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Seargentbig 05-11-2003 03:32 AM

HSH (Dreaming): (Every creature in the stockyards is being prosesed. HSH is last in line, so he has to watch them all. They are all chained up on a coveyabelt, so they cant escape)

"Help! Stop this! We have done nothing!"

(All the creatures watching just laugh)

"Stop!"

(The paramite in front of him gets choped up)

*Struggles*

"HELP!"

(waches as the meat grinder drops towards him)

"Ahhhh!"

(Realises he has woken up, and is in a cage)

'No! This isnt fair! I got all this way. Wait... that's just more reason to go further. Lets try plan 2'

*Starts hissing and screaching strangely*

A paramite in cage: " What is he saying?"

Another: "I don't know."

HSH: "Hieeesl"

Native Poser 05-11-2003 04:36 AM

Vick: *decides to walk around & try to find a place to sleep-eventually finding his way to the rest room* ...This spot taken? *sits on an empty bed & looks around*
Tattoo: *waiting in silence to see if Correl will respond*

Seargentbig 05-11-2003 07:02 AM

HSH: "Heeelll!"

Paramite 1: " What has happened to him? "

Paramite 2: " Has he forgotten how to speak? "

HSH: " Hee... No, im trying to learn a new way "

Paramite 1: " But there is only one way to speak "

HSH: " No, there's... "

Paramite 2: " Yes, only one. "

HSH: " No, Im trying to learn how thoes other creatures speak. Heelloo. "

*Jumps*

HSH: " Hey! That was it! "

Paramite 2: " What was what? "

HSH: *Rolls eyes*

" Nevermind "

tybie_odd 05-11-2003 07:33 AM

Smudge: I hear ya...it gets pretty tough when these factory accidents claim someone you know. ... *notices Drogin's glance to Crank* --Hey, so who's the new guy? Either of you know him?

Adrian: *twitches in his sleep, dreaming about chasing fleeches*

Vince: ...yep, I don't know about you Jayne, but I think everyone's got the right idea... *walks to his bed and throws himself on it* Ahhh. See, this is what you call a soft ending to a rough day! *plops his head into the pillow*

Jayne: *gets onto her bed across form Vince's and sits awake watching something*

Vince: ....Jayney, you okay~? No, you're crazy. What are you doing? It's time for sleeping, understand?

Jayne: *mumbling to herself* ....He's so handsome...

Vince: *looks around, realizes she's staring at RM while he sleeps* --Oh, for the love of odd. I don't have time for this! Goodnight! *rolls over and yanks the covers up to his ears*

Jayne: *finally lays down and pulls her blankets up, but keeps staring at RM affectionately*

*^*^*^*^*^*

Correl: *pauses for a moment in disbelief of what he hears, then turns his head slowly to see the young Tattoo sitting beside him, covered in the beautiful emblems of the native people...*

Correl: *rubs his eyes and looks again* .....You....you speak the old tongue..... *looks him over a moment, visibly awed* ...then.....then it was YOU who helped me with the chant.....your spooce is strong! *smiles* You are well trained....your tribe must be very glad to have you. ....But what are you doing here? This is no place for a native...you should leave before they find you...it's nice for a factory, but it's nothing like the Wild. You should escape now, before it's too late...

