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Sheriff-Murder 03-31-2005 09:02 AM

ooc: it can be my comp...

mudling 03-31-2005 11:15 AM

(the fuzzles return to noe)
noe: we lost a few of these guys to a guy named sligslog. a scrab saved my life and i fell from a couple of floors. i've brought ratz too, they can act a bit like sucurity cameras.

Gretin 04-01-2005 12:31 AM

*Groll enters the room and sees Stivik with #7*

Groll:"Oh, I see you're already busy. Well, I just need to know what I'll be assigned to in this place. Is there any specific place I need to keep watch on or is it just wander round making sure everything's in order?"

(ooc:Just thought I'd say: Mudling and Sheriff-Murder, could you please not post so often? No offense or anything, it's just that it gets a bit annoying seeing millions of posts made by just two people in one day.
Also, Sheriff-Murder, if you were taking notice of other people characters, you would know that Groll is at the Security Office - and doesn't have a room yet to my knowledge. ;) Also you would already know that Groll is a mechanic, and Nick is into mechanics as well. And it must be your computer that's making Splat's text look big because it looks fine to me.)

mudling 04-01-2005 12:47 AM

occ: sorry, i will try to minimize my posts.

Splat 04-01-2005 01:40 AM

Isn't there a rule for 2 posts a day in W@RF? THere used to be anyway.
Not much i can say till Dripik turns up again...

dripik 04-01-2005 04:38 AM

ooc: Well, at the start of this part I said that people shouldn't sit here all day. They check in once or twice a day and post. Few and longer posts are better than lots of short posts...
And I can't see anything wrong with the letters, it must be your computer, Sheriff.


#7 Slig: "Let's see... Maybe you should look around in the factory first. Scout around and report if you find anything interesting."




Otto: *to Noe* "You're kind of a nature nerd, don't you..."

Arnie: "That's enough, Otto... Those Ratz can be useful. But I heard stories about Fuzzles, they say they are vicious and alike. But, if you can tame them, they can help you wherever they want."

Splat 04-01-2005 04:48 AM

Stivik: "Ok, yes sir... oh, and, uh, I was wondering, would I be allowed to see what happens between Anni and Nick... These things interest me. You know, like those crime things on TV. This isn't as servere obviously, but, well... It's a start, you know..."

mudling 04-01-2005 07:25 PM

ooc: LOL, noe seems to be a bigger hippy than abe!
noe: that's great! i also have a thing with meeps, they provide wool, and if there is any problem with animals, i can tame them. and about that gabbier loss, if manage to ever capturite again, i'll help breed them. and mudokon birds, i can get them away if you wish. like i siad, any animal problems or jobs, i'll be happy to do it.

Seargentbig 04-03-2005 12:36 AM

(Ooc: Now that I've read through the pages of stuff that has come, I'll join. Again.:rolleyes:

Name: "Nails"
Species:Slig
Gender: Male
Age: I'm gonna give up on this. His age in physical years is a little over 15. His equivilant age is 53.
Appearance: Old and beaten. He has scar tissue all over him, and some missing tentacles. But he has a modern gun and a grenade launcher straped to his back, as well as a mud spoocebow. It doesn't work without a mudokon, of course, but he keeps it as a souvineer.
Backstory: Nails (tough-as) is an old slig. Experienced, too. He's been involved in many rebellions and minor battles, and was until recently a drill-sergeant at the slig barracks. The sound of his voice has sent BB sligs into a foetal ball, bringing them violently back to days of being woken up at 4pm by a voice complaining about how he had been brought mudokons instead of sligs to do back breaking, strenuous tasks. He didn't get the BB slig steroids himself because the effects would be too unreliable on an older slig. He is a bit of a freak for slig standards, being focused and on task all the time. The near collapse of the barracks had him leave. He has now come to the new Rupturefarms.

Name: Armpit
Species: Slog
Gender: Male
Age: (In slog years) 50
Appearance: Like his owner; beaten and scarred. Like his owner, it doesn't mean he's weak, it means he's a survivor of many fights.
Backstory: Nails' slog. Presumibly he had a different name as a sloggie, but now it's armpit because he smells like one.

Now all I need is a way to get Halije and Connie back into the RPG.)

*At the Rupturefarms station is the squeaking of a maintenance cart. On it, is a slig and a slog, who bouth would be called "rich in years", but not in anything else. The thing grinds to a halt. Nails steps off, sweating and panting, followed by Armpit, smelly and panting.*
Nails: "Dammit, that was a long trip. I've got to remember to catch a train ne-"
*He is interupted by the crash of a maintenance cart being smashed to bits by a train that was following.*
Nails: "****! I could have just gone on that!"
*He kicks the train, denting his leg, and marches off towards the facility. Armpit follows*

Cyber-Slig 04-03-2005 01:03 PM

ooc : OK, seeing as someone decided not be an ignorant bastard ,and told me, I'll be rejoining.

