Oddworld Forums > Zulag Three > Fan Corner > Non-Oddworld Art & Literature


 
Thread Tools
 
  #61  
05-25-2006, 01:04 AM
Matriar's Avatar
Matriar
Outlaw Semi Auto
 
: Jan 2006
: Switzerland
: 2,489
Rep Power: 20
Matriar  (141)Matriar  (141)
Drunk Mark

By the way: My sabertooth skeleton became finally marked at school...
The mark wasn't perfect but very good. The teacher also said: I did very well!
__________________
--~:}>:~¦My gallery on DeviantART¦~:<{:~--


Last edited by Matriar; 05-26-2006 at 07:47 AM..
Reply With Quote
  #62  
05-25-2006, 02:15 AM
Dark Elite_H2's Avatar
Dark Elite_H2
Outlaw Sniper
 
: Apr 2005
: WYYYARRGwop...Sounds fun, huh?
: 1,625
Rep Power: 21
Dark Elite_H2  (10)

:
By the way: My sabertooth skeleton became finally marked at school (did I enunciate this sentence right?)
The mark wasn't perfect but very good. The teacher also said: I did very well!
Are ya kiddin'!?
It looks superb!
Maybe you should put a lil' skin on the next rough draft, so we can see a real sabre tooth.
__________________
The Stranger's girl


My arts page...check it out XP

My main page ^^

Reply With Quote
  #63  
05-25-2006, 02:21 AM
Matriar's Avatar
Matriar
Outlaw Semi Auto
 
: Jan 2006
: Switzerland
: 2,489
Rep Power: 20
Matriar  (141)Matriar  (141)

:
Maybe you should put a lil' skin on the next rough draft, so we can see a real sabre tooth.
Aha! That's why the picture didn't get a perfect mark! I knew I forgot something...skin! LOL
__________________
--~:}>:~¦My gallery on DeviantART¦~:<{:~--

Reply With Quote
  #64  
05-25-2006, 12:48 PM
Matriar's Avatar
Matriar
Outlaw Semi Auto
 
: Jan 2006
: Switzerland
: 2,489
Rep Power: 20
Matriar  (141)Matriar  (141)

Well...
here are some sketches of a little guy I invented some months ago.
Enjoy:

Sketch 1 (There it was the first time I drew it)

And sketch 2 (I finished this picture today)
Attached Thumbnails
Click image for larger version

Name:	smirking little thing.jpg
Views:	146
Size:	26.2 
ID:	4528   Click image for larger version

Name:	I'm so cute!.jpg
Views:	152
Size:	64.4 
ID:	4529  
__________________
--~:}>:~¦My gallery on DeviantART¦~:<{:~--

Reply With Quote
  #65  
05-25-2006, 02:13 PM
Dark Elite_H2's Avatar
Dark Elite_H2
Outlaw Sniper
 
: Apr 2005
: WYYYARRGwop...Sounds fun, huh?
: 1,625
Rep Power: 21
Dark Elite_H2  (10)

O.o
Looks like a gremlin. XD
__________________
The Stranger's girl


My arts page...check it out XP

My main page ^^

Reply With Quote
  #66  
05-30-2006, 06:36 AM
Matriar's Avatar
Matriar
Outlaw Semi Auto
 
: Jan 2006
: Switzerland
: 2,489
Rep Power: 20
Matriar  (141)Matriar  (141)

Do you mean, it looks cute or it looks ugly like a gremlin ?

(What's the difference between ugly and cute to me? To me, oddworld's strangest person?

"Yikes that nasty thing is so... so... it's sooo cute
!!!)


I think the cutest pose is the one when it is cross-legged.
__________________
--~:}>:~¦My gallery on DeviantART¦~:<{:~--

Reply With Quote
  #67  
06-01-2006, 12:29 PM
Dark Elite_H2's Avatar
Dark Elite_H2
Outlaw Sniper
 
: Apr 2005
: WYYYARRGwop...Sounds fun, huh?
: 1,625
Rep Power: 21
Dark Elite_H2  (10)

Umm...the cute gremlin?
I mean...it's evil, but it's cute too. ^.^
It's evil, but in a cute way XD
__________________
The Stranger's girl


My arts page...check it out XP

My main page ^^

Reply With Quote
  #68  
06-09-2006, 06:59 AM
Matriar's Avatar
Matriar
Outlaw Semi Auto
 
: Jan 2006
: Switzerland
: 2,489
Rep Power: 20
Matriar  (141)Matriar  (141)

I drew this female plant-like creature at school. (Wow, was I bored...)


