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Narvac treded through the gunk of the swamp this sucks sh** i thought they said this would be a great job! oh aperntly they have'nt treked through thes fu**'n sh** i have. he got to the plat form"finely" he said. the voicer flicked on he approched it when suddnly....






(ok some one jump in and do something!)
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ooc: my character is a mutated flyin' paramite.. o.k wid' yuz?


Di swooped through the trees, searching for the tiny woodland creatures that lived in the disgusting,sticky quagmire that lay on the edge of his forest.Di snarled to himself about all these creatures that kept on wandering into his forest.His teeth bared, he cast back his mind to the last one.4 hours of fighting resulted in only a dead creature and a huge gash in his stomach.No one looking at him could of guessed what this mutated wreak,a husk of his former self was really thinking....around 30 years ago his home had been destroyed by the vykers.He the sole suvivor had been taken and used as a lab rat..He shook the thought out of his head when he spotted something wading through the mud.He dived down to investigate..(pleeease let this be o.k..)
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Kaelin was asleep on duty again (well its is really exiting watching muds scrub isn't it)
he opened an eye and scanned across his time table....oh looky it was his turn for night watch within a few mins.
he groaned he was a highly trained mercinary dammit he shouldn't be doing this! though he had been employed here for a week to guard the place as eerie things had been reported such as aqua monsters coming from the edges of the muddy lakes and taking live sligs into the stuff drowned and then eaten. Kaelin didn't belive a word of it but he never quit a job. he made his way across onto a looming tree branch overlooking the marsh and sat down. he saw some thing sliding through the sludge he aimed his rifle at it and waited for it to move closer.

Marquark swam through the marsh easily his webbed hands alowed him to move quickly through the stuff. it was his turn to hunt today so because of the shortage of fish from the pollution recently he would have to kill a worker slig or a mudo
so he made his way to the surface and scanned the area.


(ooc: Kaelin is a mercinary slig and Marquark...well...you will find out )
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hidden in the trees, Di waited for the thing to move.Out of the corner of his eyes, he saw something twitch in the stinking quagmire.He tensed automaticly then relaxed himself.But in a crevice of his mind, he had a shadow of dought, and perhaps maybay an inkling of fear.Everyone in the forest had heard the myths of the monsters that were said to live here, and, fearless and hardenerd as he was,a shadow of fear lived in his heart as he knew well,all too well that it didn't do to not expect the unexpected.. as he saw the stange twitch again he curled up and bared his teeth and something stared back..

ooc my other chracter is an ordinary paramite
zak moved through the trees silently, his tribe following.A scout had told him he had seen a slig round the swamp and, hating the things, he decided to move over there and find out what the fuss was about.. As he neared the swamp, a sudden movement in the trees made him look up and even though he only saw the red eyes for a second, he didn't need to look twice to know who they belonged to.
it was di. suddenly his attention was diverted by a member of his tribe galloping madly towards what looked like a slig.he roared out'no!' but he knew it was too late...
(I do not mind if the owner of this slig does what ever they want to the daft running paramite. anything.anything at all.)

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(IC: )kaelin looked up only to see a paramite he sighed and shot it before it got any closer..."besides" he thought. " paramites taste ok and well one spare bullet will do no harm...except to the paramite..." he chuckeld to himself and picked up the dead paramite and slung it over a plank of wood.

Marquark yawned and looked around his blue speckeld skin shone in the dappled light and his amber eyes glinted...
"MARQUARK!!!! GET OFF YOUR A.S.S NOW!!!!!!" Marquark sighed it was brutani the young aggresive teen of his tribe.
"You catch them guys like a gabbit in a tuttu damit! I'll show you how the food chain works!"
Brutani looked up into the trees and grinned "Now watch the expert!"
He pulled himself to shore and used his front paws to grapple on the tree, he swiftly climmed up and focused on the paramites...who cares if they noticed him.... he could easily slam down his paw and squash the lot.
Marquark dived back into the water and swam into the lagoon, Detrainain was on guard holding spiked rods in each paw.
"goodaye Maar." he smiled, Detrainain was very strong and had fought many times against aposing Wassersligs each time winning the only medal he had was a large scar across his right eye.

