Groll:"I'll help you, Stivik, once my equipment arrives. We might be able to get something done between the two of us."

OOC: I might bring in another character on the train, but I need to get their backstory sorted, which is partly why I'm waiting so long for the train. ;)

IC:
After leaving the two sligs, Sefon started looking for something to do. He started thinking, maybe that slig's right, there doesn't seem to be much organization here. But I can't let him know I feel that way.

He came to the grinding area. It was still a mess, obviously either nobody had seen it or they just hadn't bothered doing anything. He looked around to make sure nobody was watching, then lifted his hand and started clearing the debris with his powers, just standing in one spot but moving his hand. He wasn't quite sure what to do with anything yet, so he just shifted all the bits of junk into a pile.

ooc: hey may i join in or is it to late an there is one other thing my rp charater is a grubb shipped all over oddworld for slave purposes untill he arives here at rupture farms so.......dont reject me ! :(

OOC:Of course you can join! a couple of rules:

one liners are not allowed. multiple one liners will ge you out of this wonderul rpg.
BE CREATIVE!

All you need to do is post this Grubbs background and begin RPing

ps: no NPCS (NON PLAYABLE CHARACTERS)

name: runt

speacies: grubb

apearance: short stubby an.......blue with deep red eyes this grubb stands out a mile off
but remains unotesed due to his size he wears a gold pendant around his neck he has had all his life as for his clothes worker clothes are now what he wears
species: Frayda Evryting.((grubb)

age: unknown

Occupation: cleaner / worker

Personality:a generally freindly lil guy but is easly scared but once befreinded can help out in anyway he sees possible

hates: being poked prodded anything that moves fast or makes loud noises
guns an lack of water an crates

loves: water slimy fish serenity an any chance at freedom

backstory: bought an sold as a slave rut was shipped from place to
place since he could remember most of his life he spent in a small crate with a few holes
in the roof but a slight change acoured one day when he was droppped off at a new factory filled with
"wonder full things" he was told by a deep voice outside his box just before it was smashed open for him
to see himself as he now was presented with a mop an bucket soon after as was told to "work"......

Right! you arrive by train.

ooc:yup :D

IC: "Err Snipe, are you sure you're gonna be okay on your own? i'm gonna try and get to the boss. i really wanna get a job. and it's gettin stuffy in here." Char says to Snipe. Then he calls over to Sev." i'm going out for a bit. get a job, and check out packaging" THen he rushes out, absolutely no idea where he's going.

OOC: A bit like that, Runt.

*as he gets his first glimps of this new enviroment runt tilts his head to one side before touching the cold hard floor an emmiting a small sigh as he regain posture he emmited a small* "huh ?" *looking behind him from were he had arived from*

2nd character!

Name: Squib
Species: Grubb
age: Unknown
Job: Scrubber
Personality: Lonely. he only has one friend, and that's Runt.
Appearence: Has bright blue eyes and rosy cheeks which make him look cute
Sex: male.

ooc: woot ! another grubb me myself i love the speicies there like lil primative muds only sqeakyer

occ: you here ???

OOC: Welcome to W@RF, grubb_runt! Have a good time, and... please, use punctuation marks and capitals where needed, just for the sake if it being clearer. Your char's profile seems to be OK.

And another thing. It seems that you get along well with MGWM, and with others in the future, I belive, but don't post too much. One or two posts a day, or everybody will get confused and all.

I'm not going to be here for a week again. Travelling and stuff. I belive that will be another two pages to read through.

*runt turned back around to continue on humming as he walked his feet emmitted a small sqashy noise agaist the floor he looked over at a bucket an smiled jumping into the air* "water !" *he gleefully ran to it looking into his reflection in the water he smiled as a tear rolled off his cheeck*

Squib: Squib got out of the train and saw Runt. " Hey Runt, how you doin!" He squealed.

*Runt turned around and waved franticly*heya squib look water !!!*he smiled before slowly walking over to squib "whats is that !! *he sqeaked hiding behind squib pointign at a mudokon as runt started shaking wildly* i dont like it its evil !

" errr Runt, i think that's what the call a... moo-doe..dok_un. a mudokon. Be careful, they can possess ya, lets see what its like here.

*Runt raised a eyebrow an watched carfully "ooooooooooh" *before turning to squib* "lets go !" *he quikly ste of down a hall looking at a leaver gettin a urge to pull it* "um....nah i wont... hey squib ! over here !"

Squib comes a- runnin. " what is it? ooooh, what a pretty lever. lets see what it does. i better be careful though, it might be dangerous." Squib pulls the lever.

*runt looked around before ducking and covering as the ribs of a large animal dropped from semmngly nowere and landed behind them almost crushing runt* "ok we dotn pull any more levers !............ unless it gives food out"

" sorry Runt, now lets see if we can find where we are" Squib said. they suddenly saw a shadow up ahead with four legs. it was Char.

