dawww 'The Snowqueen' is great, i liked it a lot back when i was a child it brings up memories :3 another one of my fav authors back then was Astrid Lindgren x3
the little passage you wrote is sad but very well written, i like the descriptions a lot ^^
I also like your story with the Swan girl, I'm not sure why but the ending when she turns into a swan and flies into the sky is my favorite part it's sad but beautiful for an ending <3
your writing is beautiful. So keep it up, even if not many people might be around to notice that... ok?