(Ha created a whole comminity here in one little swamp!)
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Di froze,waiting in his tree. he had just seen(or thought he had seen)a tribe of paramites at his feet.zak saw di and snarled
his fear was instantly replaced by a burning hatred. why did they stalk him? behind his anger he felt again his pain at being cast away and a gleam of sadness that he would never be the same again. why? why had he been chosen for this damning fate,he asked himself,but no anser forthcame.he saw himself again flying away with zaks last words he screamed at him as he flew rebounding in his head "you are not the same as us.you will never be the same,mutant.you may flee,but i will find you.i will find you....
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brutani climbed into the tree
di saw something move in a nearby tree and found himself face to face with something big and very scary.his mucles bunched up as he stared into those eyes in the split second before he launched himself off the tree.he saw zak and his paramites clambering up the tree the thing was in.even though the thing was oviously very warrior like and strong,he wondered whether he could stand up tgo all the things alone.alone something in him made him launch back towards the tree,ready to fight the 100 odd paramites that lurked below.he hoped that thing wouldn't hurt him...all di thought was "I cannot leave him alone against them"...

zak saw his tribe member shot down by a slig.he was about to order a charge when he heard a rustle in the bushes.
di flew into the next tree along
assuming that di was in the tree, he barked at his tribe to get up that tree and kill whatever was up there.all of his 100 odd tribe members swarmed around the tree,and all of them were yelping for the blood of anything that was up there...
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The paramites charged in at a tremendous force....
Brutani was being attacked, its now or never. A geat light appeared from the bushes, all the paramites turned round. A defaning loud scrab cry sounded like a hrn and echoes round the forest. The paramites heard hundreds of little feet.......
They were surrounded by hat looked like baby scrabs.
A massive scrab, with a golden shell walked out from behind a tree. "LEAVE......OR PREPARE TO DIE" it cried, "FOR I AM THE ALMIGHTY ANNUGRISTEIN. LEVE OR FOREVER BE DAMNED"
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di swerved round in mid air. a huge golden scrab was standing there making some sort of challenge to the paramites.as he spoke, the tribe split into two sections.100 to one side,100 to another. di made a split second decision and zoomed into the tree with the thing in,which was staring at the paramites below with something that could only be descibed as dismay.Di charged into a paramite rearing up at the thing in the tree.the paramite gouged some flesh out of his back as he knocked him off the branch. the blood poured down, giving him the appearance of an evil daemon from beneth the earth. as he scrached and bit his way towards the creature, he despratly hoped that it wouldn't attack him..
zak saw the scrab and for a split second his heart almost failed.he split the tribe into two and galloped at the head of one half towards the scrab.he stopped four metres away and roared "we will not leave. this is our homeland and our only rest. you are the one who should leave because YOU WILL BE DAMNED!GET OUT!" the paramites all roared together, a dreadful, un earthly sound and another tribe leaped out of the trees. and snarled meansingly as zak said "We do not wish to fight."
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Brutani growled....He was confused one minute he was ready for a good paramite snack then he was surrounded by Millions of those weird killer red things...Scrabs or something and was begining to loose his balance...
"AHH DAMN!" cried kaelin as he saw a load of movment in a tree at the opposite end off the swamp, he opened a small wooden door showing some diffrent types of rifles he pulled out some chopper pants and screwed them on then fitted a rifle across the top. he flew across the marsh to reach the tree only to be dragged into the mud by something he look down only for his eyes to meet a large red set, he yelped and tried to get away but the things grip was too strong.It had dark grey skin flippers instead of arms and long back legs and extrodinaryHorns on the top of its massive skull it was about 4 times as big as Kaelin. The creature began to drag kaelin downwards into the mud. Kaelin screamed and started yanking the screws on the pants trying to get them off but it was no use he would be dead in seconds. Its teeth started cushining the pants.... oil spilled out off them and onto the mud. Red splashed across kaelins face He yelped then looked down only to see that the blood wasn't his. The monster was spitting out mouthfuls off the stuff, kaelin was now coverd he saw a large muscled creature with dark blue skin at the beasts side repeatedly smashing two large weapons onto
the beasts side until it stoped moving. Kaelin was still stuck in the things teeth so the smaller blue creature swam up to him...it looked like a large slig but had large webbed ears andd fin on its back those features were amber. It looked at Kaelin then lifted up a sharp well crafted knife with a red gem on the hilt. it grabbed kaelins arm and started scaring the skin then wiped away the blood kaelin looked at his arm his eyes widend to see that themarks left were jet black it looked like some weird tribal markings or something. Thecreature smashed against kaelins pants which then slid off "be more careful next time" the creature whisperd smiling then threw kaelin his rifle and a pair of slig legs "where theheck did he get them?" thought kaelin " Thats from one of your comrades we ate byethe way" said the creature which then dived into the swamp water. Oh god please sayhe is joking! thought Kaelin walking to shore in his newly fitted legs he stared back to see the beast that was killed bbut there was no trace except a pool of blood left.Kaelin shook his head and made his way to the comotion without noticing that he now was a dark red slig with a few splasshes of his normal colour.