http://oddworldforums.net/attachment...1&d=1149865045
What do you think?
Attached Thumbnails
Click image for larger version

Name:	daughter nature.jpg
Views:	142
Size:	313.3 
ID:	4603  
__________________
--~:}>:~¦My gallery on DeviantART¦~:<{:~--


Last edited by Matriar; 06-10-2006 at 01:45 AM..
Reply With Quote
  #69  
06-15-2006, 02:36 AM
E'l Scrabino's Avatar
E'l Scrabino
Sewer Sleg
 
: May 2006
: Melbourne, Australia.
: 726
Blog Entries: 2
Rep Power: 19
E'l Scrabino  (94)

NICE! Branch thingy for tail + bark for body = Awesome stuffs!
__________________
Statikk HDM is t3h pantz
The Albino Scrab, the ancient RPG.

Reply With Quote
  #70  
06-15-2006, 11:04 AM
Matriar's Avatar
Matriar
Outlaw Semi Auto
 
: Jan 2006
: Switzerland
: 2,489
Rep Power: 20
Matriar  (141)Matriar  (141)

Thank you, E'l Scrabino!

I once made my own signature symbol for my pictures some days ago. My symbol looks like:
I think, I will always put it on the corner of my future pics.


The next picture I did is right here. Uuhm... only the guys who like tragedies should have a look at this one. Trust me. Maybe it's too bitter for ya. Well, here it is:
----------------

EDIT: Huh? Where's my pic? That sucks...

http://www.oddworldforums.net/attach...1&d=1150451169

Did it work this time? I don't know.
My computer drives my crazy.
Attached Thumbnails
Click image for larger version

Name:	Help me....jpg
Views:	141
Size:	87.7 
ID:	4645  
Attached Images
 
__________________
--~:}>:~¦My gallery on DeviantART¦~:<{:~--


Last edited by Matriar; 06-16-2006 at 01:51 AM..
Reply With Quote
  #71  
06-23-2006, 06:38 AM
Matriar's Avatar
Matriar
Outlaw Semi Auto
 
: Jan 2006
: Switzerland
: 2,489
Rep Power: 20
Matriar  (141)Matriar  (141)

Hey. Comments are welcome. Any feedbacks? My picture was too creepy for you, I guess.
Well, it doesn't make any difference to me. However...
__________________
--~:}>:~¦My gallery on DeviantART¦~:<{:~--

Reply With Quote
  #72  
06-25-2006, 12:23 AM
Matriar's Avatar
Matriar
Outlaw Semi Auto
 
: Jan 2006
: Switzerland
: 2,489
Rep Power: 20
Matriar  (141)Matriar  (141)

Another creepy one. I did this picture some weeks ago.
Attached Thumbnails
Click image for larger version

Name:	are you real my friend....jpg
Views:	156
Size:	334.0 
ID:	4698  
__________________
--~:}>:~¦My gallery on DeviantART¦~:<{:~--

Reply With Quote
  #73  
06-25-2006, 12:33 AM
Dusan's Avatar
Dusan
Spark Stunk
 
: May 2006
: Србиja
: 391
Rep Power: 0
Dusan  (10)

WOW
Reply With Quote
  #74  
06-25-2006, 03:57 AM
Matriar's Avatar
Matriar
Outlaw Semi Auto
 
: Jan 2006
: Switzerland
: 2,489
Rep Power: 20
Matriar  (141)Matriar  (141)

...thanks.

What do you mean with "" ?
__________________
--~:}>:~¦My gallery on DeviantART¦~:<{:~--


Last edited by Matriar; 06-25-2006 at 08:09 AM..
Reply With Quote
  #75  
06-29-2006, 04:39 PM
E'l Scrabino's Avatar
E'l Scrabino
Sewer Sleg
 
: May 2006
: Melbourne, Australia.
: 726
Blog Entries: 2
Rep Power: 19
E'l Scrabino  (94)

:
Thank you, E'l Scrabino!

I once made my own signature symbol for my pictures some days ago. My symbol looks like:
I think, I will always put it on the corner of my future pics.


The next picture I did is right here. Uuhm... only the guys who like tragedies should have a look at this one. Trust me. Maybe it's too bitter for ya. Well, here it is:
----------------

EDIT: Huh? Where's my pic? That sucks...

http://www.oddworldforums.net/attach...1&d=1150451169

Did it work this time? I don't know.
My computer drives my crazy.
Is it me or is that Jenna?
__________________
Statikk HDM is t3h pantz
The Albino Scrab, the ancient RPG.