T-nex 04-03-2005 02:13 PM

OOC| That's great... Now start posting already :)
Oh and welcome back Searg Big :)

Ajiellyn 04-04-2005 03:38 PM

OOC: Hey, I just wanted to say that I loved the way you guys were going before. The way some of you were RPing together and you were all in separate little groups, and Oddish could play his own thing without a problem. You played loosely and had fun. :< I just wanted to say that it was O.K. that way. Nobody has to be perfect, and we're all new at some point. Just relax and have fun. ^^ Thanks for reading.

mudling 04-04-2005 11:44 PM

(the fuzzles return)
fuzzles: me me me!
noe: looks like you might have a chance of working, no, don't hurt anyone else! ok?
fuzzles:mee me me!
noe: good, now show the boss what you can do!
(the fuzzles start making piramids)
noe: no, the work you can do!
(the fuzzles run off)
noe: they'll be back shortly, they're just getting ready.

Havoc 04-05-2005 04:01 AM

Nick enters the RR just to find Math there as well.

(OOC: I dunno where I left em earlier, so :P)

Nick: What are you doing here?

Math: Me? What are you doing here?

Nick: I'm coming to get a soda I left under the bed! What about you, you should be working!

Math: Well, mister I-strangle-muds-and-drink-a-soda-afterwards. You know that Stavik guy? I think he knows...

Nicks grabs a can from underneath his bunk.

Nick: You mean that new know it all slig? Yea, I know him. What do you mean 'he knows'?

Math: Me being a terrorists big brother. Thats what.

Nick shut the door with a loud bang.

Nick (whispering): Would you keep it down!

He sat down on his bunk and drank some soda.

Nick: Eh... right. Okay... Im gonna talk to this Stavik guy. You stay here and don't show yer face untill I say you can.

Math: Sure... lock me up again why don't you?

Nick didn't respond and left the RR, on his way to find Stavik.

T-nex 04-05-2005 04:58 AM

OOC| His name is Stivik :p

Anni whent away, as nothing was happening. She was confused and angry at the same time., and needed some rest. She whent to the restroom, and threw herself on the bed, not noticing Math. She closed her eyes.

-------
Kix was in the cafeteria, drinking drinks which Dean made for her.

"Well, those are delicious." she said happily, after the 10th drink, "gimme another one."

Dean happily made another one.

"So, what are the others doing?" Dean asked.

"Well, Nick and Anni apparently has this hate between them. Nick.. he tried to starngle her, it's amazing. And you think you know someone." Kis answered.

Dean almost dropped the drink as he heard it.

"WHAT? What did he do? Strangle her?" he asked stunned.

He felt some inner anger rise. Kix looked at him, as she never saw him like that. She wondered if it had been stupid to tell him.

"Yes... He did... Well, it's because that Anni can't leave him alone, but you know, she a kid and all." Kix said.

"A KID? Of course she's a kid! That... that slug. Strangling Anni? And after what she's been pulled through? Good Odd... She's a kid, and he just starngles her like that?" Dean said angrily.

His skin was slowly turning red'ish. Kix began to worry.

"Well... Umm.. he has calmed down. Maybe you should too." Kix said.

Dean hit the table with his hand, and whent out to look for Anni.

(OCC| Rumours spread :p

Cyber-Slig 04-05-2005 08:23 AM

CS woke up

CS : Whoa... how long have I been sleeping.. this damn eye... it's made my brain inactive.. who the hell can fix this now...

Splat 04-05-2005 10:28 AM

Yes, indeed the name is Stivik.
Anyway, as Dripik seems to have run off I'll just get on with it.


Several minutes later Stivik steps out of #7 Slig's office in search of the bunk he was just assigned and with the assurance that if he went to Arnie's office at the apropriate time later he would be able to find out the result of the Anni-Nick problem.

Stivik finds his bunk which he has to himself at least until another batch of sligs arrive. He climbs onto the bed, unclips his black box from his belt and presses a small black button on the back. A panel flips open revealing a microphone and various other buttons. He presses one with the label, "back"

Stivik presses the play/stop button once more and speaks into it. "Arrived 2 and a half hours ago at Repture Farms. I've spoken to several muds and sligs, details on the tape. I've addressed Arnie and the head of security. Threats of piecemaking currently appear to be some part of an unorthodox scheme to improve mud work-rate. Several sligs seem unsatisfied with the conditions set by the boss. The mudokons certainly seem to approve of his standards."

Stivik presses the play/stop button and another in the back panel labelled "End".