(ooc: Shoot my fingers need bandeging now )

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di's eyes widended as brutani started to lose his balence and hundreds of scrabs milled about beneth him.the paramites charging along the branch straight for the creature were getting closer and they didn't look very merciful.a shriek came from behind him as the thing toppled and fell. witout thinkind di
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scooped him up just as it was about to hit the scrab swarms on the floor. hanging on tight, he could feel tendons tearing but still he struggled on as the paramites on the floor bouded towards them . he roared in pain as blood dribbled from his mouth and legs. finally after what seemed an age to di ,they reached the next tree. di collapsed onto a branch , sobbing in pain as the blood contiued to flow from his mouth and nose from the pure effort he put into breathing. he could sence the shocked things eyes on him and a gnawing question in his mind, why did i save him????? finally he looked up with bloodshot eyes at it and said "
i am di " every word was a painful struggle and his breath came short and sharp. "what...is..your..name?"di whispered. as he spoke a consistent scatching thought in his mind grew and di saw a paramite climbing the tree towards them. even as it came he could see it was one of the paramites who had chased them, a great,sturdy brute with a red glint in his eye and it was charging towards them. as it grew closer and closer di knew he had to do something and he dragged vhimself into the path of it when was just about to get the thing and was knocked flying out of the tree into the water. he looked up and saw the paramite had been knocked out of the tree and the scrabs covered it and devoured it. deprived of energy and weak from loss of blood di floated in the water, his blood curling through the water...
a single thought that was probbably going to torment di forever spoke within his head that seemed his,but not his,perhaps from a time before he was mutated by the vykers. it was a cold clear powerful voice and it said one thing.
"murderer "
he heard again zaks voice say "mutant. you will never be the same again.NEVER. "
di shrieked in pain and pity for the wreak he had become . his harsh unearthly cry rebounded in his head like the swirling waters around him.if he still had front legs he would have clutched his face as his mind fell apart. again he floated in his living torture when the waters moved beneth him. some thing was coming up,coming now.......