Reply With Quote
  #76  
06-30-2006, 12:04 AM
Matriar's Avatar
Matriar
Outlaw Semi Auto
 
: Jan 2006
: Switzerland
: 2,489
Rep Power: 20
Matriar  (141)Matriar  (141)

Actually, it is Jennadelle. But she's... just... you know...
that's a too long story.

Don't you like the picture?
__________________
--~:}>:~¦My gallery on DeviantART¦~:<{:~--

Reply With Quote
  #77  
06-30-2006, 12:05 AM
E'l Scrabino's Avatar
E'l Scrabino
Sewer Sleg
 
: May 2006
: Melbourne, Australia.
: 726
Blog Entries: 2
Rep Power: 19
E'l Scrabino  (94)

Yes, i loved it! And i'm 'ere all night, i'd like to listen to the story! (cureeosoty compels me to delve deeper)
__________________
Statikk HDM is t3h pantz
The Albino Scrab, the ancient RPG.

Reply With Quote
  #78  
06-30-2006, 12:14 AM
Matriar's Avatar
Matriar
Outlaw Semi Auto
 
: Jan 2006
: Switzerland
: 2,489
Rep Power: 20
Matriar  (141)Matriar  (141)

I'm glad.
I started to work on a fan fiction story about Jennadelle some weeks ago. The only little problem is to translate it in english. But I guess the first chapter is finished in one or two weeks...
Well, in this fan fiction you can read the "too long story". I ask for your patience
__________________
--~:}>:~¦My gallery on DeviantART¦~:<{:~--

Reply With Quote
  #79  
06-30-2006, 12:15 AM
E'l Scrabino's Avatar
E'l Scrabino
Sewer Sleg
 
: May 2006
: Melbourne, Australia.
: 726
Blog Entries: 2
Rep Power: 19
E'l Scrabino  (94)

here you go *hands of patience*
__________________
Statikk HDM is t3h pantz
The Albino Scrab, the ancient RPG.

Reply With Quote
  #80  
06-30-2006, 12:21 AM
Matriar's Avatar
Matriar
Outlaw Semi Auto
 
: Jan 2006
: Switzerland
: 2,489
Rep Power: 20
Matriar  (141)Matriar  (141)

here you go *hands-off grin*
__________________
--~:}>:~¦My gallery on DeviantART¦~:<{:~--

Reply With Quote
  #81  
06-30-2006, 01:26 AM
Dancing Steef's Avatar
Dancing Steef
Clakker Relic Miner
 
: Mar 2005
: Sweden
: 843
Rep Power: 20
Dancing Steef  (10)

Wow these pictures are so awesome!!! the one in the prison and the one with Jenna are my favs Good work!


~DS~

Reply With Quote
  #82  
06-30-2006, 05:43 PM
Kimon
Outlaw Mortar
 
: Jan 2005
: Brooklyn
: 1,937
Blog Entries: 20
Rep Power: 21
Kimon  (518)Kimon  (518)Kimon  (518)Kimon  (518)Kimon  (518)Kimon  (518)

I know pretty much all you hear on these forums is just flattery, which is fun to get, but if you don't get a serious criticism, you're never going to get better, so here I go:

I have a problem with a lot of the hands and feet in your creature drawings, they seem out of proportion with the rest of the creatures, and the feet in particular face at odd angles when they touch the ground. Like the front legs of the horse-like thing in your latest 'creepy' drawing. The angles at which the feet are pointing are all the same, save for the front left, which seems to be protruding forward. If that creature were 3-D, the legs would all be different lengths and they'd be in a very uncomfortable position, not at all suited for carrying the weight of the other creature.

My advice would be to draw skeletal stick figures, and not skeletal in the traditional sense, with bones and that sorts of thing, but just very, very basic mannequin-like people/creatures with all the proper joints and proportions. I'm no teacher, so looking up a quick tutorial online would be a great course of action, and from those sorts of drawing excersizes you'd learn a lot about posture and how weight is carried, which will significantly improve your sketches.

And remember, I wouldn't write all this up if I didn't think you had any skill.
__________________

Reply With Quote
  #83  
07-01-2006, 09:14 AM
Matriar's Avatar
Matriar
Outlaw Semi Auto
 
: Jan 2006
: Switzerland
: 2,489
Rep Power: 20
Matriar  (141)Matriar  (141)

I'm not that good in drawing yet. I already know this But I'm working on it. There are mistakes I made. And maybe I'll do some more little mistakes in future.
Well, it isn't so important to me.