Native Poser 05-11-2003 10:28 AM

Tattoo: *bows his head breifly in respect to Correl*... Yes, I did help you.. *expression grows sad when Correl mentions his tribe* …Its already too late, Traitor ((Tattoo's name for Vick)) knows I'm here...Besides, I cant even get up at the moment... *grins*

~~~

Vick: *muttering quietly in his sleep*

Seargentbig 05-11-2003 11:18 AM

HSH: "Helloo"

' Im definetely getting better.'

"Fffffrrrre uuuuuusssssssssssss"

' Well, practice makes perfect '

Reptile 05-11-2003 11:20 AM

can i join :fuzblink:

I have 4 characters...

----First----
Name: Forder
Species: Slig
Age: 19
Personality: Pretty lazy, sometimes makes up excuses not to fight, normally hangs around outside in stockyards so no-one can see him sleep
Appearance: His left eye lens is green cause he likes fashionable things. His pants are shiny and not rusted. He normally carries a baton and his spine running down is dyed blue

--Second--
Name: Joe
Species: Slig
Age:17
Personality: Pretty angry and likes no-one but himself. He tries hard to get up to top ranks. He also likes to torture muds
Appearance: A pretty normal slig only looks more cleaner than others, his red lens shine with glimmer and his pants, like Forder are shiny.

---Third---
Name: Veesh
Species: Valet Slig
Age: 18
Personality: Pretty unreliable, he acts a psycho at times when no one is looking. He shows off by loitering around.
Appearance: A standard Valet slig only he wears green

--Fourth--
Name: Zip
Species: Mudokon male
Age: 16
Personality: A soulstorm brew addict, he likes to show his un-attractive charms to female muds. He dreams of becoming a Mudarcher one day
Appearance: Green, but only darker, his hair thing has feathers on them, he has a cut on his thigh because he teased a scrab

Joe: OK sir you can tell us are quarters here

Veesh: We'll work hard

Zip: Wheres my working place sir?

Forder: zzzzzzzzzzzz, oh........yeah, me too

Joe: We'll work hard

Forder: But Joe you said....

*Joe punches Forder in the arm

Joe: I'm pretty consiencious about my work sir

Veesh: Wheres the entertainment room?

Joe: Wheres the breifing room?

Zip: Wheres the drinking room?

Forder: Wheres the sleeping room?

Joe: Shut up


*Can i join :fuzblink: *

dripik 05-11-2003 03:13 PM

ooc: of course you can join

Remember: "say something", *do something*, ...'s Thoughts: (no comment), and ooc: if YOU want to say something. That's all.


#7 Slig: "Hey, what's that noise out there?"

*grabs his mask, turns it on and puts it on... again*

#7 Slig: "Oh, new workers! Welcome. It's rest time now, so go inside the Rest Room, choose a bed and sleep. We are doing it too at the moment. We had a hard day before you came here. The boss will talk to ya tomorrow. Good night!"

*goes back and continues sleeping*

#7 Slig: "Oops, almost forgot."

*puts his mask on the table and turns it off*

#7 Slig's Thoughts: "First, I didn't think that there will be so many workers around here earlier. But now, the factory is stuffed with workers. Lookin' gooood."

*falls asleep*


ooc: see? Just like that.

tybie_odd 05-11-2003 06:31 PM

Correl: Oh! Here, let me help you. We should get you to the Rest Room then. C'mon... *pulls Tattoo up by the arm and starts leading him toward the Rest Room*

*they walk down the dark cooridors of the factory*

Correl: [i]So tell me about Traitor...who is he? Did he come here with you, or was he working here before?[i]

*^*^*^*^*^*

Smudge: *still talking with Trask and Drogin*

Vince: *snoring*

Jayne: *finally getting sleepy as she continues watching RM*

Adrian: *wakes up when #7 Slig gets up, watches him leave and come back, then goes back to sleep himself*