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The scrab transformed into a mudocon looking thing....it bounded towards the shrieking thing and grabbed. he carried it off. the thing put no effor into getting away, but soon the mudocon got to a destroyed village and said, "If You were not worthy I would never take you here. This wa the place of my people, you are the first ever non mudocon to step on the sacred land......."
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Di's breath came in short,sharp irregualar pants.He gazed up at the mudokons blurry,golden form as his vision slipped in and out of focus as the herbs it had put on his wounds smoked and stung. Why it had rescued him Di had no idea but he knew the creature was somehow special and Di certainly owed him his life. The mudokon stood looking at him. They seemed to be in some kind of village.Di took a deep, slow breath and tasted the smells that floated in the air.Destruction, a taint of industralism and his blood tainted the smell of the herbs, wood and a relaxing yet ,somehow threatinig smell that warned of great power that Di had felt when the creature had rescued him from that awful place.The rain semmed to have stopped, the air was refreshing but cold.The pain from the old wound on his belly that he had gained in a fight against a hated enemy had lessend,it was now only a dull ache that hurt when he moved. Di looked up at his resquer with his sad,dull red eyes,and gazed up into his eyes,his moonshine, yellow eyes. "I am Di" he said, in an slow, grating voice." who are you?" Again Di remembred the powerful voice that had told him no other non mudokon had come here and he waited, with the still,wet air for it's reply.
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Brutani swung around knocking a couple of the paramites against the tree with his tail.
Where hade tha weird one gone...the one that had helped him? Still staring he noticied the red water, swallowing hard he dived in then scanned the surface...He couldn't see the thing...'Di?' He murmed trying t see whether he got an answr...it didn't come..."DI!!!" he called his voice trembling in anger, his eyes turned from amber to red, and a black marking crossed his face. He had no idea what was happening but he was blinded with rage he found that he was becoming less sleek and much mre muscled. Then he dived with such speed that he even shocked himself, He felt a great power washing over him. Swimming to the shore he smashed a near by slig into a tree on the far side and scanned the shoe line Di wasn't there.....He must have escaped he thought. Maybe he will come back soon.
Smash!!!!!! Brutani yelped in pain as blood seeped from the back of his head. collapsing to the flor he blacked out.

Kaelin groaned and heaved the massive creature onto the stretcher which then slowly wentupwards into the Vykker blimp. Kaelin rubbed his arms, the branch he had used to knock it out had weighed a ton!
Well that was done.... Kaelin flew into the shore of the marsh, coughing he looked up there was a massive dark green creature, sorta like a big bro but had large wings and proper legs, Its eyes were terrifing, dark red with black slits for pupils it didn't look remotly industrial. It looked down at Kaelin and then grabbed the branch as if it were a twig and smahed it cross kaelins bottom half then turning launched itself upwards to the labs.
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Before Answering He smelled the air, nothing had folled them he was sure of hat...But far off he could smell Destruction.......HIS DESTRUCTION!!!! He pushed some herbs into the wound, causing Di to scream and writhe in Agony. He answered Dis Questioned after long Uncomftable Silence,"Befor you here my name a thousand stars must be bloted out of the sky. But one thing You must Know, I am the creator and the destruction of you Di. But I am not your gardiun!!!! I shall give you a few minutes to walk round my village, but then you must go. They are looking at you Di. I am now despised.....Quickly Look if you must, I cannot bear thier eyes!"
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"So what are you gonna do with 'im eh? I mean He's ugly enough so why make him..."
"Look sir this operation would be LOT easier if you didn't have all that blasted smoke around us, so please be so kind as to go to your quartres....."
"Fine, fine but insult me again and i'll shoot you!"
"And how would you do that sir? stand on your head and grab the gun with your shoes?"
"Shut it docter." With that the seconed voice seemed to leave mumbling as it went.
Brutani opened his eyes and looked around, he was inside some sort of tube filled with greenish water two Vykkers were standing at the oppesite side of the room experimenting on some fuzzles....Somebody help! thought Brutani he had notr much time left.
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He teleported to Vykkers labs leaving Di behind..........
He tore downa wall, but all he saw was row afetr row of experiments, he smashed through locks on the cages. Hes near, he knew it.
He better know what I'm oing for him, he thought, If I fail I will die and he later will perish. He bounded through a wall into a room full of sligs.
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Malan heard a smash and looked up then yelled a weird Mud was hitting his sligs across the room. "Ahh CRAP! Come Shirik Help me get out out of hear!" Just then Malan was grabbed by his neck it was a large greenish thing! He wailed...........
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He ran into the room flinging sligs across he floor hitting anything, he stopped in his tracks.....some big thing was holding his friend! He didn't know what it was........
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Di listened as the great thing spoke, and his words struck a chord deep within his heart. He knew he must go, so he powred up his jet engines and flew into the night. He had not looked back, because the beasts voice had filled him with a kind of fear, and as he left, he felt something leave his mind, like a cloud from the sun.He had no idea where he was going and he found himself where Brutani had been. As he stared around, tense, he notised a few drops of blood on the trees and the ground.A kind of dread crept apon him, and as he sniffed, he was in no dought it was Brutani's.He had also caught a faint smell of something else, something threatening.He froze as he identified it, and his lips curled back in a evil looking snarl as he recognised it.
VYKER
Also, there was a smell of slig close by.As he follwed it,it grew stronger and he found it by the marsh.A overwhelming desire to harm it ,kill it or maim it found him, but he restrained it and pounced on it as it began to awake. It had oviously be hurt by something bashing it hard, and it seemed to have blacked out.
Pure black rage and hatred filled him as he got hold of it and shook it roughly."WHERE DID THY TAKE BRUTANI?"He spat."THAT BIG CREATURE WITH THE AMBER EYES! WHERE HAVE THEY TAKEN HIM!"He roared, with a flood of rage taking his soul, the black paramite looked up and roared his black rage and pain to the night in the way only the damned or raging can.He glared down at the quaking thing with crimson, mercyless eyes...