I only started to draw to show the feeling I had in my life and the ones I'm going to have all the time. That's more important to me. Drawing is just more than a piece of paper and some pencils...

:
I have a problem with a lot of the hands and feet in your creature drawings, they seem out of proportion with the rest of the creatures, and the feet in particular face at odd angles when they touch the ground.
If the feet are having a oblique angle then turn the whole picture some degrees . Maybe it works.
__________________
--~:}>:~¦My gallery on DeviantART¦~:<{:~--


Last edited by Matriar; 07-01-2006 at 09:26 AM..
Reply With Quote
  #84  
07-02-2006, 05:40 AM
Kimon
Outlaw Mortar
 
: Jan 2005
: Brooklyn
: 1,937
Blog Entries: 20
Rep Power: 21
Kimon  (518)Kimon  (518)Kimon  (518)Kimon  (518)Kimon  (518)Kimon  (518)

:
I only started to draw to show the feeling I had in my life and the ones I'm going to have all the time. That's more important to me. Drawing is just more than a piece of paper and some pencils...
Drawing is thousands of times more than paper and pencils. Unfortunately, you have to be adept with such things to make your drawings easy to understand and meaningful, let alont aesthetically pleasing. I was just under the impression that you wanted to get better, maybe to convey your feelings more clearly. Guess notski.

:
If the feet are having a oblique angle then turn the whole picture some degrees . Maybe it works.
'Fraid not, little lady.

I still implore that you try out my suggestions, because you do have talent, and I'd love to see you use it to the fullest.
__________________

Reply With Quote
  #85  
07-02-2006, 06:24 AM
Matriar's Avatar
Matriar
Outlaw Semi Auto
 
: Jan 2006
: Switzerland
: 2,489
Rep Power: 20
Matriar  (141)Matriar  (141)

Yes. Sure, I'm going to try out your suggestions.

You know, I just had to tell you what drawing means to me.
__________________
--~:}>:~¦My gallery on DeviantART¦~:<{:~--

Reply With Quote
  #86  
07-02-2006, 06:47 AM
Dusan's Avatar
Dusan
Spark Stunk
 
: May 2006
: Србиja
: 391
Rep Power: 0
Dusan  (10)

I like Kimmon's comments. I would like to post somthing like that, but my "english" is so bad and you probably wouldn't understand a thing (used sad that to me, is he right?), and I will look like a fool to rest of a people (but i'm not, I just like to use long sentences) .

:
I only started to draw to show the feeling I had in my life and the ones I'm going to have all the time.
I respect that!
Reply With Quote
  #87  
07-02-2006, 06:58 AM
Matriar's Avatar
Matriar
Outlaw Semi Auto
 
: Jan 2006
: Switzerland
: 2,489
Rep Power: 20
Matriar  (141)Matriar  (141)

Hey lad, english isn't my mother-tongue too .
...I mean I needed to look up some words to understand what Kimon wanted to say me . But I understood every messages of you because your words are not that difficult to me...!
I just want to say you're not the only one who feels helpless sometimes...
__________________
--~:}>:~¦My gallery on DeviantART¦~:<{:~--

Reply With Quote
  #88  
07-02-2006, 07:08 AM
Dusan's Avatar
Dusan
Spark Stunk
 
: May 2006
: Србиja
: 391
Rep Power: 0
Dusan  (10)

What is hard to understand in "great" or "very good" .
What is your "mother-tongue"?
Reply With Quote
  #89  
07-02-2006, 07:36 AM
Matriar's Avatar
Matriar
Outlaw Semi Auto
 
: Jan 2006
: Switzerland
: 2,489
Rep Power: 20
Matriar  (141)Matriar  (141)

...german.
But I'm perfect in spoken and written in this language after all. Who other than me can this?

(I'm just a dork who wants to be something special... so dismiss me.)
__________________
--~:}>:~¦My gallery on DeviantART¦~:<{:~--

Reply With Quote
  #90  
07-09-2006, 06:51 PM
Kimon
Outlaw Mortar
 
: Jan 2005
: Brooklyn
: 1,937
Blog Entries: 20
Rep Power: 21
Kimon  (518)Kimon  (518)Kimon  (518)Kimon  (518)Kimon  (518)Kimon  (518)

Stranger's Maid, I'm surprised. You're quite articulate for someone of another tongue. Well-done. And Dusan, I'm sure you'll get better with practice. Just keep on trying.


Awww, Fan Corner brings out the nice in me.
__________________

Reply With Quote


Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 








 
 
- Oddworld Forums - -