ralph: "As I see, I'm not alone" *And he smiled* "Are you new here? Do you know somebody? Tell me please, about Ruptree Farm, is that a good job for someone like me?"

He was very interested.

*Ralph went with Anni to the Scrabcakes Machine, and he bought her one as a treat, then they were talking*

Expert was on guard duty (boring!) when he saw the new mud . He laughed and pulled him away from Anni...

Expert : Well Well , a new guy on the block eh ? Fancy cleaning my room ?

note : Rincewynd just incase you did'nt know Expert is a cyborg big bro so I would'nt suggest fighting :P

Anni pulled Ralph away from Expert.

Anni: "Don't mind him. He's just crazy. Well, you and i could work together, i don't know if you should speak to Arnie, as his usually hard to find."

Anni smiled, and happily ate her Scarbcake.

Ralph quickly stand up

Ralph think: "Hugh.. Propably I was wrong about this place"

Ralph: "So... Ekh... Yes I'm a new guy. I guess, you are guard. Did I do something wrong? I was asking her about my job. So, mayby you can help me hugh....?"