He presses play again: "My next issue will be to interview more of the workers. An argument seems to have broken out between one of the younger muds and the slig, Nick (previously occupated at Fee Co. Depot and vykkers Labs). An informal trial will take place later on. I will try to attend to watch the proceedings." Stivik presses stop and then a button labeled send. The box beeps quietly and a blue light comes on at the back. It goes out again 3 seconds later.

Stivik gets up and leaves the room to patrol the building. In any respectible factory the slig would almost certainly come out on top in a situation like Nick and Anni's, even if several sligs gave evidence in favour of the mud. But then, the whole reason Stivik was here was because The Magog no longer believed Repture Farms to be respectible.

dripik 04-05-2005 11:04 AM

OOC: heh, Stivik will be our chronicler, recording everything and stuff :D
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Ajiellyn. And welcome back, Seargent.


Rick: "Hm... what should I do now? Dean kinda took my place at the Cafeteria, so I'm not much of use there right now... I'll check the Storage Room, maybe I can find something useful."

*walks to the Storage Room*

Rick: "Wow... Loads of junk."

*looks around*

T-nex 04-05-2005 11:08 AM

Razer sat down again, in the security room, watching the cameras.

"Oh let's see... The cafeteria, muds going mad.. nah... The restroom, Anni and that Math-guy... That new slig, talking to some black thing... Aw well, might as well get some sleep." he mumbled, and leaned down in the chair, dozing off.

mudling 04-05-2005 12:02 PM

noe: (hearing the rumer) (out loud) oh no! i could get strangeled next!
fuzzles: me me me me!
noe: (to fuzzles) oh, sorry. poor mudokon and poor slig which is about to get into trouble!

T-nex 04-05-2005 12:33 PM

OOC| Bah.. when i said that, i didn't really mean it literally :p Anyways, who cares.. lol..

mudling 04-05-2005 12:40 PM

noe: well, i guess it's just a rumor.
(a huge slog appears)
noe: here boy! come here now!
(the slog starts to drool)
noe: uh oh! (runs inside the boss's room and then closes the door)

Gretin 04-05-2005 10:39 PM

Groll: "Oh, ok. Well, I'll be off then." *to himself* "Hope I can't get lost in this place..."
____________________
New character:

Name:Sefon
Species:Mudokon
Age:Approximately 17(human years)

Bio:A natural spy, Sefon is good at stealth and cunning. He is also a bit of a prankster, and knows an opportunity for mischief when he sees one. He has been schooled in the use of mystical powers ever since he was born, so he is very skillful with them, but also very protective of them, meaning he will almost never use any of them unless he needs to. His natural abilities include extremely good hearing (another reason for him being a spy) and he can change the sound of his voice, within limits. Linking this to his mystical powers, he can almost perfectly mimic any voice that he hears.
Has been sent to RuptureFarms from a mudokon fortress (what used to be Rector's Refinery;)) in search of something important...
Appearance:Green skin with weird gray splotches all over it.
__________________
(ooc: I can get Sefon into the RPG in this way:
He's managed to make it look like he's been transfered(sp?) from the Rector Refinery to RuptureFarms by using the transmitting equipment at the refinery. Now he's entering RuptureFarms)
*Sefon randomly picks a path to follow and finds himself entering the cafeteria. Sees Kix*
Sefon:"Hey there! I'm new to this place, could you point me in the direction of wherever I have to go to get my job?"

Seargentbig 04-05-2005 11:43 PM

Nails reaches the interior of the stockyard.
Nails:"Right. Ahem. HEY! WHERE THE HELL CAN I FIND WHOEVER IS RUNNING THIS SCRAP HEAP!"

T-nex 04-06-2005 04:23 AM

Kix rturned around, watching Dean dessapear.

"Uh? Sorry? oh, um sorry, i don't have much time... I must find Dean." Kix said, looking in the direction where Dean had gone.

"Um, i must go now, go to the executive office, and you'll find the boss." Kix said, and ran away.

After she found Dean, she slowed down.

"Um... Dean? You there?" Kix asked desperatly, "Shouldn't you calm down?"

Dean ignored her, in his search for Anni. He whent out to the stockyard, and found Javi instead. Kix just slapped herself...

"I shouldn't have told him..." Kix said slowly.

Dean called for Javi, and then told him what happened. Kix watched intensly. From her point of view, she though Javi became rather angry, that even Dean got surprised.

"That damn little rat!" Javi growled, turning completely red from anger.

Dean stepped back a bit.

"Ehm, maybe i shouldn't have tld him..." He muttered to Kix.

"Believe me... I knoiw exactly how you feel." she replied.

"Where is Anni?" Javi asked, almost yelling.

Both Kix and Dean shrugged their shoulders, watching Javi furiously go away.