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(:fuzzgrin: I'm baaaaaaaack )

Kaelin tried to swipe the queer paramite of him but his strenght was gone so he could barely lift his arm...
"L....Lab... Labs! brought creature to labs...Vykkers...got it..." Kaelin managed to murmer
Kaelin lifted his head in horror to see his crumpled bottom half.
" Am I gonna die?" he whispered then looked at himself and shok his head.
"I can help you Kid!" He said with a slight grin as he began to regain some stength.
"I doubt i'll live long now, well at least not if I am left like dis but if you can help me kid, I can help you."
He looked carefully at Di.
"There are some Aqua creatures in there like dat one in de labs they got powers see...one helped me before and if they help me again I got a plan how to er...save ya buddy, I erm ain't expectin you to trust me an all but I am not particulally wanting to die so here is the plan..................."


Raziel stood at tne front of the table with the glukkon in his grasp and then lung it over his back walking forward he picked up some bandages he wrapped some around the Glukks gob as it was shouting itself to kingdom come and then its arms (hence th way a glukk walks) as he was getting irrated by all the kicking so once the glukk was delt with he made his way through the room towards the door heading towards (DUN DUN DUN!!!) The vykkers. (still carring the glukk by the way)
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As Di flew towards vykers labs, aided by the directions of the thing he was carriying in his back grippers he began to wonder whether it was too late. What had happened to the creature he had saved? Was he safe? Might he even be ... Dead? The slig he was carrying certainly didn't travel well; he had thrown up sevral times already. Di hadn't liked the idea of asking the aqua creatures for help, for all he knew they might kill him. Eventully he made a deal with the slig. He would tell Di where vyker labs was from here,and Di would take him there to be fixed or whatever.
The slig had seemed badly hurt and Di had considred that it might die before it could tell him where the labs were, but so far it had seemed to hold itself together. Di had to resist a desprite urge inside to eat it or hurt it even more, but the thought of what the vykers might do to the one he had saved put him off his appetite after a while. But deep inside him Di had a fear that the vykers might have some way of tracking him or hypnotising him or something, because they were the reason Di had been turned ...
Di suddenly stopped to think. Had they turned him against him self? Was that their plan? Suddenly Di's chain of thought was broken by a smell that pentrated his sences like a knife through mud. He locked onto the smell and there was no dought : it was vyker. The slig he was holding could oviously smell it too; he felt it relax and it said "Well, there it is ! Whatya waitin' for?" Di looked up and saw the floating torture saucer.

He was here again after 30 long years.
He had returned.