Reptile 05-11-2003 06:56 PM

*Forder walks over to #7 Slig

Forder: Mr7 wheres the bedrooms?

Joe: all you ever think about is sleeping, why don't you be more serious about yourself for once you banana slug!

*Veesh rolls on the floor laughing*

Joe: You always wanted to work here, the closest you ever got was bonewerkz

Forder: Rupture farms has more comfortable hallways, not like bonewerkz, wheres Zack lately

(Zack used to work for Soulstorm Brewery when it blew up, no-one knows what happened to him)

Joe: He's dead

Veesh: Lies!!!!!

Forder: Told you, theres proof, hes alive

Joe: In your head, now if you don't mind, i have work to do

*Joe walks to the boss' quarters

Veesh: Why does he get access to those places

Forder: Because hes conse......consein....dont know how you say it about his......things that he does

Zip's imagination: (Im stuck here with these two idiots)

Zip: Im going to my fellow muds

*Zip sneaks off*

Forder: Hold it!

*Zip stops*

Veesh: Clean my pants you peasant!

Forder: Mine too!

Zip: Yours is already cleaned moron!

Forder: Why you little!!

*Forder begins to strangle Zip

Zip: S.....se....ssecur......security!!!

Veesh: hahahahahahahahahahaha, security please! your killing me!

Native Poser 05-11-2003 08:02 PM

Tattoo: Thank you *looks around as Correl leads him towards the rest room*...... Traitor is a big bro slig, you've probably seen him...He's new here--or at least I think he is. *pauses for a moment as they enter the rest room--looking at Vick* ..... *stops looking & follows Correl*
Vick: *sleeping* zzzzzzZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzz.....

Seargentbig 05-12-2003 08:04 AM

HSH's thoughts: 'I think it's time to go to sleep now.

'For the third time tonight'

*Settles dows, and goes to sleep for...

(Ooc: *counts fingers*)

er, for the many time*

Native Poser 05-13-2003 05:37 PM

Tattoo: *finds an empty bed (across the room from Vick) & lays down on it*.... *says quietly to Correl* Thank you for helping me...I need to go to sleep now..I'll talk to you in the morning...Goodnight.. *yawns & falls asleep*

Vick: *mumbles & wakes up for a second, but goes back to sleep*

Reptile 05-14-2003 05:17 PM

*Joe walks to #7 Slig

Joe: So sir! *stands up straight* any mudokons not behaving cause i'll break their puny skulls

*he smacks his hand with a baton which he stole from Forder*

*he looks at the security screens*

Joe: Hey sir!!! those mudokons are sleeping, *pretends to roll up his sleeve* wait till i get there.....

dripik 05-14-2003 05:31 PM

*#7 Slig wakes up again and he's getting angry*

#7 Slig: "Enough of this! No smacking! No beating! Just sleeping now! Go to your beds pronto, or I'll shot you in your empty head! Hear what I say? S-L-E-E-P-I-N-G! Good night!"

*gets back to bad*

#7 Slig's Thoughts: "Gee, I was a bit mean to those new Sligs. They wanna work already, but it's still night. I hope they will choose a bed and go sleep."

*falls asleep*



ooc: here's a little instruction, Reptile. Your Sligs and #7 are in the Rest Room, like everybody else in the factory. And the tired staff of the factory need to sleep. Get it now? I hope... :D

Reptile 05-14-2003 05:46 PM

((ooc: sorry, i do)

Joe: But but, in my last job i worked on nightshift, thats Forders excuse, he sleeps all the time! Sir please! Can i guard the factory im use to nightshift anywayz


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*wakes up

Forder: where the hell am i?

Forders mind: Your in Rupture Farms dimwit remember!?

Forder: oh yeah, i remember

*goes back to sleep*

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*Veesh is leaning against the railings in the stockyards opening and closing his eyes