Char: Char spotted two little Grubbs up ahead, and walked over to them.
" so you must have just gotten here. i gotta job for ya. go down to packaging, look around and tell me what it's like. i'll give ya some Moohla! now go on, get outta here, i'm busy"

*runt noddded and quikly bounded off through the halls passsing a few muds who pointed an laughed as he enterd packaging an looked back to try an find squib* yo squib hurry up ! not that moolah matters to me but wanna impress boss man " (( ooc: ok what speicies is your other charaters we may encounter))

OOC: grubb_runt, using random characters like those Mudokons in your last post is not allowed. You might not want to use them in the future.

For other character's species, I'd recommend checking them out in pages of this part. There's detail about every character.

And again, please don't sit here all day, all night. I've been away for 2 hours, and there's a new page already. Make long, detailed posts once or twice a day, not these short ones which fill pages and pages, and people won't take the effort to read them (except me, of course, because I have to keep up with the story :D ).

ooc: ok :( wow i seem to be messing up alot :(

Dripik is right though, I usualy only skim over the pages and only read the posts of people who I know can propperly RP and have a character that actualy makes a contribution to the RPG. If I see someone post 20 posts on one page, I skim right over them all, ignoring any actions directed to me in the process.

occ: ok i jsut wont post anymore considering my char dosnt make a contribution to the RPG or i cant rp properly aparently i only wanted to join in but i get bitched at for somthign i didt even mean :(:(:(:(:( id happly do larger posts if somone would rp with me ......anybody

occ: i apologuise for that last post i sounded like a jerk ok guys il stick to your rules il have to

OOC: I didn't mean any offence either. If you spend some time here and see how RPing is going, you'll be fine.

And we are all going to RP with you, because you joined and we cannot ignore a fellow character. It's not real time, that's all. If you come and check if there's any progress with the story, you can post and see how the others will react, if they can. There are times when there are no new posts for days.

OK, I'm off now. See you next week.

ahhhhh i see thanks dripik

OOC: Grubb, my other character, Char is a slig overseer.

*runt walked the darker depth or rupture farms by himself keeping with him a bucket containing a cloth an water for scrubbing as he sat down to start of cleaning his decks he mutterd to himself looking at a few scratch marks upon the floor it was 4 straight lines then a dash through them he shrugged and continued his work amung the heavy machinery an packaging there echo'd a short sqeaky "hello ?" *and no one replyed so he natrualy got worried an began to set of running through the boards once more*

Char: Where can i find the boss? i just need a job and i'm really screwed.

Char walked down endless corridors and winding passageways until he came to a lift. " Well, it always seems dat teh boss is always on teh top floor" Char said to him self as he got in it and pressed a button.

OOC:Sorry I haven't been posting everyone. I've been sick for a week and I was trying to rest. Anyways:

Sev walked back up from the boiler room and wiped some sweat off of him.

Sev:"Man, that was hard work. Hopefully the boilers will stay plugged. I don't want anyone getting lung problems from the steam. Anyways, I might as well look for Char."

Sev started to walk around. He was about to pass the train station until he saw two weird looking things which Sev had never encountered before. Sev pulled out his gun.

Sev:"You two! FREEZE!"

*runt raised a eyebrow an an stopped in his tracks emmitign a loud sqeak as he shook wildly on the spot looking around for what made the noise before seeing him and raising his hands in the air as he tryed to avoid eye contact before finaly letting out a "work ?" "um....i....work...ere now" *he nodded franticly beggining to sweat*

" Yea, we got here about twenty minutes ago. If you're looking for a four legged slig, he sai he was going to the top floor in a lift" Squib piped up.

Sev lowered his gun.

Sev:"Alright, but don't go blowing up the Boss or boilers ya hear? And thanks for the info. Don't piss off anyone and I wont get pissed. Welcom to Rupture Farms :)!"



Sev then walked off looking for Char on the upper level.

*runt nodded franticly an ran off looking for anyone as he continued higher up the levels carying his bucket and cloth as e cleaned spots he passed on the way before sitting down upon a deck* "why am i here ?" *he shook his head focusing on his "new job" he new he would be here till death an then some but he tryed to nto let that get to him*

Carl:"Tucker, if you fire that gun.."
Tucker:"What!?! What will ya do? You can't do anything, you'll be DEAD!!!
Carl:"Arnie, you gotta help me, don't let me die....I am a friend."

Carl was only trying to perswad Arnie into helping him.

Carl:"Please?"

Char had been explorign for ages and still no boss. "Jeez, why'd dey hafta make dis place so big? i gotta take a nap." and he sat down to rest.

*grubb headed out to the stockyards shaking with fear at the sight of it* "i dont like !" *he yellled scaprering in the other direction untill coming to a door he heard sounds on the other side so he decided to look through before sneaking in to see what was in there*

Squib had to crouch to see through the little hole that led down to some moving barrels. suddenly his hands and feet slipped and he was falling...down down until he landed with a thump, right next to Runt. " oooh, my head. he squeaked"