Di dropped off the slig inside behind some crates and sniffed like a slog, nose down.
Instantly a barrage of sounds and smells hit him and made him bare his teeth like some demon nightmare from long,long ago.
Apart from vyker, slig and some small furry creature (a fuzzle) Di grasped a small smell of swamp, tree and mud that could only be
the very thing he was searching for. He flew up to a rafter just in time to avoid a party of sligs running after something ( Dodge, my chracter in another add on) and thought " I must be more careful." He traced the smell and burst in to a room containing tons of sligs all seemingly swiped by something. He shot into the air just in time to avoid a hail of bullets and caught a glimpse of something carrying a fat gagged glukkon over it's shoulder...
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Raziel staring up saw a flash of something his eyes flashed indigo for a split seconed ahh... a paramite... bt wait a sec... it was flying. he growled it must have been some vykker spy so there is only one thing todo... he set out his wings and shot forwards after the paramite, it would warn the vykkers...
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Di looked down and saw the thing glare at him for a second, before it spread massive wings and shot straight at him. Di hurtled to the side quickly, just in time to avoid it and shouted
"What are you doing? "..

(Dodge is a slig in big trouble.He helped a rebel mudokon in a murder atempt on a vyker called Skrape and is now an outlaw. Currently he's surronded by an army of sligs and a very peed off vyker. The good thing is he's wearing a jetpack.The bad thing is he can't control it...)

Dodge shot up just in time to avoid a hail of shot from the sligs they were surronded by, and jerkily tried to control his jetpack.
"Arrghh damn!" He yelled as he hurtled through a door.

As Di avoided a swipe from the things impressive claws, A screaming slig hurtled through a doorway and straight into Di.
The force of the blow sent Di hurtling into a pipe that bent backwards and burst, showering Di in some kind of green fluid.
What instantly caught Di's attention was a smell of the woods and marsh that could only belong to one thing in this demented hellhole:the very creature he was searching for.The sligs below, which had just regained their balance from being swiped by something , when a great big shower of thee fluid came hurtling down straight into their faces.A cofused slig shot up into the air, half blinded by the slop, and the shot sped towards Raizel..
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Raziel felt a sharp pain in his wing as a bullet blasted a hole the it. he dropped sharply and hit the ground full pelt, landing on all fours he got up dropping the glukkon and charging at the slig swiping open there jugulars and chests.

Brutani dropped to the floor staring out...what the hell had happend here? He lifted himself in time to dodge a slig which had bee thrown across the room so he quickly slid over to a cabinet for cover.
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Di climbed on to the pipe, the place where he had hit it thudding painfully.He stared down at the chaotic scene in shock . The massive thing that had tried to kill him was down there, with looked like a bullet hole in its wing.The slig that had hurtled into him was still zooming round the room in a out of control jetpack screaming his head off. As Di scanned the scene, he saw a long kind of serpintine blue tail with a flipper at the end that Di recognised at once as belonging to the thing he had saved. Di lauched himself downwards from the pipe and as he peered round the closet, saw a huge creature with glaring red eyes and a black marking across his face. It turned, saw him and said "Di?"
with a confused look on his face.Di thought "Could it be him? But he's diffrent!"
Brutani saw the look on his face and said "I'm Brutani..You helped me."
Di said "We better get out of here..
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Raziel turned his head spotting some water creature and the paramite. Why were they not attacking him?
He then felt a hard blow in his stomach turning back he noticed that he was being continuely barged by an idot slig whom was hitting him with a vykker. Raziel slightly laughed then hit the vykker across the head making it limpy, the vykker was coverd with green slimey stuff. The slig grinned and cried "fresh vykkers who wants some?" Raziel grinned and shook the sligs hand "The names Raziel who are you then?"

(ooc: MWHAAAAHAHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!! cool eh )
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When Dodge had seen the vyker, he could not resist the temptation of picking it up whilst it could'nt see because of the shower of goo from above, and using it as stick on the big monster in the middle of the room.To his relief it hadn't attacked him, and just swiped the vyker across the head with a huge taloned paw.Dodge answered the question Raziel had asked and said "My name's Dodge. Glad ta meet ya Raziel." And stuck his paw into Raziels outsretched hand and shook it.Suddenly a huge crowd of sligs burst into the room, attracted by all the noise. Dodge took off with his jetpack, then had an idea. He made his way to one of the pipes among the rafters and gave it a good hard yank...
Di looked around and saw the thing that had attacked him face the crowd of sligs that had burst into the room. Powerful as it was, Di knew that maybe even that couldn't prevent it from being overcome. Di turned round and said to Brutani "Should we help him?" Brutani said ......

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