Veesh: awake.......sleep.......awake........sleep, damn this is hard

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*Zip scratches his head*

Zip: Now where are the beds??

Zip: Soulstorm machine!!!!!

*Zip drinks his guts out*

dripik 05-15-2003 01:13 PM

ooc: reptile, please read the whole story, because everybody can learn from it who wants to join. I only know a Drink! machine in the Cafeteria where you can get a bottle of water. :D


#7 Slig: "OK, Joe, I agree. You can guard or do whatever you want in the factory, and you can rest when we work. OK?"

*yawns*

#7 Slig's Thoughts: "I want to sleep!"

Reptile 05-15-2003 07:43 PM

Joe: (grrr, figgin terror!) yes sir!

Joe: dear odd, this is so boring i wonder why this place re-opened, *walks up to a meat grinder and laughs* i remember this guy Obi, hahaha, what a jackass he was, wonder where he is, the sore loser, *looks at a wall* hmmmm, *lifts up a few posters, money? this place is full of suprises*puts a silencer on his rifle*
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Forder: nightime means sleepy time

Forders mind: you do it all the time!

Forder: *scratches his head* oh yeah

*goes to sleep anyway*

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*Zip goes up to the machine*

Zip: hehehehehehe, what!? water!?

*sneaks through the corriders looking for bedrooms,

Zip: bedrooms this way *see's Veesh*

Zip: *gulp *hides behind wall*

Veesh: hmmmm, lets see bedrooms this way

Zip: hes away *phew, goes to the bedroom,

Zip: *whispers* slog?

*climbs in the same bed as Ammy but doesn't know*
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Veesh: found it

*#7 Slig is there*

Veesh: back here again

*Veesh sleeps on the floor in #7 Slig's room

tybie_odd 05-15-2003 08:36 PM

Correl: *notices Tattoo's glance, then sees Vick*

Correl's Thoughts: Hmmm...this must be Traitor?

Correl: *watches Tattoo fall asleep* *whispers,* Sleep well, friend...


Vince: *wakes up from the new sligs' talking* --Mwah? *mumbles to himself* Oogh, one thing after another! It'll be daylight before any of us get some decent rest! *rolls over and tries to go back to sleep*


Adrian: *growls at Zip when he approaches the bed*


Smudge: *yawns* -Hey, I'll talk with you two in the morning, okay? I gotta get some shut-eye. 'Night! *moseys off to his bed and drops himself onto it, not bothering to get under the blanket or take his mask off*

Jayne: *asleep*

Native Poser 05-15-2003 11:37 PM

Tattoo: *alseep, hunting something in his dreams*

Vick: *wakes up* (ugh..Cant sleep...did I hear something growl?...) *shrugs & quietly gets up, leaving the rest room* (Not my fault if I was trained not to sleep for more than a few hours a night...) *wanders*

Reptile 05-16-2003 05:13 PM

Zip: oh jeez! *backs away, finds another bed*

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Joe: *whistle* whooops! sligs and pathetic scrubs are resting, i better have a little shuteye myself, zzzzzzzzz

*Forder sees joe sleeping*

Forder: my odd!!!! he's sleeping *drops down* zzzzzzzzzzzz

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Zip: *lays in his bed* (wonder if i'll like it here, that slog looked ok, well.....before it woke up, i wonder what...........no, maybe

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Joe: wakes up sees forder* what are u lookin at!? keep walkin'! go sleep!

Forder: ok

Joe: *leans against a lever* !!!!!, AAAAAH!!!!

*His pants are in the grinder and Joe is also messed up

Joe: uuuuuuuugh.....h-help...aah, *faints*

Native Poser 05-17-2003 07:14 AM

Tattoo: *still dreamming*

