I'll get to drawing Slap some other time. Not to mention Krik, now that we're speaking of the medical staff.
Page 78. Nearly finished with the third page of v.1. |
Third page of v.1? isn't what you're doing now technically v.1? Oh, I'm confused...
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Those questions actually confused me too.
In other words, the 'script' of the last comic page can be found on the 3rd page of W@RF v.1. I hope this clears it. |
Oh, I see. I was thinking comic pages rather than the pages of the RP >.<
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Woo! Love the new comics and drawings! I've been on holiday the past week so that excuses my absense :p
Really liked all the new stuff. It would be cool to see a picture of Krik! #7 looked a little odd in the last three frames of that last one, sort of like he'd been deflated. :fuzconf: |
That's not #7 Slig on the last 3 frames, but Muse. Smudge and Vince took him inside, I didn't bother to draw the process. After all what he's been through, no wonder he's deflated.
Here's a full-size of Krik. Hope you imagined him like this, Splat. Tried to make him look older than the other Vykkers. |
Cool, I like it!
I'm always getting characters confused... blarg. |
That was great. Krik takes the prize of being the coolest looking Vykker ever designed by Dripik. I love how the character seems to have the posture, the glance, and the appearance of an average Vykker. Keep up the great work!
Interns are next... We need an Intern. |
Krik was designed by Splat.
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Created by me, immortalised by Dripik.
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I do realize these points. I meant design as in the physical art being presented here with Dripik's work of art.
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Most artists work while using their imagination, while here, I'm just following the descriptions others give about their characters and try to be as accurate as possible. Not much glory in this method, but I take your word for it. :D
Enough of modesty, here's page 79. |
I absolutely LOVE that Dek, dripik. Only thing missing is his ever present packet of Chill Pills, but it is still great, more or less exactly as I envisioned him.
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That was Krik, MM..
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And before that, it was Dek, so MM wins the prize car.
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There's a prize car? Why did no one tell me? I want a car!
You cn just feel the romance blossoming. Translate that as you will. |
Actually, that was Amy right there. The relationship is between RM and Jayne. So there is nothing right now.
(Which reminds me, Gappiqu and Dionysia still need to make up) Anyway, cool comic. I love it when there is all sorts of actions going on in different comics, rather than just one. The panels seem to be alive. |
Bah, I give up. :fuzemb:
Heehee, I completed AO with all 99 mudokons! I rock indeed! Oh, and Slaveless, don't expect Dion to make the first move. Also, expect her t be unplesant on his first attempt. Persistency is the key! |
I will see if I ever get back to drawing...
That's assuming Arnie will let Gappiqu live and Gappiqu will probably approach Dionysia in a way not isn't very... romantic. It would be your basic, 'We've been through too much', conversation. |
I can't wait for W@RF to go back up. Chris will be happy to 'introduce' himself to Dionysia. *wink wink cough cough nudge nudge*
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Venks, if you do, she will kill Chris. No joke. Or Gappiqu will. He won't really care if he is jailed.
Edit: That's a bit of an exagerration. Dionysia will probably just hurt his/her feelings, and Gappiqu will threaten him with a grenade. |
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Oh, and don't worry Slaveless; it's more likely Gappiqu will be given 'one last chance' or something. He won't be killed anyway. RG might not like it, but he's obedient to Arnie's orders. |
An Over The Border character, Stan the Big Bro. Heh rocks. Looksee:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/61689265/ Comments kthx. |
Why would Arnie give him 'one last chance' before even showing his plans about the security plans? (Which, I must say, would be quite interesting to put in effect) Gappiqu has built a weapon that was later given to Goresplatter that was untested and unstable, which later blew off an arm, an eye, and some blood of Molt's, threw Molt against a wall, kept a criminal Slig out of sight, flirted with a female Mudokon of great importance which distracted her from her job, didn't finish pipes and didn't tell anyone, was the cause of two Mudokons from being seriousily injuried, nearly killed Praetyre, strangled Slap, threw a grenade at Molt, caused a panic in the basement, attacked Dr. Krik, assulted RG-49, and made an experiment go into an emotional self? I'm sure any Glukkon (and Slap) would love to send him to Skillya and record his death for future amusement. Or are you counting the things he did well, like saving the factory from being destroyed by a train, stopped a murder in the makings, fixed some parts of the Grinders, saved a Mudokon experiment from death, eliminated a possible Mudokon terrorist theart, and made security plans for Rupture Farms?
