Romantic Poems -

89da11 · #**121** 03-18-2003, 05:40 PM

Wow, thanks Alpha! Didn't think it was that good, but yeah, thanks..

~Danielle...

Kaimana · #**122** 03-18-2003, 06:32 PM

Danielle, undiscribable poems. Very touching and heart felt. I love them. Keep writing from your heart

-Kai

89da11 · #**123** 03-18-2003, 06:40 PM

Thank you Kai.. Glad you liked them..

~Danielle...

miss oddchick · #**124** 03-19-2003, 02:45 PM

Grrrrrrr... Danielle, stop writing poems that are better than mine!!!! Grrrrr!!!!! How can I stop you? How, how? I know... *Grabs a sledghammer and creeps up behind Danielle*

Seriously, though, you poems are really good. Liked that last one, very nice. *looks to see Kai's name on a post*. O_O Oh hello Kai!!! You have returned!!! Nice to see you again....after so long. So, Mr Military, got any poems of your own inventions? After all, you did say to me that you're good at 'em

.

Oddchick

P.S. By the way, how come Kai and ferill comment on Danielle's poems, but not my own? *sniff* Oh nevermind....I'll just go on....unnoticed... *sniff*

Kaimana · #**125** 03-19-2003, 02:59 PM

Awww, actually I did read your poems Chicky. Simply forgot to respond to them

Sorry. Your poems are very good too. I see you have progressed in your writings. It's getting allot more mature everytime I read them. Keep up the good work

The Red Muse · #**126** 03-22-2003, 06:06 AM

*sobs*

...All your poems are soo great!! Makes me wanna cry, you know...

Life is unfair, isn't it. I can't even rhyme and you people are masters in the making...

Oh well, nobody is perfect.

(A small side-note: I've written only one poem during my short life... It was my literature homework :P. It was simply labelled as "Yö" (a.k.a Night). My teacher prob laughed when she read it...)

miss oddchick · #**127** 03-23-2003, 06:19 AM

Awwww, thanx Red Muse

. I bet you can write poems.

:

(A small side-note: I've written only one poem during my short life... It was my literature homework :P. It was simply labelled as "Yö" (a.k.a Night). My teacher prob laughed when she read it...)

Don't say that, I bet it was really good

.

Oddchick

89da11 · #**128** 03-26-2003, 09:06 AM

Complete.

I'm so lucky to have met you
You're the sunshine in my life
And the reason I dream at night
I look to the heavens above
And give thanks to my God
Who brought you into my life
You've turned my skies to blue
For no matter what they may be
I stop and say I'm so lucky
Because God must have known
We were made for each other
To fill the emptiness of our lives

____________________________

Ummm, another poem, you might have guessed that..

Danielle...

Kaimana · #**129** 03-27-2003, 12:26 AM

Hey Danz, nice poem. Very thoughtful. The poem suits it's title very well. Good job.

89da11 · #**130** 03-27-2003, 02:45 AM

Thanks Kai,
*skips off giggling to think of another poem*

Danielle...

Fez · #**131** 03-27-2003, 02:15 PM

okay then odd...you poem were incredibly amazing and deserve an award of some kind... better?

Kaimana · #**132** 03-27-2003, 02:34 PM

Heres a poem, I wrote for Danz, it has no title...

We've seen our good days
And we've seen our bad
Sometimes happy feelings
Others sad
What keeps us going
Where is the fire that glows that holy beam of light
It's in my heart, yours and mine
It's our source of eternal might
My heart sings out to yours saying
Love me until the day that life fades
Life will fade
But that light
That I see in your eyes
Will burn there always
The north star may die
But our love will be with us
For all time...

-Kai

89da11 · #**133** 03-27-2003, 02:39 PM

Wow, Kai, great poem...

hehe.. I loved the poem, it was very touching..

-Danielle

Fez · #**134** 03-27-2003, 02:42 PM

wow kai! i didnt know we could get such a good poem from the guy who made me do 50 push ups 'cause of a joke...

89da11 · #**135** 04-01-2003, 01:12 PM

Here is another poem...

The Last Letter

The time goes by slowly,
In the night I was so lonely,
Between the autumn leaves,
I said, "I want to leave."

After I wrote my last letter,
Wishing to you a good life,
Inside me bad weather,
Telling you goodbye.

Behing this smiley mask,
I saw the ugly truth,
Question in my mind I will ask.
Why I loved you?

Be happy forever,
Now you broke another heart,
This is my last letter.,
And the end will start.

_________________________

I don't know why I wrote that, but yeah.. Please tell me what you think of it.

Danielle...

Mojo · #**136** 04-01-2003, 05:17 PM

... (sound of being speechless)

wow....

deep... meaningful...

Ever considered to write a book with poems???

Kaimana · #**137** 04-02-2003, 12:24 AM

Or better yet, a book with all the poems on this thread.

Red · #**138** 04-12-2003, 12:22 PM

wow sorry i know this might be like spamming but i thought of a poem....

Goodbye

Someday i'll disapear
And Fade from minds
Ony thing left of me
Is the river I cried
I know you tried to be kind
But I'm still dying inside
I wished you had just left me there
I wish I hadn't even tried
Can't think of you now
Without crying out loud
If I said I was alright
I would be lying
But I have no where to turn now
Left out in the cold
You laugh at me
Leaving me alone
I'm scared in this world i was thrown
I don't understand what i feel
Or how it isn't real
Nothing will go right
as i run from your mind
As i leave now
Try not to cry
I know you won't
You never said it but i will....
Good bye

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How rubbish is that! oh well

89da11 · #**139** 04-14-2003, 06:25 AM

That wasn't rubbish... Actually is was pretty good.

Danielle...

Fez · #**140** 04-14-2003, 08:15 AM

mann! why is every one so negative here! these are good poems, just live with it!