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Being loud and aggressive does not a good politician make.

True it's, but he sees how incompetent our ex-prime minister is, unlike the people who invited him to President of the European Council

http://i.imgur.com/aY0e8k8.png

BBC: Defending people's right to be racist, but not their right to be gross.

New web comic I started the other day.

Wicked. I used to do a webcomic when i was a bit younger. You hosting it anywhere?

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BBC: Defending people's right to be racist, but not their right to be gross.

How ironic considering their past dealings with pedophiles.

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Wicked. I used to do a webcomic when i was a bit younger. You hosting it anywhere?

For the time being, I am just posting it to the Domesticated Abuse (that's the name of the comic) Facebook page. If you Like the page, it will make me happy! I'll be posting a new comic every week.

https://www.facebook.com/domesticatedabuse

What Holy Sock's friends will see:
*Holy Sock's name here* likes Domesticated Abuse.

That's half the fun!

Damn straight. It's different than domestic abuse!

Exactly! Instead of hitting me, she just paints my nails after I fall asleep, and sticks her finger in my ass every time I let my guard down.

New Domesticated Abuse!

Magically appearing glasses!

Yup! I noticed it, too, but we'd already reshot a couple of scenes, and I think I was going to get my ass kicked if I made her do it again.

She painted his nails whilst he was sleeping. It's Domesticated Abuse, Nate!

She removed the polish from his nails* whilst he was sleeping.

Edit: inb4 polish joke

Also, having been in a hurry, I didn't notice it until I'd left for work.

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New Domesticated Abuse!

lmao this is some cringeworthy shit to be honest

I knew this one wasn't going to turn out as well, as soon as I started putting it together. The color patterns were too busy for the filter I was using, and I agree that it makes it hard to tell what's happening. I'll get better at it as we go along, though, and the next one is going to be much simpler, too.

As long as it's not drawn in MS Paint

Never! I can't draw.

Oh. I thought she was doing her own nails. Next time maybe don't put the entire setup of the joke in the first two frames. You didn't need to have the snoozing frames to make it work.

Yeah OANST you're shit.

As shit as about every other webcomic was on its second strip.

Geez Nate, way to make him feel good!

e: Fucking hell I swear everything I've said on here for the last week has sounded really sarcastic or mean.

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Oh. I thought she was doing her own nails. Next time maybe don't put the entire setup of the joke in the first two frames. You didn't need to have the snoozing frames to make it work.

Yeah, I almost rearranged the entire thing before posting it. Not sure why I didn't. The snooze button is a thing that when hit makes the alarm go quiet for about ten minutes and then start up again (not sure if that's what it's called over seas). I was trying to show that I was hitting the snooze button, and so over slept, and that's how I managed to not notice that my nails were painted before I left for work. However, I do think that the panel with me saying that I over slept probably told that story well enough without the "snooze" panel, so yes, I agree. I knew this one was kind of a mess, and I was a little disappointed with that, because I felt like the story board was actually funnier than the first comic we published. But yeah, I learned a few things from this one, and I do appreciate the thoughtful input.

I plan on sticking with this, and after maybe about two years, starting to monetize it. I realize that it's a long, up hill battle to get something like this recognized, but I feel like the concept has legs, and I want to give it a shot. If I can make it work, it's something that could be very good for my family. I figure I'll start a website for it when it gets to about 500 Likes on Facebook. We're at 71 right now, but I'm capable of being patient.

71? Damn, you're older than I thought

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The snooze button is a thing that when hit makes the alarm go quiet for about ten minutes and then start up again (not sure if that's what it's called over seas).

Oh, I realised that much. And, yes, it's called Snooze. We might have different cheaparse electronics brands in Australia, but they're all made in the same shitty factories in China. :D

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I was trying to show that I was hitting the snooze button, and so over slept, and that's how I managed to not notice that my nails were painted before I left for work. However, I do think that the panel with me saying that I over slept probably told that story well enough without the "snooze" panel, so yes, I agree.

Pretty much, yes. It made the fact of you snoozing just a bit too prominent, when the larger point was that you overslept. Just remember: When it comes to Art, truth is no the same as honesty!

To be honest, I think it's a great spot.

I worked really hard on that one.

That was horrifying. In a good way.

That was incredible.