Blogs
 


  Oddworld Forums > Blogs > T-nex


Rate this Entry

Some very deep, dark, heartfel poems

Posted 10-28-2011 at 10:35 AM by T-nex
Well.... I have a lot on my mind so I decided to express my feelings through poetry.


The darkest darkness in my heart,
so corrupt, like the tears of pain.
I will die from the golden daggers
In my dark chest, darkneded by mud.
Dark, darker, darkest, darkestest.


Oh and I made another one too


One two the four,
I add some flour,
to my cake.
For it I shall bake.
It will be perfect without a flake.
five six seven eight,
I just gained some weight,
And I can't fit through the gate,
cos I'm so... bloated.
nine ten eleven,
I hibernate in my den.
In one out of seven.
Because I have seven dens.


Ok that was the second... Here's the last one. This truly expresses my feelings

Buttface, buttface on the wall,
Who's the smelliest of them all?
ALL OF YOU COS YOU ALL SMELL!!! >: (
Total Comments 7

Comments

StrangerEastwood's Avatar
1st poem: That is beautiful.
2nd poem: I like baked goods.
3rd poem: *sniffles* B-but I showered...
Posted 10-28-2011 at 11:08 AM by StrangerEastwood

Daxter King's Avatar
Crawling in my skin.
Posted 10-28-2011 at 11:32 AM by Daxter King

STM's Avatar
I didn't shower today. So yes, I smell a little.
Posted 10-28-2011 at 11:46 AM by STM

Dixanadu's Avatar
Chapter 2 plz
Posted 10-28-2011 at 11:52 AM by Dixanadu

Mac Sirloin's Avatar
The last one is about me.

I guarantee it.
Posted 10-28-2011 at 03:59 PM by Mac Sirloin

enchilado's Avatar
You're like a female Shakeſpeare.
Posted 10-30-2011 at 02:42 AM by enchilado

MeechMunchie's Avatar
You can shake my spear any day.
Posted 10-30-2011 at 02:35 PM by MeechMunchie

 

Recent Blog Entries by T-nex





 
 
- Oddworld Forums - -