~~~~~~

Vick: *walks out to the animal pens & looks around* (stupid things...) *goes over to a scrab pen & watches the scrab inside it lunge at him--only to hit the wall between them* Haheh *runs a finger along the scar on his chest* One er' your kind did this... *looks at the scrab, whos getting back to it's feet & growling* Hey, ...Your...Sonv' a...Its you! Hah, Tattoo's gonna freak *snickers & goes back inside to the vending machine in the caffeteria, getting a bottle of water*

Reptile 05-17-2003 02:53 PM

*Forder see's Vick

Forder: Your up early for breakfast, 2 hours till sunrise and your up anyway, thats against the rules, i think

Zip: *wakes up* must be morning! breakfast time

Joe: *still in the grinder* (where-oh, ) HELP!!!!

*Veesh wakes up*

Veesh: Oh morning time, whats that? sir its morning, i hear someone

Native Poser 05-17-2003 06:36 PM

Tattoo's whole body suddenly tenses up in his sleep. He opens his eyes & quickly sits up. Tattoo looks around quietlly, wipping cold sweat from his forehead. Something he'd seen in his dream had disturbed him..
Tattoo: *relaxes* (no...she couldn't have...but what if..) ..... *sighs & lays back down, but doesn't go back to sleep*

~~~~

Vick: *belches as he turns around to see Forder* Kid, I've been trained to sleep & eat less. I came from a military base down in Scrabania. *drinks the whole bottle of water in one gulp* I've got things to do..Catch ya later *streches & leaves--walking back outside* (ha...peace & quiet...) *leans against the wall, watching the sun come up*

Seargentbig 05-18-2003 01:51 AM

HSH: *wakes up*
'Odd, how can anyone get some decent sleep around here?'
*Sees the sun*
'Oww! Well, its morning.'
*looks around, sees Vick*
'What is he doing up so early?'

Reptile 05-18-2003 11:50 AM

Forder: yeah sure *looks around* ummmm, *grabs a scrab leg* yummmy
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Joe: Is anyone helping me?

Native Poser 05-18-2003 07:30 PM

Tattoo sits up again, he cant sleep. He gets out of bed & leaves the rest room. Tattoo wanders until he comes across a slig who's apearently stuck in a grinder.
Tattoo: Odd! *runs over & yanks the slig out of the grinder--though its a bit too late for Tattoo to save the slig's pants* ...sigh.. *runs off before the slig has a chance to see who he is* (I...I saved a slig....again...haha..) *returns to the rest room & lays back down*

Vick is outside, watching the sun & smoking. He looks at one of the paramites in the cages--who seems to be looking at him.
Vick: (whats up with that one?...Lookn' at me funny..) *stretches & gets rid of his cig*

The Red Muse 05-19-2003 11:14 AM

Take note:
 
I'm leaving for a while. I'd be happy if someone would take care of Jammer, RM and Ammy, while I am gone.

http://www.oddworldforums.net/forums...&threadid=8003

It is all explained in that thread.

I'll see ya soon!

Luv ya all!

-The Red Muse

Latamire_Munch 05-19-2003 03:24 PM

((ooc- sorry ive been gone, been busy lately. I guess I'll take Ammy if no one else minds, Ill take good care of her. Ill post later, gtg))

tybie_odd 05-19-2003 04:53 PM

((ooc:

TRM, if you read this, I'm really sorry for what you're going through right now. I know how it feels, 'cause I've been there too. My thouhgts and prayers will be with you. God bless.))

Reptile 05-19-2003 06:43 PM

(ooc: me too, i read about it couple of pages back, im so sorry)

dripik 05-20-2003 05:03 PM

ooc: I'm sorry too, TRM. The others before me told everything, anyways get well soon.


THE NEXT DAY


*Arnie wakes up, and yawns*

Arnie: "Gee, I needed that. I feel better now and I'm full with energy! Hey, hey, Otto! Wake up!"

Otto: "Huh, what? Oh, it's morning. Work time."

*they go down to the Rest Room*

*Arnie looks inside*

Arnie: "Everybody is sleeping inside. We should leave them there to sleep some more."

Otto: "So, what's your idea for today? I'm sure you have something in your mind."

Arnie: "Well, yes. Do you remember when I said on the Board Meeting that we are going to build some towers around Rupture Farms."

Otto: "Yes. And I suppose you're going to choose the 'woodcutters' from the employement today."

Arnie: "Of course. We need some wood to build a guard tower."

Otto: "Why don't you ask someone who knows how to build real guard towers, like in Slig Barracks?"

Arnie: "Money. Money is what we haven't got much. It's easier this way."

Otto: "Easier, but harder. Do you think that the workers are going to like cutting trees down and bring them here and build a tower?"

Arnie: "I hope. But when it's ready, we will have great security. And it's fun to be up in the tower, don't you think?"

Otto: "Beats me."

Reptile 05-20-2003 08:07 PM

Forder: *yawn* (morning, whos the boss here?)

VvVvVvVvVvVvvvvVVvv

Joe: Gotta get to the executive office. *climbs out of his pants and crawls around* this is so embarrassing, what if a mudokon sees me. *goes on

tybie_odd 05-20-2003 08:23 PM

Vince: *snoring*

Adrian: *asleep*

Correl: *asleep*

Smudge: *twists around in his sleep, mumbles a little, wakes up* ...Mmm? Oh, morning already! Gah... *sits up and stretches* Whew...long day yesterday. *yawns*

Jayne: *wakes up from Smudge's talking, looks over and sees him getting up*

Smudge: *makes his bed and puts his baton into its holster*

Jayne: *moans and rolls over, still tired*

Smudge: *leaves the Rest Room and goes to his post to guard*

Seargentbig 05-21-2003 10:41 AM

Halije: *Yawns*
"Hey, where is everyone?"
*Looks around Executive rest room*
"Ah, they must have left"
*Gets up and leaves the Executive rest room"

Native Poser 05-22-2003 06:19 AM

((Aw Muse, I'm sorry :( Hope we'll see ya again soon!))

Tattoo slowly opens an eye, watching Smudge leave. He looks around the room at the other mudokons.
Tattoo: (I am a slave now....) *sighs & closes his eyes again* (..Very well then...) *sits up in bed--hidding his didgeridoo under it-- & meditates*

