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04-28-2011, 07:12 AM
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It was, thanks
What ever happened to your dA, Sci? Also, yay! Great to see you!

I've edited a few lines and words in the poem. I need to replace 'undulating' though, and I'm not quite happy with the last stanza...

welcome! n__n

lol you follow my dA? 8D -I abandonned it.
...And moved to a new account there but except for the animation nothing cool is up so I didn't put a new link in my signature... yet xD
But it's great to see you write something again .D

hmm... undulating... i would phrase that differently somehow -this line and the following- though the way they are now, they remind one of ocean waves... which is nice. ^^
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