Nice Stan, Zerox. The very image is very detailed. However, it seems a bit light on the pencil. It was hard to see it. |
I like the detail of his pants. His head seems small, but I don't know if he's supposed to be like that or not, so it's not disturbing the quality. Good work.
And I second what Splat said. I hope rules will be taken seriously. Most of you people have been W@RFing for a time (like Slaveless, Zerox, MM, Pat, Venks and others), you know how to behave. I'm more concerned about the newcomers who are sometimes overly excited about joining, and finally end in messing everything up. |
When you actually look at the drawing, it's not that light. it's mainly the stupid scanner. Should look better when/if I get around to colouring him.
The head sorta came out like that, though I quite like the effect it gives him, so I feel it should be 'meant' to be like that. Humans can have somewhat different shaped skulls, why not Sligs? |
Cool picture Zerox. Personally from my experience of big bros (which admitedly isn't all that extensive) I thought his head is all right. the detail on the pants and arms (and the dogtags) is cool, though I thought his fingers are a little too even. I know on sligs their fingers are mismatched sizes, though I'm not sue if its so evident on bigbros.
Slaveless, since we'll be reopening W@RF the day after, Gappiqu will probably have already been spoken to by Arnie. There was one time Anni had to face Arnie after Stivik had accused her of trying to kill him four times. The way Anni accounted events and the way Stivik accounted events were very different. Perhaps Gappiqu isn't as intelligent as Anni (no offence intended) but as long as he tried to defend his actions, I'm fairly certain Arnie would give him another chance. Let me put it like this. Gappiqu invented a gun and was forced to use it in the defence of another employee (Molt was strangling someone at the time I think) before he could send it for testing and licencing and stuff. No need to mention the criminal cus no one saw him! Flirting in W@RF is not unheard of (ever here of Muse and Jayne?) so I'm fairly certain Arnie could overlook that. He didn't tell anyone he had finished the pipes and they shouldn't have been turned on until that had been acertained, so that incident was really the fault of the person who turned the steam on without asking (can't remember who that was now but never mind). Carefully skirt around the incident with the med team. Krik didn't tell anyone Gappiqu shot him so that can be overlooked. RG can be called an act of panicked self-defence since their were dangerous animals in the basement and the robot prevented Gappiqu from leavin even though he was in danger of being eaten, And it's hardly Gappiqu's fault if Dionysia is prone to moodswings. Plus, he stopped terrorists, saved lives, fixed pipes, planned security and so on and so forth. |
So, in a way, Gappiqu would probably be pardoned in this situation. I guess if you put it in a way that shows the defendant's point of view, there would be innocence. And I do intend on showing the intelligence of Gappiqu in the next version. He is like Baltar Gaius is Battlestar Galactica; incredibly intelligent, but emotionally unstabel. And most of the basement incident and the entire laboratory incident has been forgotten by Gappiqu for reasons that are hard to explain. If you put it like that, (which is most likely to have happened, being that Gappiqu wants to live without being killed in the end) sure, he will be pardoned.
Yet, if you asked different people on what happened, they would have different recollections of these incidents. Only Goresplatter, Edward, and Rick would possibly remembered the cafeteria incident, which would back him up. Yet, still. If you asked Molt, he would say that Gappiqu is a menace, who tried to kill him twice. Slap would say that his tramauitized self is quite hazardous, being that he can't control his feelings. RG-49 would say that he would want him to pay for his assult on him. There would be a confusion there. But I guess that in a sense of Gappiqu's point of view, he could explain his reactions, which could be excuseble. I would just have to see what happens in v.8 then. |
@Splat: I don't think the unevenness in fingers is *quite* as evident in Big Bros as normal Sligs, though I did try to make it a bit shorter, the way it's covered up is rather awkward there, and was so when drawing it, so it probably is rather long.
Big Bros are meant to have longer, and possibly somewhat thinner skulls, though due to Stan's extra size, his skull may be approximately the right length, just too thick, but even then it's probably a bit short too. Dog tags FTW. |
Ahh, since the W@RF is back in buisness and this is still alive...anywho I decided to put my brain into action and try and draw one of my friggin' chars....
http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs19/300...killyaslig.jpg Know who this is? |