~~~~

Vick is still leaning on the wall, thinking quietly to himeself when he feels his stomach rumble.
Vick: huh? *puts a hands to his gut* ...Where d'ya get breakfast around here? *stretches & goes back inside*

Seargentbig 05-22-2003 10:16 AM

Halije:'now, where was that cafeteria?'
*sees sign reading: Cafeteria -->
"Ah"
*Heads off in direction*

(Occ: New character. Please?
Name: Exalmex
Gender: Male
Age: 10
Species: Half scrab, half paramite
Personality: Kind, hates industrialists
Description: Paramite lower body, but bigger, scrab torso, Shykull Arms, scrab neck, paramite head, the colour of a scrab, a scar resembling a scrab on his chest, and a slig mask attached to hus head.
Items: Web bag, slig mask, paramite web necklace.
Bio: Read my fan fic: Exalmex

Reptile 05-22-2003 04:52 PM

*Forder is running down the corridor bumping into Smudge*

Forder: hey you little creep! watch where your goin!

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Joe: *still crawling*

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Zip: zzzzzzzzzzzz

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Veesh: *in the cafeteria*

dripik 05-22-2003 06:17 PM

*#7 Slig wakes up*

#7 Slig: "Finally, I had a little rest. I don't see the new Sligs around here. I suppose they went out to explore the factory before I woke up. Anyways, I'll explore the Cafeteria now. I'm soo hungry."

*grabs his mask and and puts it on*

#7 Slig: "Hey, something's wrong... Oh!"

*turns the mask on*

#7 Slig: "Now, it's better. I can see now."

*runs to the Cafeteria*

#7 Slig: "Hmm... Nobody is here. Well, I don't need anybody to feed myself, like Otto does."

*grabs a tray*

*Otto is standing in the door of Cafeteria with Arnie*

Otto: "What do I need, #7 Slig?"

*#7 Slig drops the tray*

#7 Slig: "Whooaa... Gee, you scared me! I thought no one is here."

Arnie: "Until now. Please, grab some Scrab Legs and some water for us."

#7 Slig: "OK, sir."

*grabs two trays, and puts Scrab Legs and two bottles of water on them, then brings them to the executives*

#7 Slig: "Here you go."

Arnie: "Thanks."

Otto: "Yeah, yeah... same here."

#7 Slig: "Humph... I think someone got up with his left arm this morning."

Otto: "Hey! Oh, whatever... I'm a bit tired to yell. What's your plan, for today, #7?"

#7 Slig: "I think I'll bring the security for a 'Rifle Range Exercise', I think. You know, targeting on objects and stuff."

Arnie: "Don't forget about the guard towers what I told about in the Board Meeting."

#7 Slig: "Oh, yes. That's another thing."

*bites from the Scrab Leg*

Native Poser 05-22-2003 07:16 PM

Vick: *finds his ay to the cafeteria* (Mmm, breakfast) *Picks up a tray, grabbing a couple scrab legs & some water* (smells good) *takes a seat at an unoccupied table & starts eating*

~~~~~

Tattoo: *meditating*