"What will he do?" Kix asked worried.

"I don't know.. but when he's mad, you'd better stay away from him." Dean said even more worried.

Cyber-Slig 04-06-2005 05:16 AM

CS : So who can fix the umm... eye.. oh yeah that was it, that pink mudokon, with the big chest, told me someone, uhh... who was it... strangling boy, I think... better go find him..

Cyber Slig began looking for Nick, if he didn't find him, he still wouldn't risk going to those damn vykkers

ooc : No, CS hasn't just got some forgetfulness disease, his damaged part of his head, is causing severe brain problems.

Splat 04-06-2005 06:26 AM

Stivik is heading towards the stockyard when a furious looking mudokon (Javi:eek: ) storms past him. Stivik reaches out and grabs him by the shoulder.

Stivik: "Hey, whats up with you? Don't you have a job to do? Or do you find the boss lets you get away without doing much work?"

T-nex 04-06-2005 06:35 AM

"Leave me alone!" He growled furiously, and pushed him away towards the wall.

Then he whent further, looked around once or twice. He didn't see Anni, and didn't bother to check the RR. He was as mad as Scrab right now.
---

Anni woke up as she heard steps outside the door, but it didn't come in. She looked at Math, who apparently was there too. She looked confused at him, and checked to see who was outside, but didn't see anyone. She shrugged her shoulder and looked at Math.

"Well, hello, i didn't see you. What are you doing here?" she asked Math.

big bro slig #1 04-06-2005 06:53 AM

ME please!
 
Name:The sligslayer.
Species:Slig (on steroids)
Age:15

Bio:Was kicked out of mini sole storm brewery because they said I wasn't good enough for them.So I took steroids from somebody and helped Abe destory the mini sole storm brewery.Now helps mudokons escape from places.

T-nex 04-06-2005 06:56 AM

OOC| Big Bro Slig, please give some more information on your character, like appearance, personality, a little more history ;)

big bro slig #1 04-06-2005 07:14 AM

Ok. Appearence: Has 1 eye missing,has scrab legs but they're yellowish- green color,and has paramite mouth but is brownish-yellow color.

Pesonality: Kills sligs where ever they are but is espcialy nice to Mudokons. ;)

History: Was brutally mutated by a mad scieantist/slig and that's why I like to kill sligs all da time.Afterwards a slig shot my eye out so I got a robotic one.

Cyber-Slig 04-06-2005 07:23 AM

ooc : So basically what your saying is, you kill sligs, so Cyber Slig, Nick, Razer and many others are going to die? And I thought he was a slig...

T-nex 04-06-2005 07:25 AM

OOC| Ehm, ok.. I'll let you pass for now, Big Bro, but don't make some big drastically changes to the storyline, and don't go on a killing-spree. That's not what we are looking for in this RP.. Behave and don't powerplay...

dripik 04-06-2005 08:02 AM

OOC: Yeah, kind of a strange character, but it's not the first one I see. Like T-nex said, don't do rampage here and alike. This "kill sligs all da time" bothers me a bit.
Read back a little (and look out for spelling mistakes).

big bro slig #1 04-06-2005 08:22 AM

:

ooc : So basically what your saying is, you kill sligs, so Cyber Slig, Nick, Razer and many others are going to die? And I thought he was a slig...

no, i'm not going to kill the sligs that have joined like u but u know like,um... not accual people.but sligs might like,make me work for them.

T-nex 04-06-2005 08:26 AM

OOC| So you're going to show how amizing your character is, by killing random sligs?? O_O Seriously, i do not get it...

big bro slig #1 04-06-2005 08:35 AM

:

OOC| So you're going to show how amizing your character is, by killing random sligs?? O_O Seriously, i do not get it...

Well not really all i want to do is help mudokons

T-nex 04-06-2005 08:37 AM

OOC| Ok.. but keep in mind that Mudokons are happy, or at least not mad at being at Rupture Farms... O_o Try back-reading a bit and you'll see why. And don't make your characters sound like some kind of over-powerful hero, cuz that's not much fun. Try giving your characters some weaknesses if you absolutely have to make him like that.

big bro slig #1 04-06-2005 08:43 AM

:

OOC| Ok.. but keep in mind that Mudokons are happy, or at least not mad at being at Rupture Farms... O_o Try back-reading a bit and you'll see why. And don't make your characters sound like some kind of over-powerful hero, cuz that's not much fun. Try giving your characters some weaknesses if you absolutely have to make him like that.

What i really mean is if there is a problem with the machinery i could help fix it er something....cuz i'm not gonna shoot em i'd be like, security\helper.

T-nex 04-06-2005 08:46 AM

OOC| Ehm.. there is a big difference between killing sligs, and fixing machinery O_o